Nawaabzadah

1yr

Commented

these types of mistakes put me off. Most of the time I keep thinking about uninstalling the app.

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After reincarnating, I became a second generation villain

Eastern · abinn

Nawaabzadah

1yr

Commented

well it's first line is so boring that I'm droppin' it.

Genetics is forbidden knowledge to humans. It is the domain of gods. To master the mystery of genes would be tantamount to mastering the power of gods!

Nawaabzadah

1yr

Commented

Why do you have to set limit. couldn't you simply say," If this constitution is cultivated properly, then there's no limit to growth".

According to the records, there was even a possibility of breaking through to the peak of level nine or even reaching a higher realm.

I Inherit An Auction House At The Start, Trillion Times Rebate!

Eastern · Place of Belonging

Nawaabzadah

1yr

Posted

People have written reviews covering everything they could, I'm just writing it for the sake of rating. And if these types of stories get awards then you can imagine the quality level(in every sense from imagination to translation) of webnovel itself. I think since 2018 or 2019 webnovel has went down the drain of gutter never to turn towards clear waters.

Nawaabzadah

1yr

Posted

After seeing the description full of meaningless explanation and bad like fkiñ bad English I'm not gonna read it and also seeing the meaningless time wasting description gives me the whole idea of writing/imagination level of author of this book so I'm out.

Nawaabzadah

1yr

Posted

ewww. The description of this novel especially the use of word meat rod gave me chills. And everyone knows it's creepy and only immature inexperienced people use it those who feel shame bcz they have no experience in sex field. can't even say penis clearly. So I'm not gonna read it.

Reincarnated With A Badluck System

Fantasy · Perverted_Fella

Nawaabzadah

1yr

Replied to King_Of_Loneliness

bro there are plenty of good stories without harem but less good stories with harem. If you are looking for good stories without harem then you'll find plenty of them. otherwise you won't find any.

I Am Really Not The Son of Providence

Urban · Palace in the Clouds

Nawaabzadah

1yr

Replied to Nawaabzadah

Also how can eliza be op when there's another soul which brought mc back in time.

ch 356 Exiting Purgatory

Vile Evil Hides Under The Veil

Fantasy · Grayback

Nawaabzadah

1yr

Commented

why in the fk you Mr. Crappy Author are all over the place. There's no proper direction of your story progression. And don't you fkiñ dare make sexual intercourses longer than necessary. Keep 'em short like your dick. Also don't develop romance shits in it. just keep them as sex friends and nothing more. On that note don't make eliza MC's friend or sex friend. keeping her as enemy is good. If you dare turn every fkiñ girl into MC's girl, I'll leave bad reviews to your story on every platform dragging your name through the muddiest of waters. So after reading my comment, you may have gotten the clear picture of being all over the place. My comment is similar to your story. So I'm hoping for you to improve it with proper syntaxes and words.

ch 356 Exiting Purgatory

Vile Evil Hides Under The Veil

Fantasy · Grayback

Nawaabzadah

2yr

Commented

and third possibility" you were just npc who somehow during testing phase infiltrated a user".

"There are only two possibilities, either this game is like what happened in those novels, or it was made by someone who came from that world, just like me." Qin Tian speculated.

Returning To The Cultivation World Through A Game

Eastern · Saubi1234

Nawaabzadah

2yr

Commented

lol bro you and your excessive use of "and".

"Although I am now only a novice disciple, at least I have become a disciple of Sleeping Dragon Sect, and I believe that in the future, I will become an outer disciple and even an inner disciple as long as I work hard!"

I Can Extract Everything

Eastern · Mysterious_Pen

Nawaabzadah

2yr

Commented

lol you and your fkīn excessive use of "and".

"Although I am now only a novice disciple, at least I have become a disciple of Sleeping Dragon Sect, and I believe that in the future, I will become an outer disciple and even an inner disciple as long as I work hard!"

I Can Extract Everything

Eastern · Mysterious_Pen

Nawaabzadah

2yr

Commented

shouldn't it be a common occurrence for demons to try to infiltrate and vice versa.

"Something big is about to happen."

The AFK Farming Software: I Became Invincible Without Knowing It

Eastern · Autumn Lu

Nawaabzadah

2yr

Commented

lol, how is servant quarter deep. it's not like you built it in the core part of sect.

"The disciples of the Demon Sect actually went deep into the Servant Quarters."

The AFK Farming Software: I Became Invincible Without Knowing It

Eastern · Autumn Lu

Nawaabzadah

2yr

Commented

Don't tell me she's gonna be the fkīn waifu now.

Under the moonlight, Qi Ming looked over and saw a stunning girl. She had an oval face, cherry lips, and a tall nose. Her scarlet eyes looked demonic and beautiful.

The AFK Farming Software: I Became Invincible Without Knowing It

Eastern · Autumn Lu

Nawaabzadah

2yr

Commented

"situation" would be a better word.

At this moment, the scene changed in the D-Class Servant Quarters.

The AFK Farming Software: I Became Invincible Without Knowing It

Eastern · Autumn Lu

Nawaabzadah

2yr

Commented

Are we still calling it"English"?.

Qi Ming summoned the Bat Demon that had reached the growth stage. It appeared out of thin air and stopped in front of him. The Bat Demon was about the size of a palm. It was completely black and had huge ears. It had sharp fangs and claws as it flapped its wings.

The AFK Farming Software: I Became Invincible Without Knowing It

Eastern · Autumn Lu

Nawaabzadah

2yr

Commented

it's she or he or altogether tranny

Teach was slightly surprised when he heard that. She looked around. After confirming that there was no one around, she lowered her voice and said, "Is Lucas crazy? He'll be punished if he increases the number of personnel without permission!"