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Transmigration: The Cannon Fodder Beauty and Masked Beast · C74
3 weeks ago

yaoyueyi: Honest, objective review below.
Total rating: [3.8 stars]


Writing Quality: [4 stars]
-Was a bit harsher on this section because you said that the beginning chapters were “edited”, so therefore, I had higher expectations.
-Despite being edited, there are still dialogue tag mistakes. (e.g. “It depends on how powerful the target is." Xiao Taotao said. "The higher the…” should be "It depends on how powerful the target is," Xiao Taotao said, "The higher the…” notice the commas?)
-There are also little mistakes with more comma placement and sentence flow (right in the first chapter, in case you didn’t know). This makes the writing style somewhat chunky and not as smooth to read. Also, there are parts where the characters are asking a question, but it’s not a question mark?? Tbh it made me doubt that the chapters you labeled as “edited” are edited at all…
-Problems with adverbs placed in awkward locations too.
-Some problems with tenses. As I can see, the majority of your story is in past tense, but there are occasionally a few phrases in present tense that you should work to avoid. It’s best to keep the story in one tense or the other.
-A few run on sentences…
-TL;DR: Pretty good for Webnovel standards, but there are still mistakes in the edited chapters.

Stability of Updates: [5 stars]
Pretty good and stable!

Story Development: [4 stars]
-Feels really similar to the manhua, “Goddess Creation System” in a lot of aspects. (e.g. “pretty points”, the fact that the more powerful the target is, the person gets more points…)
-Info dumps whenever there’s a main mission could be incorporated in a smoother manner. Was quite bored when the first one came up. Pretty much skimmed through it and just saw a bunch of Zhou’s.
-Flow of the story is pretty good though in general. Pacing is pretty smooth and doesn’t feel like dragging too much!
-However, at around where I stopped reading (Chapter 34), it was because I got bored and kinda stopped. This part might be biased or something, but I liked it better before the romance really kicked in lmao.
-Also highkey guessing the big boss final character is the creator.
-TL;DR: Okay pacing, but also, not the most original idea to ever exist.

Character Design: [3 stars]
-I... don't know how I feel about Yunhua?? LMAO I honestly don't know. Maybe it's because I'm never a fan of systems because they overpower the FL too much, and even though I know that the entire point of the thing is to let Yunhua become "perfect" because it's a "Goddess System" for a reason, but at the same time, I also think that it's difficult to make her a well-balanced character. She's not too perfect, but I can barely spot any flaws in her character. Maybe just give me like a week to carefully analyze every single action Yunhua did in the story and I'll be able to figure something out, but just from reading through this story, all I'm really getting is that she has nice morals?? idk tbh.
-Zhou Feng is kinda flat. Never really felt anything for his personality. I know that you're likely doing a spin on the "cold male lead" trope, but I'm not really seeing where the spin is coming in yet.
-Zhao Meiliang seems to be kinda b*tchy for no reasons either. I’m getting pretty sick of evil female antagonists existing for the sole sake of being evil. I get that Meiliang is tired of her mother comparing her to Yunhua, but how shallow and spoiled is this character to be this way if it’s just because of that that Meiliang wants to ruin Yunhua’s future?? And Yunhua acts like she’s all smart and stuff, but she’s kinda dense to not notice what kind of person Meiliang is since she’s constantly quoting these “novels” that she read and stuff.
-Also, real funny how after Zhao Meiliang exists the storyline, two other evil female antagonists from the Zhou family appear.
-Points to Ni Ming for being a fairly young female character that's not an antagonist.
-Grandmother died, but I never really felt anything for her death... but that's probably b/c I don't get emotional easily so I didn't take any points off for that. I think you did a good job describing Yunhua's emotions during the scene though-- it's probably because I don't really know how to place myself in Yunhua's shoes because again... I find it difficult to understand her character that made me kinda just read through that chapter with a flat face.
-TL;DR: Would like to see more character development, flaws, and dynamics.

World Background: [3 stars]
-There's not much revealed about the world, but it seems like a typical novel setting, so I just gave an average three star rating.
-Have no thoughts about the system because it seemed pretty genius when I was reading the Goddess Creation System manhua but now, reading this one where it's pretty similar, it didn't seem really new or anything to me.

Overall, I do think that most Webnovel readers would like it, but I think it's just a no for me. Maybe I'll pick it up again if I have time, but it isn't binge reading material for me, if that makes sense?

Ultimate Goddess System
3 weeks ago

TIAGO: First 😎

The Empress' Livestream · C436
3 weeks ago

lazysorcerer: They’re right, it’s stupid to time travel to the past only to start competing like the women in the past. Having future knowledge but behaving stupidly 😒

The Empress' Livestream · C436
3 weeks ago

Priest_Murong: Can’t agree more. Now I feel like all of those FL who try so hard to impress everyone by following ancient rules are idiots! If you’re a time traveler at least think outside of the box

The Empress' Livestream · C436
3 weeks ago
I'm sorry but your comment is so funny 😂😂 View More

lesley4169: That's my father's reaction too when he found out I'm gay~~😂😂

The Empress' Livestream · C434
3 weeks ago

lesley4169: That's my father's reaction too when he found out I'm gay~~😂😂

The Empress' Livestream · C434
3 weeks ago
I hope so! 😍 View More

Lord_MehMeh: Is that our Phoenix riding in the carriage? o(≧∇≦)o

The Empress' Livestream · C433
4 weeks ago

Lord_MehMeh: Is that our Phoenix riding in the carriage? o(≧∇≦)o

The Empress' Livestream · C433
4 weeks ago

Aoissst: This review made me think so. That's why I'm not reading this lol. Because of Ning Shu, I became picky reading novels lol.

Beauty and the Beast: Wolf Hubby XOXO
1 month ago
When Gu Min transmigrated it changed all their fates into good one. Bless Gu Min 👏 View More
The Empress' Livestream · C399
2 months ago

Nova30: This really shocked me. Good there is Gu Min now and JP don't have language barrier. That's why Wei Ci was so confused and shocked when he saw her being so different.

The Empress' Livestream · C399
2 months ago

Guoguo: Wow transmigrator Gu Min changed Liu She from a scumbag manwhore to a modern open minded great man 😳😳😳😳

The Empress' Livestream · C399
2 months ago

TomboyGirlPlayer: YS is like... "This kinda feels weird. If I accept, I'll be dating one of my bros???"
HC... "R u fr?"
Anthony: "If you won't accept Han, please consider me!!!"
YS: "Then I'll be dating a dog???"
Anthony: QAQ

Release that Man · C422
2 months ago
Ugh. I love her View More
The Empress' Livestream · C394
2 months ago

TomboyGirlPlayer: "Only Xiao Shuang loves me" Oh shoot, I forgot YS is in male form right now 😂😂😂

And YS is getting allll the love. Tony likes her, Madam Grace likes her, and Jennifer likes her~~~ And Albert admires her. Male or female, YS is always dominating the field!

Release that Man · C388
2 months ago

Nova30: JP can't but Wei Ci can😁. Remember Master Yuanjing said that, "he will make an orderly and harmonious home"... Yeah? Their roles are basically exchanged 😂😂

The Empress' Livestream · C377
2 months ago
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The Empress' Livestream · C372
2 months ago

FragrantMoonTree: Earthquake!!!

As someone who is accustomed to living with earthquakes, I worry about how ancient houses can withstand shaking! Modern scientists and engineers do a lot to prevent buildings from being damaged and collapsing during an earthquake!

These days, you shouldn't run outside during an earthquake, because indoors is unlikely to drop things on you, but during the ancient era it is probably equally risky!

The Empress' Livestream · C370
3 months ago

Mika_88kenichi: Thanks for the chapters!
What if Ios becomes enamoured with Rubica? That would be a good development.. A half nymph and a dragon fighting over Rubica~ Kyaaaaaa~ 😆

Secret Wardrobe Of The Duchess · C166
3 months ago

Yoshinocchii: I'm glad Edgar is just as they say, a genius!

Will this dragon man be Edgar's love rival? 😂 I think that'll be a funny twist of events 🤣 A Half Nymph vs The Dragon Ios fighting over Rubica 😂💕 that's gonna be epic

Secret Wardrobe Of The Duchess · C166
3 months ago
Wei Jingxian is the ex fiance of Lanting and she knows that Lanting is a girl. That's why they had to cancel their engagement. For those who forgot lol. View More
The Empress' Livestream · C362
3 months ago

Aoissst: Lol. It's funny how the latest chapter's of " Quick Transmigration Cannon Fodder's Record of Counterattacks "is exactly like this plot 😂 on how they made the side characters ugly to make the mc shine lol

Beauty and the Beast: Wolf Hubby XOXO
3 months ago

Aoissst: I find this novel funny especially how the ML is competitive with himself and how they're secretly like each other which makes the it more funny lol. It's funny how the ML would flex everytime and would seduce her with his pretty face lol.

The MC came back from the past and determined to find her love. But she was surprised that the Duke (ML) proposed to her.

Try reading this, it's funny and romantic, and y'all gonna laugh at this two idiots. 😂

Secret Wardrobe Of The Duchess
3 months ago

crystalcat369: I'm the type of person that is quite picky about what I read including novels, comics and manga in this list too. So I judge through artstyle and colour/non-colour, how often it updates and many other factors (possibly big or small) so from glance I can tell us enjoy this manga truthlly I don't know how long but for a long period of time, I've read the summary already pretty good. ( some may say " you shouldn't judge a book by its cover" but we'll we all do at first glance we all have thoughts running through our minds anyways)

Secret Wardrobe Of The Duchess
3 months ago
Reading Status: C151
I find this novel funny especially how the ML is competitive with himself and how they're secretly like each other which makes the it more funny lol. It's funny how the ML would flex everytime and would seduce her with his pretty face lol.

The MC came back from the past and determined to find her love. But she was surprised that the Duke (ML) proposed to her.

Try reading this, it's funny and romantic, and y'all gonna laugh at this two idiots. 😂 View More
Secret Wardrobe Of The Duchess
3 months ago

Fireheart09: I'm glad that he knows now and I can understand him wanting her to fall in love with the present him and all that but man is he silly.
Also i was thinking that since he was planning to destroy Stella as soon as they defeated the dragon but that obviously didn't happen, someone close to him must have betrayed him right? Like sir Stephen who sends secret letters about Edgar to someone for example.

Secret Wardrobe Of The Duchess · C149
3 months ago
I honestly think that Stephen is one of the dragons. Aren't there two well known dragons? The one who is play boy and would kidnap girls, and the other is mysterious View More

Fireheart09: I'm glad that he knows now and I can understand him wanting her to fall in love with the present him and all that but man is he silly.
Also i was thinking that since he was planning to destroy Stella as soon as they defeated the dragon but that obviously didn't happen, someone close to him must have betrayed him right? Like sir Stephen who sends secret letters about Edgar to someone for example.

Secret Wardrobe Of The Duchess · C149
3 months ago

Roxandra29: She’s a nymph... those things are not too rational. In fact, all Greek legends emphasize just how much these mythical gods and creatures were ruled by their emotions, rather than their common sense.

Secret Wardrobe Of The Duchess · C43
3 months ago

Shameless_Orchid: Lmao, when I read the novel's description I was thinking the same! The counterattack system novels always makes me see the other transmigration/reincarnation novels with a new light. The whole "ended up in another world/time where random handsome dude rapes the FL and she letting him be abusive/toxic/manipulative (aka overbearing CEO type?), having golden finger and knowing every random sht, handsome men randomly throws themselves on her, every female ugly compared to her and the villains are super dumb 2D characters to let the FL look smart" type of novel makes me never read Chinese novels again because it's just dumb. Especially how they promote rape as a romantic thing because the ML is handsome (and rich sometimes) .

I think I skip this novel too...

Beauty and the Beast: Wolf Hubby XOXO
4 months ago
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