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After reading a bit further into the story I think I can safely say that Draco will have absolutely no true friendships nor character relationship beyond Eva that I can say that is genuine, it's like if Draco and Eva just one day just leave earth with nobody else, they wouldn't have any qualms about it except some 10 second melancholy. Everybody is a dead fish in the perspective of the sociopathic mc. They also have no humanity at all which is fun for a while but gets stale when you realize you're not that edgy, but I can't fault you for that I suppose since it's awfully obvious this is "a dark novel." It's your novel I guess but it's a shame since this started off with so much potential. This isn't made in anger but disappointment. Also, Eva is a very stale character once you get past the cute obsession. Have a nice day. View More

Kotario: Yes, but it’s worse for me since I don’t earn squat from fast passes 😞.

Guild Wars
1 month ago

Zxaquis: I don't think Dongmei will get pregnant. For a few reason:
Ovulation lasts for around 2 day and that means the egg will be in the fallopian tube for only 2 day

Back when Dongmei first 'did it', that was her dangerous day meaning that MAYBE...MAYBE on that particular day was her ovulation.

Fast forward now, around a week has passed and her 'prime time' should has passed. It is impossible for her to get pregnant.

Unless of course that during her first time, she was in the 'repairing step'(or whatever it's name, I haven't studied 6th grade biology in a long time okay?) And that during this time was her 'prime time'.

Who knows what step or stage she is in now, all I know Piokilek could pull a fast one on us and she get pregnant thus allowing her grandparents to have grandkids.

And on that note boys and girls, ladies and gentlemen, I announce "LONG LIVE PIO! AND HIS MASS RELEASE!"

Chameleon: My True Face · C161
3 months ago
Get em' tiger View More

Piokilek: I wanted to write one more today but I'm going to the party to pick up girls. Your boy needs to get laid to make those good sex scenes original :D

Spirit Cultivation · C414
3 months ago

Piokilek: I wanted to write one more today but I'm going to the party to pick up girls. Your boy needs to get laid to make those good sex scenes original :D

Spirit Cultivation · C414
3 months ago
Actually nvm, the history of the type of novels this guy reads is just too girly, either he is gay or really just a female. Either way I don't take too kindly to anybody who can't maintain a standard degree of grammar. View More

Piokilek: Firstly, Calm down Milady. Even if a few girls attack Wuxing and try to fight for his attention, it doesnt mean its a harem novel.

Secondly, I never said It will be a harem novel but I also never said it will be a pure romance. I said there will be many twists and turns.

Thirdly, I don't like your tone. I am only nice cause you are a lady else I would already go off seeing your comment. If you want to drop, no one is stopping you but dont give me the attitude in my comment section. Thats one thing I hate. Its not a "fucking book" but a novel I spent half a year writing.

I respect all readers and I expect the same back.

Chameleon: My True Face · C157
4 months ago
Just to let you know, that guy you're messaging to is most likely a male, it's clearly indicated on his profile (symbol of a male), his profile pic might just be a ruse. So go ham if you wanna. P.s. a lot of your readers seems to like a harem story, I personally also wouldn't mind since I know how well you can handle a harem plot based on your other novel. View More

Piokilek: Firstly, Calm down Milady. Even if a few girls attack Wuxing and try to fight for his attention, it doesnt mean its a harem novel.

Secondly, I never said It will be a harem novel but I also never said it will be a pure romance. I said there will be many twists and turns.

Thirdly, I don't like your tone. I am only nice cause you are a lady else I would already go off seeing your comment. If you want to drop, no one is stopping you but dont give me the attitude in my comment section. Thats one thing I hate. Its not a "fucking book" but a novel I spent half a year writing.

I respect all readers and I expect the same back.

Chameleon: My True Face · C157
4 months ago
I'm always up for some weird love square, need more chapters, this is too addicting. Pio is the only author where I have no problem with the story, balanced in all areas, keep it up. View More
Chameleon: My True Face · C157
4 months ago
At a plot perspective, you can't logically let him fairly compete and struggle against another guild right? With all the stuff you pulled this early in the game, he's bound to have nobody to hold a candle to him in this game, I wouldn't be surprised if you can just invite a super power to stomp his enemies or greatly hinder them for a favor, like he forced a super power to just foot his bill. The ONLY fair option I can imagine is that some other entity somehow is able to defy the mc, is kinda bs. View More

Kotario: You’re forgetting that the Hidden Powers are not terrified of Draco in the least. It is only because that he is backed by Richmond that they’re hesitating.

Even with that, various hidden powers have plans to take him down using proper means.

Also, this is a game. There are rules for many various activities that only guilds can partake.

The novel is called Guild Wars after all. To think that guilds would be pointless in Guild Wars is a bit...

Everything Draco has gives him an unparalleled advantage, but it doesn’t make him omnipotent.

Guild Wars · C32
4 months ago
Ok... but here's the thing, the guild would require way more effort to nurture until it has even a semblance of benefit for the mc, he's interacting and stomping on secret forces that has power that he didn't even dare to imagine as the strongest guild leader in the past. If the guild is just some side investment, ok, at some point it could be something, but if he's focusing all his time and effort on it, it just isn't worth it. For example, in his past life he got slaughtered at the whim of someone without even knowing what happened, obviously being the best of the players is useless in the grand scheme of things. View More

Kotario: Because there is more to Boundless than you have yet seen.

If you’re born in a third world country, a person with a net worth of 30 million dollars seems like a god. Why continue to scramble for money? You have more than enough to stomp on your third world country home.

But to a billionaire holding 40 billion dollars, the 30 million holder is an ant he can squash at any time.

For the purpose of this analogy, you are the random third world citizen who knows very little of the world and feels that the 30 million holder has reached the top.

The 30 million holder is Draco, who is aware of where the true top lies in the world.

For the purpose of this analogy, a guild can be counted as an investment that would slowly grow his money until he reached 40 billion.

Guild Wars · C32
4 months ago
What's even the point of having a guild at this point? Revenue isn't obviously a problem, power isn't worth it considering the effort needed and the fact that who is the mc even going against that constitutes needing a guild? Just in the first two-ish weeks, the mc already has more influence and wealth than his 15 years of being the best, in fact, I don't see what goals you have that requires even continuing the game. The most logical decision is to focus completely on the real world aspect to combat LL and fight the lineages. In summary, how is building a guild gonna be beneficial? View More

Kotario: I don’t really plan on making my story too generic in the sense of always having the MC as an underdog against powerful foes, always having his family threatened, always offending young masters and having to run away afterwards.

I don’t know if the above was what you were referring to, but you won’t see these in my novel.

Guild Wars · C32
4 months ago
Dude, nobody cares how you like the story, you can share your thoughts but you’re hella annoying, everything you write is just you complaining about parts of the story. Most of us just wants to just chill and read as a hobby, I don’t want to even touch the comments anymore because you persist so much in commenting on EVERY single chapter, moreover being such a nuisance, a lot of your “criticisms” are just your personal preferences, the author even had to offer you spoils so you can shut the f*ck up. The author isn’t trying to write a New York’s best seller, he shouldn’t try to change just because of you, especially since he’s doing so good. I swear you’re going to be the reason the author stop writing. View More

Chibi_Senpai: I don’t even know what to say but I honestly didn’t like this plot development.
Everything sounds good on the surface but when you think deeper about it and think back to earlier chapters, it doesn’t add up.
The previous interactions with and behavior of the system directly contradicts its reveal as a little girl. It just makes me think the system was just made a little girl just to make things easier for Konrad as well as allow him to groom his own harem member.
Like I don’t even feel like listing all the contradictions and things that don’t make sense with this recent revelation because I feel the need to process it. It feels more like a revelation to fit the current plot rather than fit in with the previous chapters. It just feels inconsistent to be honest.
Don’t @ me unless you want to debate why you liked it and convince me I’m wrong, I’m over that go write your own novel bullshxt.

Profane Prince of Domination · C239
7 months ago
Pio, I’m sorry, but your projection needs to die, I don’t really have beef with him but f*ck him for no particular reason😾. View More
Spirit Cultivation · C310
7 months ago
I’ll hold you up to that, no loose ends 😏 View More

Devil_Paragon: What does it mean to forget? The word doesn't exist in my vocabulary. I only know shameless delays.

Profane Prince of Domination · C235
7 months ago
Hey pio, you going to kill your own projection in the novel? Hope so, he’s kinda like a prick 😩 View More

Piokilek: I will Edit the correct Chapter, same length on top of it in a bit after I'm done with it. Sorry for the problem. Come back later to read it when I reupload. You won't lose your SS.

Spirit Cultivation · C307
8 months ago

TheHoblit: lol who cares if your father doesn't agree. he totally failed to protect you, especially with that random bodyguard he hired off the street doing a **** job.

Spirit Cultivation · C302
8 months ago
I finished it, I’m not gonna spoil it but it’s a meh, super anticlimactic and really not that satisfying to end on. View More

Johnny10Toes: Good thing it’s almost over. I hope the ending is epic.

Advent of the Archmage · C659
8 months ago
Domination is clearly the most suitable path, I mean it’s even in the title, it all comes full circle baby. View More
Profane Prince of Domination · C210
8 months ago

Devil_Paragon: Mini Spoiler:
1) Blowing things up is a necessity for his plan. He isn't just emptying a treasury. He's seizing the country.

He seems to be pushing them against the wall because he really is.

2) The girl's future isn't along those lines. She's not treacherous, she's unwilling to die a worthless, wrongful death, just for the sake of feeding a petty monarch's wounded ego.

She's not just opportunistic, she's brave and determined. In her position, following Konrad's display, others would not have had the courage to request his help or grab his thigh.

She's disrespectful to the king because she knows respecting him will not save her neck.

Profane Prince of Domination · C199
8 months ago
I feel like the author is projecting a little here, like as my personal opinion I don’t like Emma Watson so this weird reverse girl fantasy thing is creeping me the **** out 🤢. View More
I have a Mansion in the Post-apocalyptic World · C764
8 months ago
Lol, they better not fuc 😟 View More
Profane Prince of Domination · C183
8 months ago
Whatever loser View More

Blackharleyquinn: Oh believe me I am. I have one child he's in college you're the stupid one. You comment with your racist bull**** and expect someone to what? Let that slide? It's my comment. FOH with that. This is the comment section. I can say whatever I want. Your whole opinion was hella racist. While you equated ghetto with black. I may have been "triggered"
And believe im.the nicest a "ghetto" black woman would have punched you after the first reply. You dont have to reply to me go about your day and my age and what I'm interested in isnt your concern.

Dragon King's Son-In-Law · C483
8 months ago
Then you’re not the “nicest,” in fact wanting to assault someone because of your stupid impulsiveness is testament to how NOT nice you are, your stupidity is exposing itself more and more “black woman,” I can totally see you pulling out the race card or remind everyone how you’re a “black woman” with 10 kids, like get your old as* off this site, it’s obviously not meant for middle aged people, almost everything here is for teenagers you weirdo. Don’t reply to this, I don’t want to be reminded of you ever again, narcissist and hypocrite. Can’t spell even when you’re middle aged how sad can you be. View More

Blackharleyquinn: I'm the nicest BLACK WOMAN you could ever meet but I swear I want to Sitoma punch you in the mouth right now

Dragon King's Son-In-Law · C483
8 months ago
But as somehow who doesn’t want to paint all faults but ignore some of the good traits, I’ll say some that I have believed myself that I have validated continuously over my life, such as Blacks having superior athletic over any other races, I mean look at the nba and nfl, blacks are super dominant in those sports. Also, they can be the most nicest people, although I have seen way more bums personally, and to expand on that point, I’ll state that I hate ghetto kids, they’re leaches of society and have no motivation to improve themselves or help others, I pity them though since a lot of them just have no father figure in their lives. I love and have all the respect for the honorable ones of the black community, I understand that it’s so easy to fall under the blinding group victim mindset so many have fallen to, and it’s great for them to have their own logical thinking 🙂. View More

Blackharleyquinn: Stfu he stereotyped Asians in a positive light how would you like it if almost every representation of you was negative. And I'm no child my child is 18. The whole point of the comment section is to voice opinions so what's it to you if and Blerd feels some type of way. And I'm from Brooklyn NY so I'll say it eat a dick

Dragon King's Son-In-Law · C483
8 months ago
How sophisticated and cultured you are, this is doing nothing but reinforcing the image you’re so desperately trying to cast away. Also, no, the author didn’t particularly stereotype Asians in a “positive light,” how is staying at home all day a good thing? Stereotypes don’t care how good or bad it is, if enough people witness the same thing over and over by the same group, it’ll be associated with that group, i.e it has an inkling of truth to every stereotype. If almost every representation of blacks are so bad, maybe it’s because of your culture 🤷‍♂️, start to shape up as a community instead of play the race card every time, because I personally hate people who play the victim but still embrace their problems and point fingers at others. Also, I think you’re mistaken, I didn’t say that you couldn’t share your views, it’s that you shouldn’t, because it’s dumb and annoying, and I’m gonna point it out, a right I have. P.s, why does almost every black person that’s being annoying socially are those with a bad picture of their face with horrible lighting and angle? Maybe a new stereotype that I’m developing, 🤔. View More

Blackharleyquinn: Stfu he stereotyped Asians in a positive light how would you like it if almost every representation of you was negative. And I'm no child my child is 18. The whole point of the comment section is to voice opinions so what's it to you if and Blerd feels some type of way. And I'm from Brooklyn NY so I'll say it eat a dick

Dragon King's Son-In-Law · C483
8 months ago

Hectorbeserk: Just change the clones to instead of being "seperate" from konrad to actual extentions of him meaning they all share on same mind and konrad is fully aware of what the clones are doing because he is the clones those are his actions there are one entity meaning that arent clones perse but parts of his body that were seperated from him and molded into new bodies kinda like he has a second dick but our stomachs dont churn because we know that second dick is also him/his the main reason that people are pissed is that you made it seam that the clones arent him but someone-else entirely

Profane Prince of Domination · C158
9 months ago
Idk about “intelligent” or “creative,” definitely imaginative though, his grammar is absolutely downright awful, the characters has no personality and the mc literally cannot control his lust no matter how SS self control he has, he is basically a beta male letting all his wife do the decisions and he just has the responsibility of f*cking like a horny gopher in heat. View More

giancarlo812: loving this novel's story and world , wish i could go there myself , the author is obviously very creative , imaginative and intelligent to have created this fine work of art , hopefully he will continue to write this legendary masterpiece

+18 - Harem Palace Sect's System
9 months ago
How can you even read any of this? There is a point when you need a little post-nut clarity and think, holy sh*t, this is borderline unreadable. Reviews like this is what feeds his inability to progress his grammar, shame on your pervert in your moms basement a*s. View More

Lolisforthewin: a great jewel, a beauty created by God.
a fantasy of all otaku this novel is a description of my fantasia.
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+18 - Harem Palace Sect's System
9 months ago

UncleOddball: ...
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Dude. My eyes are aching.
I was intrigued by that one bad grammar review and nasty responses to it, and a truckload if 5* reviews...
So, I've decided to give it a spin, but, in all honesty, looks like machine translation that was left unatended. Just the first chapter gangbanged my poor eyes without a lube.

I don't have anything against people trying their hand on the art of writing, but I think you should at the very least respect your readers with some quality. As it seems, a lot of people are trying to support your story, why don't you ask someone to proofread and/or edit it for you? The 1* comes from writing quality, the rest is at it too just to not falsely boost the value, as I think the story itsekf can't be so vad if people git yoyr back.

+18 - Harem Palace Sect's System
9 months ago
Dude, every other category is actually quite bad too, like I have never seen a novel where it legitimately needs a 1 star in almost every category, and this novel proved me wrong. There is no category for good h e n t a I and the novel itself is just a bad read. The only category that probably don’t deserve one star is stability which still doesn’t ratify how sh*tty the writing is. View More

DarkKnight32: Bro are you retarded writing quality is not the only characteristic of a book i would give him 3 stars on that bur this guy did not even read his novel and gave him a 1 star there is still alot of other categories that he needs to vote but he cant do it if he does not even read it.

+18 - Harem Palace Sect's System
9 months ago
Dude, every other category is actually quite bad too, like I have never seen a novel where it legitimately needs a 1 star in almost every category, and this novel proved me wrong. There is no category for good h e n t a I and the novel itself is just a bad read. The only category that probably don’t deserve one star is stability which still doesn’t ratify how sh*tty the writing is. View More

DarkKnight32: Bro are you retarded writing quality is not the only characteristic of a book i would give him 3 stars on that bur this guy did not even read his novel and gave him a 1 star there is still alot of other categories that he needs to vote but he cant do it if he does not even read it.

+18 - Harem Palace Sect's System
9 months ago
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