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If you want to read something just to pass time and turn off your brain, this is somewhat bearable. Suggestions: This needs a lot of editing on its grammar, the tenses doesn't flow well making the reading experience very disconcerting. It also suffers from over description of the minor things; for example the MC is just going to simply park his car but the sentence include how he turns his wheel and how the tire screeches left its mark, like bruh it's fine for some scenes but turn it down a little 'cause I simply skim over it when it's too excessive. I also feel that the dialogues needed some work because it feels off for some reason. I just don't feel the dialogues engaging (that's just for me). For now that's all.

For real, it's a slog to read the chapters. Also this lolbingolol guy is present to all threads that says the things they dislike about this book, and ol' reliable lolbingolol will say something on defense. I dunno if this guy is a religious c*ck s*cker of the author or just the author's alt account.

Are you the author's alt account? You seem so invested on trying to reason out any criticisms in the reviews.

Daddy where you at? I miss your translation already😭

I really like your determination.

Sorry for the typo there auto-correct did its thing again.

I really like the start and the concept, I'll just rate 5 stars and see where you'll go with this. Remember that you can't please anyone so there's bound to be some hate in the future. Good luck and have fan writing. *Filler* apology for poor england when were you when queen elizibith dies? i was sat at home eating beans on toast when telly ring ‘queen is kill’ ‘no’

Soo truue, he's like a walking ad for his Patreon lmao

I just saw the translators review, welp this is awkward.

Good Read, my only attitude when it comes in reading novels is that I read it first before reading the reviews. Don't let the bad reviews stop you from reading the book 'cause in the end of the day you have your own preferences and may enjoy things others do not. Happy Reading!