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I enjoyed this story and I like the premise, but this is a complaint review. I still recommend giving this a shot. personal opinions. 1. The MC has personal problems and apparently doesn't make an effort to solve them, he just runs away from his problems instead of facing them head on. there are hours when he seems to have matured but ends up proving the opposite.... 2. His relationship with Monica has come to dominate at least half of the story and it's exhausting reading about it at this point. It was interesting at first, but now it's just repetitive. The story went from being about the MC getting stronger and traveling across the universe to find his nemesis and now it's about how he will do anything for their relationship.... 3. The MC is disgusted when the global army tries to order or control him, but apparently he is willing to listen to any orders from his girlfriend's family like a dog.