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Awaven: Writing Quality is passable, only issue being grammar. Seems to be daily updates. Story development is bad. Basically, BAM, something happens and they deal with it. Character design is lacking, not much dialogue of value either. MC concept is good, but is a static character with no real development, and his system has no actual curve just the authors whim. World Background is minimal.

Going to drop this novel personally. The concept for the story is good, but the execution is lacking. Good luck with your work Author

Modern Weapon System
1 month ago
Happy New Year mate! Sorry, I was quite tired yesterday with all the guests at the house, and I was filling myself with food. View More
Another Hanma in a World of Martial Arts Anime · C21
1 month ago
Yeah, UK is becoming quite the mess due to the bloody politics and ****e, but whatever. As long as I can continue having my peaceful and ordinary life, I could care less! View More

Mr_Annihilator: It's going alright. Brexit's still a thing and Boris bloody Johnson is the prime minister but all in all? I'm fine. Just writing away in my room. It's turned out pretty well so far, honestly.

Another Hanma in a World of Martial Arts Anime · C0
1 month ago

Mr_Annihilator: It's going alright. Brexit's still a thing and Boris bloody Johnson is the prime minister but all in all? I'm fine. Just writing away in my room. It's turned out pretty well so far, honestly.

Another Hanma in a World of Martial Arts Anime · C0
1 month ago
Ey, I also live in England! How's life going on mate?! View More
Another Hanma in a World of Martial Arts Anime · C0
1 month ago
Please, receive thy wholly deserved spirit stones, my good sir. For you have graced us with a chapter of thy divine work. View More
Another Hanma in a World of Martial Arts Anime · C18
1 month ago

Mr_Annihilator: There seemed to be some kind of bug because some other comments got deleted as well.

Anyway, thanks for the support, it means a lot!

Another Hanma in a World of Martial Arts Anime · C17
1 month ago
Not only are you an absolute genius, you also reply to your readers near-instantaneously! This only serves to increases my excitement! View More

Mr_Annihilator: There seemed to be some kind of bug because some other comments got deleted as well.

Anyway, thanks for the support, it means a lot!

Another Hanma in a World of Martial Arts Anime · C17
1 month ago
I am honestly extremely excited about what will happen next, and you sir, are the first person to make me feel this much excitement about something! Keep up this heavenly piece of work! Although, I don't know why my previous comment was deleted, but whatever. Also, I will give you the spirit stones I got today too. View More

Mr_Annihilator: I mean, they aren't JUST weapons. They're mythological weapons. Mjolnir, the hammer of Thor, Longinus, the spear that pierced Christ's side, Aegis, a divine shield used by Zeus and Athena, and Mercury isn't a weapon, it's a God - the quickest Roman God. Which is why the stance that's about speed and agility is named after him.

I agree with the showing instead of telling thing, but it's the MC himself who's describing the techniques. It's not like in 3rd person where I'd just be putting info texts about the technique for no reason. It was the MC describing it as he used it. But overall, I agree, I should have shown it, rather than explain it. It's just hard to do that, honestly.

Eh, he'll eventually feel proud over even hurting Yujiro but after years of pushing himself to the limit, he was still beaten. Anyone would get dejected over that. It's a humanizing moment for the MC.

Another Hanma in a World of Martial Arts Anime · C17
1 month ago
Reading Status: C16
You are the first author to receive all of my spirit stones for the past few days.
I only wanted to type the previous sentence, but this review compels me to write 140 characters long to post this comment. Therefore, here I am, typing as much as I can to post said comment. Also, keep up this glorious piece of work you are writing because I don't know about others, but I sure as hell am enjoying it. View More
Another Hanma in a World of Martial Arts Anime
1 month ago
Oh ye mighty beater, I beg thee to educate me on the Dao of the mighty beating! View More

Issac_Moe: Was beating my meat but saw you released this

Another Hanma in a World of Martial Arts Anime · C10
1 month ago

Issac_Moe: Was beating my meat but saw you released this

Another Hanma in a World of Martial Arts Anime · C10
1 month ago
You, sir, have gained my utmost respect. View More

Blasphemer: He broke through the bottleneck of hiatus.

Strongest Unlimited Unknown Supreme Being · C53
3 months ago

Blasphemer: He broke through the bottleneck of hiatus.

Strongest Unlimited Unknown Supreme Being · C53
3 months ago
It was just a joke. View More

Heavenly_Devil: Nothing is perfect, specifically when it comes to grammar.

The Dusk Emperor · C0
3 months ago
From my experience, frustration seems to increase peoples IQ and flow of words ALMOST perfectly. View More

Heavenly_Devil: When author tells people, 'I'm not good at writing this in this language', and then proceeds to rant almost perfectly in that language... lol

The Dusk Emperor · C0
3 months ago

Sesshomaru7897: Meh. I'd of verbally agreed while killing the other masters and then just kill her without putting it into the system. What manpower problems? Don't need that 1 additional person that I know wants to betray me.

The Lustful Dungeon Master (Hiatus) · C44
4 months ago
Are you being sarcastic or perhaps pointing out someone's grammer mistake? Though, I don't care as I have already - sorry, author - taken this off my library.
Though, it might sound as if I am mocking you - which I haven't intended to do - I hope that perhaps you could do some kind of testing before you do something that will have nearly all your readers rage and shout out that they will drop your novel - although, it is quite embarrassing, it also includes me - which might cause some people to give you bad reviews, to which I believe will negatively affect your novel (though, I am not sure as I haven't publsihed or written any novels online and IRL). So, sorry but this kind of cliché thing is not for me. So, see you later, I guess? Maybe if you have other novels, fanfics, etc that fits my taste I might come back again. View More

Ero_Saint: He will almost lose everything. "Almost lose everything". Not "Lose almost everything"

The Lustful Dungeon Master (Hiatus) · C44
4 months ago
All the other chapter beforr this was excellent, but this chapter completely extinguised all of my interest to read any further. The MC who was a realist, and the one who asked about his subordinates opinions, and the one who only made a decision after thinking carefully just allowed a random woman to be his personal assisstant. Also, combined with the fact that he knows what she is trying to or will do in the future, he still accepted her. He, a careful and calculating individual, allowed a extremely huge threat to have the same authority as he has. The author wrote and even developed the MC to be cautious and so on, but in this chapter this random woman just becomes his assisstant, and honestly this is forced and doesn't go along with what the MC is potrayed as. So, I don't think I will read this novel from now on.
P.S. I will read the next chapter too see how it goes, and if it is still the same, then sorry but this is not my cup of tea. Also, if possible, I hope the author will accept and revert the MC to how he was before, so that those readers who will and are still reading this novel, will not feel like the plot is forced and unnatural. View More
The Lustful Dungeon Master (Hiatus) · C44
4 months ago
Ey, bruh this is takin' too long. View More
ten-tails in another world · C9
5 months ago

Obito_Tobi: fu'ck you
this is the last straw
i am dropping this ****
9 chapters without mc in action he become a completely side kick bi'tch got no role in this is he even still the main character cause a lot of pointless fights is happening in front of him and he is still in an egg what will he be a bird or what

ten-tails in another world · C9
5 months ago

Zaddy: Dude this is taking too long.

ten-tails in another world · C9
5 months ago
I get that because physically he is a child and his personality could be affected by it and thus acting child-like, but I just didn't want this to keep happening again and again. It is already a bother that he keeps laughing in a 'cute', child-like manner every few sentence, and that is already me being merciful. But this is just like kind of affecting the story for me and I just didn't like it, so I gave some suggestions or constructive criticism to the author because I don't believe that its only be that feels thrown off by the MC's behaviour. View More

Kayox23: Well perhaps he's affected by his body of a child? I mean apart from Kid Gilgamesh I've never seen a domineering or a badass Child perhaps you will have your cool MC when he reach +17 years old

** : I'm seeing him more like the laid back person (like Urahara Kisuke or Kakashi)

New Life In Mahouka Koukou No Rettousei, The Way To The Harem! · C0
6 months ago

FBI_B1TCH: The people in this story really need to stop giggling. Seriously, what could be so funny for you to start giggling every 5 damn seconds.

New Life In Mahouka Koukou No Rettousei, The Way To The Harem! · C0
6 months ago

EternumLAWS: haha, this girl, mc is done already, in sinopse have something about Harem, but the personality of this girl is not ready for a harem .. you see ... forcing will be bad ..

New Life In Mahouka Koukou No Rettousei, The Way To The Harem! · C0
6 months ago

REMOK: It's really hard to read this story with all these "~~~~~" symbols and gigling and laughing more than 10 times in a sentence. Only a person with mental disablities talk like that. Please stop it, you're ruining the story

New Life In Mahouka Koukou No Rettousei, The Way To The Harem! · C0
6 months ago
I don't know if its just me, but from my perspective the MC seems a little beta. Also, I get the fact that his physical body is that of a child, but isn't his soul of a 20 year old or a ***** from our standards? And honestly, I don't want to seem rude or anything this sense of naivety and child-like act of MC is pissing me off.
So, Author if you are reading this can you please make the MC more mature, or domineering, or at least make him a little bit man-like! With kyouka or whatever her name is treating MC in a shotacon or yandere way is extremely weird and creepy for me, and with the MC who is extremely OP, acting like a maiden and innocently in front of her when he is training in a military camp and can defeat maybe nearly everyone there with just like 5 percent of his strength, this just f#ckin' makes me rage like never before! All I hope is for MC to be a bit domineering and not be like a naive child when he is a *****. View More
New Life In Mahouka Koukou No Rettousei, The Way To The Harem! · C0
6 months ago
Please let the next world be "King's Avatar". Also, let the "Miracle Throne's" MC do whatever he did in the novel but you can like make this novel's MC and Miracle Throne's MC be friends or like have a alliance between them or so. View More
How I traveled the Omniverse · C0
6 months ago
I see you are a man of culture as well. View More

Darkzero21: Why not friends with benefits

RWBY:God Eater in Remnant · C5
6 months ago

Darkzero21: Why not friends with benefits

RWBY:God Eater in Remnant · C5
6 months ago
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