Webnovel Author: AuHNG - Novel Collection

AuHNG

3mth

Posted

The story really be storying guys. reviews are difficult to write let me just write random stuff here. There we go, hopefully this works well.

I'M NOT THE ICE QUEEN

Fantasy · TheCraZyaUthOr19

AuHNG

3mth

Posted

The plot is developing, but I would suggest working a bit on the writing quality. Use grammarly or other grammar checkers to catch minor mistakes or something, because sometimes it can be difficult to notice on a fist read.

Return of the Ancient Constellation

Fantasy · Choka

AuHNG

3mth

Posted

There's potential, but I'm not the audience. I think you should look towards other authors in the genre and see what they do. Ok, that's all.

The Devil's Fiance Is The Alpha's Mate

LGBT+ · Pinkyprincess

AuHNG

7mth

Commented

I keep editing stuff and my paragraph comments disappear.

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Urban · AuHNG

AuHNG

7mth

Posted

Ignore the reading status, I went back to reread. This story has a lot of potential, though it doesn't develop the stakes immediately, and is a bit more of a mystery when it comes down to it. Looking forward to reading more.

The Undying Star

Fantasy · daniz_

AuHNG

7mth

Commented

Read the prologues first.

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Urban · AuHNG

AuHNG

7mth

Replied to daniz_

Thats the first chapter, not the first chapter of the novel. Damn it, I hate how webnovel skips over the prologues.

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Urban · AuHNG

AuHNG

7mth

Replied to daniz_

Let me know what do u mean by beginning? Like prologue or chapter 1? I think people tend to find chapter 1 confusing when they accidentally skip the prologues.

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Urban · AuHNG

AuHNG

7mth

Replied to AuHNG

Alright so here’s my critique: chapter kind of reads like AI, cause every chapter ends with a: and so the hero’s embark once more tupa stuff. Remove that, and just end the chapter on a cliffhanger.

System Mania!

Fantasy · Sinadin_2ndth

AuHNG

7mth

Posted

So far, it’s really good, although I do have to say that the chapter starts of a bit grizzly for any of y’all that aren’t super into that. Gonna continue reading this novel and post my final thoughts on this review.

System Mania!

Fantasy · Sinadin_2ndth

AuHNG

7mth

Commented

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Urban · AuHNG

AuHNG

7mth

Commented

fight.

ch 29 THE SCHOOL MAKES FRESHMEN FIGHT: [Press Y to find out WHY]

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Urban · AuHNG

AuHNG

7mth

Commented

ch 30 EQUIPPED 'Shovel'! THE BULL IS BACK!

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Urban · AuHNG

AuHNG

7mth

Commented

flute

ch 31 TO DO: 1. COOK a POT 2. BUY a FLUTE

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Urban · AuHNG

AuHNG

7mth

Commented

pot.

ch 31 TO DO: 1. COOK a POT 2. BUY a FLUTE

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Urban · AuHNG

AuHNG

7mth

Commented

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Urban · AuHNG

AuHNG

7mth

Commented

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Urban · AuHNG

AuHNG

7mth

Commented

ch 33 MY DANCE PARTNER IS THE WIND

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Urban · AuHNG

AuHNG

7mth

Commented

ch 33 MY DANCE PARTNER IS THE WIND

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Urban · AuHNG

AuHNG

7mth

Commented

ch 33 MY DANCE PARTNER IS THE WIND

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Urban · AuHNG

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