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He’s a genius. The hall will reward Ensis cuz my guy is a fake demigod. The temple will reward (forgot his name), his bloodline making my guy into a beast. Then MC getting rewards from his side. And now Garvis is on the other side as part of the resistance. Like whatttttt. Mc gonna have a new army join him in his palace View More
The Dawn of the New World · C439
1 week ago
First hehe. So I thought you said there was gonna be a mass release soon you fudger. Plus what about that bloodline inserted in him? Shouldn’t something had happened already to him and Ceni? View More
The Dawn of the New World · C429
4 weeks ago
But cmon man. I really binged crazy. I feel lost agaib🤔😢 View More

vargasb: Wow first time ever in my whole time on this app that I ever got first!

The Dawn of the New World · C423
1 month ago
Wow first time ever in my whole time on this app that I ever got first! View More
The Dawn of the New World · C423
1 month ago
You’re good at math but horrible at English. Continue reading and it says 40% from original attacks. Meaning you’re just adding 40% after each strike from original. Good try tho View More

looFehT: Each attack will be stronger by 40% than THE PREVIOUS ONE. After 8 attacks if wouldn't only be 420% of the first, it would be 1475,79% aka 100%*1.4^8 (the base worth times the 40% growth per attack 8 times). Sorry but math mistakes trigger me af because I'm good at math

The Dawn of the New World · C17
1 month ago
The grammar is horrinle View More

V1K1NG: I feel like the IRL chapters are much better written than in-game ones. IRL chapters are more detailed, while in-game chapters are somehow rushed.

Fate Online: Shadow · C88
1 month ago
You should really get an editor View More
Fate Online: Shadow · C85
1 month ago
Ankit. Keep going man. Great novel. One of the best I read and I enjoyed every part of it View More
Path of Evolution (Dropped) · C138
1 month ago
You should go get yourself an editor because your grammar really sucks View More

ApocalypseX: Hey guys!

ApocX here! If you didn't start reading this novel, I suggest you start right now. It is definitely something you will enjoy, especially for those VRMMO and Romance novel fans! ;)

Don't mind the shameless 5 Star Rating.

Update Schedule - Daily.

I still have my main novel Stronghold In The Apocalypse to write so I can't write more.

Enjoy reading! :)

P.S If you leave a bad review for the story, then make sure it's something that would help in the improvement of the story, because I sure as hell would delete it.

Fate Online: Shadow
1 month ago

TypeFantasyHeart: k... the novel is fine but there are a lot of things to improve on it, starting with.
1. Its been a while now since a lot of people point out that you wrote 28 years old in chapter 1 when it should be 18 and it still hasnt been fixed despite you thanking a reader for pointing it out and its been months!!!!.
2.world announcements as sometimes it shows the level of the monster, others, it dosnt. Its important for the level to be known as its a difference killing a lvl 10 boss while being same level than killing it while being lvl 30 for example.
3.At the start, it was said that the time was twice as long in the game but then it was said that it was only 12 hours longer and then it got increased that 1 real-world day is 2 days inside which is what was said from the start.....
3. the stats of Amanda in the game are way to high for someone level 7, her stats are 119 in total - 30 stats per level - 60 stats supposing she got all 10 like shadow = 29... Meaning her equipment adds 29 points to her stats in total, thats way to much...... either its that way, she got more than 10 in stats at the start or you messed that up.
4. It bothers me a lot the start of the novel with Shadow and Amanda having to run for accidentally instantly killing the senator's son by making him trip on a rock... even if that was enough to damage his head it won't be enough to instantly kill the guy unless he was to fall on his head from a few meters and im sure that he could have reached the hospital alive even if he were to die from bleeding inside the head.
4. it wasnt stated how the gang found out that mc "killed" the rich guy son.
5. how come Amanda was working full time as the boss of a restaurant if she was THAT good in the game and she could earn thousands dollars... dosnt makes sense and she is even higher level than MC and he is OP
6. Amanda's friend Jeny seems to be from a powerful family, how come she couldn't help Amanda from the rich guy? From what i can see, Jeny could have helped Amanda with no problems
7. how is it possible for a normal guy and girl to escape a hunt from a criminal gang plus the justice for killing a person, not to mention the senator's son!!!, the pair would captured fast and easy as they had a criminal organization and the government searching for them.... and even him becoming a high paid assassin while doing so lol... where did he even get the money for that!!
9. The mc calls little girl the sister of his friend but she is 18 years old, same age as the mc.... LOL
10. why he didnt buy a helmet for Tina? the sister of his best friend?
11. The mc wants money but as soon as he gets a new equipment he tosses the one he had out! lol, he can sell those!
12. Not much is known about the classes, not even the assasin class as what they can or cant do... Such as use 1 or 2 daggers
13. No world announcement was given when the mc CREATED a skill... you would think that such an amazing thing would create a world annoucement but nothing happened...

All things considered, this leads me to believe that you dont have any guide while writing this nor you are keeping track of things. Its likely that you must go back to read what you wrote on X chapter to remember instead of writing down important things on a separate file. I recommend using excel or google sheets to keep track of things
K... try to improve the world background a little and give some more physycal description of your characters. Pls be consistent with the information given

Fate Online: Shadow
1 month ago
This novel said it got drop but it still worth the read. I really thought it was some Ben 10 bs and was reading to drop. It was like all the puzzles pieces got connected to why this was dropped lol. Thank God it’s not Ben 10 fan fiction View More

Chaoticmike: lol I fell for the Ben ten joke I almost drop the novel because I thought that was really the case of the watch lol, u got me there.

Path of Evolution (Dropped) · C6
1 month ago

Chaoticmike: lol I fell for the Ben ten joke I almost drop the novel because I thought that was really the case of the watch lol, u got me there.

Path of Evolution (Dropped) · C6
1 month ago
That’s a myth. Everything you hear, goes to your temporal lope which is the side of your brains. Your body movements, the part of the brain that controls that is on top of your brain. Your frontal lope is important to your humanity, key part in what separates us from animal. If we only use 10% of our brain potential, we’ll be the same as monkeys View More

Exocrime: I dont see that we only use 10%of our brain. I read we use only 10% of our brains potential.
For me its a big difference. And I know that the human brain has about 80% activity at having sex.

Reincarnation Of The Strongest Sword God · C461
1 month ago
You need new editors. I stopped reading your other novel because of the grammar, still saved in my reading list waiting for you to update it with better grammar. I like this book but man the grammar View More
Fate Online: Shadow · C14
1 month ago
No lie Biako I read all your novels. If you keep just leaving these cliffhangers I might have to kill ya so that you can’t stop leaving me hanging View More
Blood Creed · C48
1 month ago
You assumed that when he reincarnated the first time that he was only 20 years old. All that was stated was that MC only lived in that diminishing era for 20yrs not that he was 20years old. View More

ThrustThunder: "No matter how outstanding and gifted someone was, they would need time to gather knowledge and temper their skills. No one could skip this process."
How thick is the Authors face to write this sentence in the same chapter where he had someone who's never even seen any of these ingredients before turn them into an advanced potion on his first attempt?
The guy was only 20 years old when he died and came here so when did he get the time to practice alchemy in between fighting monsters and starving to death?
Especially Alchemy in a world *Completely Devoid* of any resources?
SMH. There's plot armor, and then there's P L O T A R M O R.

End of the Magic Era · C8
2 months ago
I’m late but 1. Consider the time - it’s not rare to do so. 2. The merchant lost everything not from the sea voyage but from compensation. This commerce was probably big for the area they was in which is why they was famous but for the whole world, just a small commerce meaning they had sufficient money to be considered “rich” but when suffering a huge loss - like so - they are now in the red. View More

ReganDryke: Ok am I the only one wondering which merchant master is dumb enough to stake all of his very successful trading company on one shipment and even get massive debts for it?

End of the Magic Era · C3
2 months ago

ReganDryke: Ok am I the only one wondering which merchant master is dumb enough to stake all of his very successful trading company on one shipment and even get massive debts for it?

End of the Magic Era · C3
2 months ago
Do you know what the occipital lope is? The temporal lope? How about the frontal lobe? Or maybe where the sensor motor is located at? All these are different parts of the brain. If we was to use only 10% then we won’t be able to see, move, hear, breathe. Shit most of us will be psychopaths because our frontal lobe controls that human part in us that gives us sympathy. There is more activity in some parts of the brain than in others but we have enough fuel and use 100% of our brain. I offer you the same advice you gave winter. Don’t believers everything. Go get you some actual proof and not **** ppl say View More

WorldEnnemy: It was proven untrue by those same scholar who believe themselves the smartest. Dont believe that as in fact we indeed merely use 10% of the brain. Human can't provide the Brain foods need to fully activate it its shared with the rest of the body and isn't always suitable for it's activities. So it's not that we can't use more but we can't use it as the "fuel" isn't enough so the pathway get unused and atrophied on their own "locking" it.

Dominating Evolution of the Cosmos · C2
2 months ago

Sabatashi: The racism in Chinese authors and ignorant world views never ceases to make me facepalm.

Battle Frenzy · C120
3 months ago

VaishnavC: Yeah. Only after reading Chinese light novels I realized that Chinese are a very very racist people. I even dropped a couple of novels because of how racist and vulgur a few authors were.

Battle Frenzy · C120
3 months ago

itsellanutella: Black people have no reason to be jealous of yellow skin, nor any other skin. This author is so fucking ignorant it’s ridiculous.

Battle Frenzy · C119
3 months ago
How is he considered a playboy but he probably never kissed a girl?🤔 View More

Garvoki: Ma Dong is really something...

Battle Frenzy · C51
3 months ago

ThrustThunder: In a world where atomic nuclear fission has no effect on the monsters humanity faces, Bows and Arrows are considered viable weapons...
F*cking Chinese authors, man.

Battle Frenzy · C10
3 months ago
I just used my limited SS for a repeat!!! View More
Lord of the Magical Beasts · C110
3 months ago
It’s definitely not talking about surface area. What fire BALL have the width as a palm? View More

Maekellen: Fist is larger as it includes the fingers and is much wider. That being said, if you simply go by surface area rather than volume, the palm would be larger.

Monster Integration · C48
6 months ago
The palm is actually larger than your fist but I agree. Author definitely lost the editor he had from chapter 35-40. Even tho the grammar was still ****ty it’s a lot better than this **** View More

Maekellen: Sorry, but I've hit my limit. It is an interesting story but the translation is painful and their are too many illogical aspects. For instance, a fist is larger than a palm. The palm does not include the fingers whereas the fist does. This maked the length and height identical, but the width (thickness) of yhe fost is greater. Also, putting a spin on a projectile makes it more accurate not less. Unless he us literally throwing it like a baseball, but with the sparrow also "throwing" the fireballs this doesn't seem likely.

Monster Integration · C48
6 months ago
Even if it was Navy Guilds, the super powers network should had inform them that there are already these boats out there. But it’s not just navy guild, our wonderful author kept saying how the superpowers put so much emphasis on the navy aspect etc... So these guilds should already have some View More

Varyx: Maybe it was the navy guilds?

Reincarnation Of The Strongest Sword God · C1512
6 months ago

Little_Pig: Next chapter tomorrow about the shock from others guild, the filler and look down ZW again, and getting shocked again by ZW.....loop.

Reincarnation Of The Strongest Sword God · C1512
6 months ago

SmileUpon: Is it me or the three chapters is just a single chapter divided into three chapters?

Reincarnation Of The Strongest Sword God · C1512
6 months ago
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