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There’s no character development The story somewhat feels like a journal in the sense that there is almost no emotion involved in anything that happens.

Started out great but once you reach 60 to 80 chapters in it turns into the (next episode of dragon ball z) meaning the next 60 chapters are all one fight. It’s just filler and it’s boring filler at that.

This isn’t even a Fanfic it’s just an advertisement for the author’s Patreon.

Great novel! I love fishing abilities, unfortunately I can’t continue with this after chapter 19 because it is a completely illogical twist. Well here’s hoping that there’ll be a clone of this novel soon!

Honestly the story started out fine. I like the villain with a plot changing system type of story, but there are so many plot holes and inconsistencies especially in the later chapters I had to give up on reading it before making it to chapter 50. I think it’s a great first draft for a story but the author should probably use it as just that. I would love to see it rewritten and have those plot holes filled.

Uhg I feel sick trying to read this, the spacing is all wrong. I think this might be the first time I’ve ever gotten motion sickness from reading a novel.

I’m all for a multiversal shop type system but I think the author may have picked the wrong target audience to pair with it not to mention the Chinese idioms that really don’t translate well over to English.

The story is decent up until they introduce the fact that there are multiple reincarnated characters all who have fragments of the MC’s system. That in itself doesn’t ruin the story but it’s more the fact that almost all of the rest of the story is written in the perspective of those other reincarnated characters, after reading around 200 chapters I don’t think the author even remembers who the MC is anymore.

The story is just a excuse for the author to vent their necrophilia desires, the entire first world is just him describing how much he wants to have sex with a corpse. The system is fine but the author’s preferences made me want to puke within the first 20ish chapters.

I like the idea of a gatcha power but the fact that it’s a common ability in the world is a disappointment even if his is better. I very much like the world background I’m a huge fan of novels like infinite mana in the apocalypse so a system world with awakeners and randomly appearing dungeons is very appealing. What I absolutely hate is the MC he’s a complete pushover and that alone makes it almost unreadable for me not to mention the fact that he comes with all of his gatcha summons pre-unlocked which completely makes the gatcha aspect pointless it would be better to just call him a summoner.

Crazy? I Was Crazy Once. They Locked Me In A Room. A Rubber Room. A Rubber Room With Rats. And Rats Make Me Crazy. Crazy? I Was Crazy Once. They Locked Me In A Room. A Rubber Room. A Rubber Room With Rats. And Rats Make Me Crazy.Crazy? I Was Crazy Once. They Locked Me In A Room. A Rubber Room. A Rubber Room With Rats. And Rats Make Me Crazy.Crazy? I Was Crazy Once. They Locked Me In A Room. A Rubber Room. A Rubber Room With Rats. And Rats Make Me Crazy.Crazy? I Was Crazy Once. They Locked Me In A Room. A Rubber Room. A Rubber Room With Rats. And Rats Make Me Crazy.Crazy? I Was Crazy Once. They Locked Me In A Room. A Rubber Room. A Rubber Room With Rats. And Rats Make Me Crazy.

It’s just a copy of a novel on FanFiction.Net, I think it’s called Percy Jackson and the Game. I don’t care if you post it on here but you should at least give credit to the author of the fanfic.

MC goes on and on about not being a simp for the first 5 chapters but then folds like a paper fan in chapter 7 becoming a simp after a single setback. It’s unfortunate because I was looking forward to a new danmachi fanfic but I can already see where this is going so I’m gonna dip here.

If you can get past the weird use of [] instead of “” it’s a fairly good fanfic up until around chapter sixty after which you start seeing the normal problems that quickly ruin a good story such as huge nerfs to the MC or extremely cheap and forced romance that takes less than a chapter to develop into undying love.

Honestly I like the idea of how the mc’s power works but it could have been implemented better in a different situation. Also I absolutely hate when a MC has the perception of a brick completely unaware of what is happening around them.

Ah yes, I had to drop this after 5 chapters just because of the rampant Selfcest. The Su Yu on Su Yu action was too much for my poor innocent eyes.