_OneAutumnLeaf_ - Profile

just endure for like 100 chapters..... After that mc becomes mature and writing style of author also improves as the novel progress....... at the start you will fill like this story is written by some kid but eventually it will get better.... so give it a chance.....

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utterly ridiculous story development foolish mc with 260 IQ no sense in this novel lol mc is pulling guns tanks out off his ass and opponents are fighting with Sword and arrows what kind of bull**** is that 480+ chapters filled with fillers buy the logic of this author mc have to develop 600 planets to end this bull**** and right now there are 480+ chapters and he didn't even conquer a single continent let alone planet so just do the basic math 1000 chapters for 1 planet (1000 X 600 planet = 600000 chapter) see how illogical that sounds i don't even know what was author smoking while writing this novel

GRAMMAR GRAMMAR GRAMMAR ........................................................... MACHINE TRANSLATION IS BETTER THAN THIS SHIT ............................................................

After reading what to expect from this novel I'm excited to see what you will provide us I'm waiting for 50+ chapters so i can binge it......