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Will give you power stones when I have some just already used them today

This is the type of harry potter fanfiction I have been trying to find and I really hope you keep this going at the same quality you have now. Cant wait to see how you progress this story.

Just want you to pay him money to read such a scam..........................................................................................................................................................................................

Honestly really good story love everything story development-wise also because you didn't just make the mc overpowered from the start they have to work their way to it which is a nice touch. Sadly though I won't be continuing to read the story because of the grammar issue all over the story like constantly interchanging he and her. As well as other small mistakes like that happening often throughout the story in the thirty chapters I have read so far.

I like the two chapter that is actually about the mc and even like the idea of how you're doing the story I just wish the other six chapters weren't just stuff that doesn't really matter when you currently only have two chapters on the actual mc. I feel like if you had added these little journal entries later in the story like when you had even ten or so chapters it wouldn't be as harmful but when there are six journal entries and only two actual chapters. I say this because it is like watching a tv show and out of 8 episodes only two have to do with the actual plot the other six are just random stuff that don't fully even make sense because you are alluding to stuff that's not important cause we have barely gotten to know the mc. I am you have a couple of journal entries before we even get to understand anything about the mc.

Scam literally the one review sounds like a huge scam the story itself is missing the first couple of chapters and then when it finally has one it like chapter 7 and it advertising paying to get 50 chapter ahead but it missing the first 6 chapters or so and there is no title or summary so you don't even know what the story about and I am pretty sure this will get deleted that why I'm not caring about grammar and just writing it all as a run on sentence.

this story is one of the good ones please come back and keep writing it