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A piece of advice, reread the chapter, the dialogues seem a bit forced, people (especially in a position of power) are reluctant to believe that they don't have control of the situation, the dialogue (in my opinion) lacks a bit of contrast between the parties and raiden should express himself in a more confident and decisive way, he has the will of gaia on his side and that of all the heroes and some have an enormous arrogance and a political experience that would make anyone pale, in conclusion, we should also take into account the heroes with whom interacted and advised him throughout the story to express his character and attitude. This is my opinion, I hope it can be useful to you, otherwise I really like your story, keep it up. translated with google translate

do you have the link to the original?

If you leave because people who have nothing to do other than insult your work, you just give them the satisfaction of seeing you fall, ignore them so they get angry for nothing, but if it's for personal reasons, I'm sorry, I liked the story.

Thanks for the chapter

Good luck and I hope to see the next chapter, and remember that for every mean meaningless comment there are another thousand silent readers who appreciate your work. Merry Christmas and Happy Holidays.

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More pls!

Condolences

In the story, congratulations on how you managed to adapt the story and songs, truly one of the best I've read. P.S. Remember that for every person who insults your work, there are many more who appreciate it and wait for the next chapter to come out. Don't give up and keep going.