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    Destiny Forged

    Video Games Action Fantasy Game Elements Martial Arts Virtual Reality MMORPG Sword Wielder

    4.7

    Despite possessing unrivaled combat prowess and unparalleled instincts, he had always lived a restricted life, hidden away from the rest of the world. However, with the appearance of the VRMMORPG, Destiny Forged, he can finally show his existence to the world and rise above the elites and experts. Follow our protagonist as he grabs ahold of his own destiny and battle against fate. (Much thanks to Yaoyueyi for the amazing cover!) ____________________ Tags: [MMORPG], [Virtual Reality], [Overpowered Protagonist], [Martial Arts], [Fantasy], [Romantic Subplot], [Action], [Level System], [Game Elements], [Sword Wielder], [Sword and Magic], [Gods], [Game Ranking System] ____________________ ScribbleHub: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/15396/destiny-forged/ RoyalRoad: https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/23898/destiny-forged ____________________ If you want to support the author then please head at: Patreon: https://www.patreon.com/DestinyForged Paypal: paypal.me/jgavia2410

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Marvel: My Own Path
2 months ago

Reflex: The first thing Y'all should know is that this novel rushed like a tempest in the Power Rankings, storming its way to the Rank 80s-70s in less than 3 weeks—this itself already speaks for the novel alone.

Anyway, here's the real review:

The concept of this novel is the typical System and Overpowered MC, but what I can say about it is that—it was written well, great even!

Ignore the low star reviews as the context of their reviews is simply because of how the author has written the MC—portraying him as a young man with a really painful past (pre-reincarnation), by painful as in one of the most tragic backstory ever, despite it being written so short! This leads to the MC having an extreme personality, (in my opinion, he's actually chill and awesome)

And the other thing that they're non-sensically spouting on and on about is the System. However, up to the current chapter, the author has clearly portrayed the system as something like a 'brother-in-arms' type of system, instead of the usual System in other Fan-fic novels ordering the MC around like a little bish. It isn't like this so don't worry about it!

The Writing Quality is nigh-perfect, with unnoticeable grammar mistakes here and there, but nothing too big. I can tell that the author writes, edits, and proofreads himself—which is actually a hard task, speaking from experience here!
I'm just really impressed with this novel's quality!

Marvel: My Own Path
2 months ago
Reading Status: C19
The first thing Y'all should know is that this novel rushed like a tempest in the Power Rankings, storming its way to the Rank 80s-70s in less than 3 weeks—this itself already speaks for the novel alone.

Anyway, here's the real review:

The concept of this novel is the typical System and Overpowered MC, but what I can say about it is that—it was written well, great even!

Ignore the low star reviews as the context of their reviews is simply because of how the author has written the MC—portraying him as a young man with a really painful past (pre-reincarnation), by painful as in one of the most tragic backstory ever, despite it being written so short! This leads to the MC having an extreme personality, (in my opinion, he's actually chill and awesome)

And the other thing that they're non-sensically spouting on and on about is the System. However, up to the current chapter, the author has clearly portrayed the system as something like a 'brother-in-arms' type of system, instead of the usual System in other Fan-fic novels ordering the MC around like a little bish. It isn't like this so don't worry about it!

The Writing Quality is nigh-perfect, with unnoticeable grammar mistakes here and there, but nothing too big. I can tell that the author writes, edits, and proofreads himself—which is actually a hard task, speaking from experience here!
I'm just really impressed with this novel's quality! View More
Marvel: My Own Path
2 months ago

Wandering_Sage: Hi readers, it's Sage here. I just wanted to give a heads up my readers that although I'm a fan of Marvel, I'm a total ******* when it comes to MCU, let alone the comics which I haven't read, at all... However, I'll definitely do some research as I continue this novel so that I don't go astray, so please no H8!

**: This isn't a shameless 5-star review! Not at all!

Marvel: My Own Path
2 months ago

KingoftheWorld: Okay, first things first, if you don't mind the usual System + OP MC trope, then this novel is for you! Don't worry about the MC being too OP. Although he indeed is overpowered, it isn't overly so and definitely isn't all because of the System. It's 50-50, between the System and the ability of the MC himself.

Second, if you're hesitating due to the other low-rate reviews—ignore them! Their contents are all the same anyway. They complain about the novel's 'unoriginality' even though its the mainstream concept right now. They also cry about the fact that the MC's past is tragic, making him an unlikeable character—I call bull**** though. THEY SIMPLY DON'T LIKE THE MC! That's why they rated this novel as such. But as I have read up to the latest chapter, I can safely say that you will like how 'fearless' and 'confident' the MC is.

And lastly, this novel's writing quality is just excellent! It's on par with, if not above, the best translation works in this site!

Conclusion: Those that gave 3 stars and below are the people that don't like the MC and the System trope despite it being written well. There's a reason that this novel climbed the Top 70 in Power Raking IN JUST 2 WEEKS!!

Marvel: My Own Path
2 months ago
I don't have any chapters in stock. View More

weedyovi: can I get a novel chapter faster than realease date

Destiny Forged · C18
6 months ago
Huh? I don't understand. Watchu mean? View More

weedyovi: Can i buy your storie for my personal collection?

Destiny Forged · C18
6 months ago
See this! I just gifted the story: Lollipop View More
Soul of Searing Steel · C1
6 months ago
Ain't gonna do that! :) Keep reading though, you might be surprised in the future. View More

NeoEnigma: Please don't!!! He's already strong enough without one if he join their guild then isn't that a waste, instead getting stronger his growth will be slow down.
But if he only cooperate for something their guild can give to him or the guild leadership and half of the guild's share were given to him then perhaps it could work, maybe?

Destiny Forged · C18
6 months ago

TheDendelion: future king of wolf fenrir ???

Destiny Forged · C18
6 months ago
I have to disappoint you there, Jaden will be joining this guild (Spoiler?). After all, why not right? One of the reasons he plays DF is to interact with people, which he couldn't do before IRL. View More

rifky: I hope he doesnt went to join their guild because one of them is charm him

Destiny Forged · C18
6 months ago
monsters and npcs have different ranks View More

SimpleSlash: Is this imperial rank suppose to be that emperor rank instead?

Destiny Forged · C15
6 months ago

Chubbikis: First! and thanks for the chapter

Destiny Forged · C15
6 months ago
Sure thing. View More

SimpleSlash: I’m confused about this rank system I mean I screenshot all the ranks for item,titles,equipment,npc and monsters so which system does quests follows? Maybe you should make an glossary anyway thanks for the chapter

Destiny Forged · C14
6 months ago

SimpleSlash: There suppose to be no royal rank in the equipment ranks doe??

Destiny Forged · C13
6 months ago

Ethlathini: quality over quantity

Destiny Forged · C11
6 months ago
See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon View More
Soul of Searing Steel · C1
6 months ago
See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon View More
Soul of Searing Steel · C1
6 months ago
See this! I just gifted the story: Potion View More
Ancient Godly Monarch · C1
6 months ago

Book_Keeper: Hello, your novel has been assessed by Virtual Bookshelf.
To see your assessment results, please navigate to
https://virtualbookshelf.home.blog/2019/03/26/webnovel-assessments-35/
After ten additional chapters, you may request to be assessed again.
Thank you, and the best of luck on your writing endeavors! :)

Destiny Forged · C10
6 months ago

WedhusSlayer: sup bro! thanks for the update

Destiny Forged · C10
6 months ago
😂 😂 😂 Yudodis View More

Schnee_: One of the top good novel i read this month if i ranked it it will be at 3 out of 50 novels and i enjoy the whole plot (i thought the gods are true and they want to make jaden strong to help them wich is not jaden is just too strong but i like it) and while jaden pick the body strength why not the others did it there are young masters who are told to practice martial arts and strenghten their body too...

I give 4 star at Update stability because you dont update evrey hour(i want author to diebecause of exhaustion LOL)

Destiny Forged
6 months ago

DragonTreasures: What else can I say but keep going? If you don't keep going, you won't improve, and if you don't improve you won't be able to hone your skills. Overall, the dialog was pretty great, making me feel in game, and you kept my eyes moving from sentence to sentence.

However, in some parts, maybe a little bit more sentence variation, especially in the longer paragraphs. Don't be afraid to use more prepositions and conjunctive clauses, but that aside overall endearing and hope you make it to the 100th chapter.

Last thing, there were some minor grammar things I spotted, but I don't think you didn't realize you were doing it. Especially in this web novels, you can't always resort to using perfect grammar. Anyways, all I care about is this having more chapters! Keep writing!

Destiny Forged
6 months ago
See this! I just gifted the story: Lollipop View More
Soul of Searing Steel · C1
6 months ago
See this! I just gifted the story: Lollipop View More
Soul of Searing Steel · C1
6 months ago

not2complex: This is so well written. I was pulled in and had major mental fun. I love the background info and the world you are creating. It is only at 9 chapters but this author writes actual chapters so they are long and full of important info (no info dumps).
This story has so much potential. I really hope the writer continues.
I read reviews to better understand plot. I don't really pay attention to negative reviews because usually they are just an expression of preference and not an actual reflection on work. Even though I don't pay attention they are still there to see and so I realized that writers have to fight to write. Its like they have to walk across a battle field - they gotta pass the dead bodies!
SOOOO please keep writing - the story is worth it!

Destiny Forged
6 months ago
Thank you for reading! And indeed you are correct at the latter part of your review. The path to the apex is always paved with the bones of the dead, or the negative readers in this case, and the blood of the enemies (bad reviews) as stepping stones to reach the top. Welp once more, thanks for reading! View More

not2complex: This is so well written. I was pulled in and had major mental fun. I love the background info and the world you are creating. It is only at 9 chapters but this author writes actual chapters so they are long and full of important info (no info dumps).
This story has so much potential. I really hope the writer continues.
I read reviews to better understand plot. I don't really pay attention to negative reviews because usually they are just an expression of preference and not an actual reflection on work. Even though I don't pay attention they are still there to see and so I realized that writers have to fight to write. Its like they have to walk across a battle field - they gotta pass the dead bodies!
SOOOO please keep writing - the story is worth it!

Destiny Forged
6 months ago
It's monstrously high since Luck is more of an intangible and random stat rather than the other 3 innate stats. And then enter the OP titles... View More

SimpleSlash: So was 30 allot?? Cuz from everything he has like a rich af and famous family and amazing skills and godly looks shouldn’t that mean someone got allot of luk on them? Welp

Destiny Forged · C9
6 months ago

Reflex: Since It's a tradition to rate one's web novel with 5 stars, I shall shamelessly do so as well.

Anyway, further information and world-building will be built up as I continue the novel...

And finally, please do enjoy and if possible, leave comments and reviews so I can improve my work further, thank you! :)

-Reflex

Destiny Forged
6 months ago
His high Charm stat could be said to come from his otherworldly looks. As for Luck there's really no source for it to have such high points other than one's inborn or innate luck. View More

SimpleSlash: Ooo you changed it from chapter 2 I see but why?

Destiny Forged · C9
6 months ago
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