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Several mistakes here and there, with punctuation and what not. It got worse at the end of the chapter.

But I think you have a more serious problem with the world building here, what's with the the girls being introduced as anime girls?
He has several? From different universes? How did he got them?
Why where they introduced as anime girls? Instead of just girls he managed to get.

This is a serious problem because it gives the impression the world is a mess, where the people would know they are finction characters, from an animation.

This would be like if you meet a guy in new york, and he said he had several earthling girlfriends. As opposed to what? Martian girlfriends? The distinction need to be made to give the world inside the novel consistence and logic. Or else no one will be able to follow the logic, including yourself, author. View More
Lewd System · C2
1 month ago
There is no need to limit yourself to a single first or third person for the whole novel. Just try not to change between pov more than once in a single chapter, that is really annoying. View More
Reborn in Tales of Demons and Gods · C6
3 months ago
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Reborn in Tales of Demons and Gods · C6
3 months ago
"I manga to reach the peask of Earthen..."
Is that a typo? Manga? Strangest typo I've ever seen xD
I think you meant managed. View More
Reborn in Tales of Demons and Gods · C5
3 months ago
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Reborn in Tales of Demons and Gods · C5
3 months ago
Hey the novel got discontinued because the author dropped it to write another one. So there is nothing to translate, we will never know what happened after Nie li became the leader of that sect. View More
Reborn in Tales of Demons and Gods · C1
3 months ago
I didn't understand the last part. Why can't they create mythical templates? The ability to do so is learnt and not inherited.
He's giving them a path to reach the same place he is at, there is no reason to believe they won't experiment with genetic manipulation as he is doing. View More
Low Dimensional Game · C71
3 months ago
Jesus Christ author, just get on with the story, so much monologue from a side character. View More
End of the Magic Era · C7
3 months ago
I fell like I'm missing something... is this the rumored estearn humour? View More
Eldritch Shop System · C3
3 months ago
Some mistakes;
At the beggining he started talking about himself in the first person " I don't know how long...", and all of a sudden started describing himself on the third person, almost as an observant " His power source, it's been sealed?".
Also, he said that everything he learned and experienced was gone. And in the next sentence contradicted himself by saying he still has his memories and knowledge. Or is it that he remembered it in the next sentece his lost memories?
"What they didn't expect was it was going so well"
This sentence makes no sense in the context provided. They didn't expect something they have been doing for a long time going so well?


There are more, but I will stop here. View More
Rebirth in Against the Gods with The Ultimate System · C1
3 months ago
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Rebirth in Against the Gods with The Ultimate System · C1
3 months ago
Great story, one of few that I know of who make a distinction between, owning a system, and the system owning you.
One might think think this is a silly distinction, but it is not, so namy novels where the Mc has no choice but to comply. View More
A Stay-at-home Dad's Restaurant In An Alternate World · C1
3 months ago

Hilers: Moral of the story, "where's my roast goose?"

A Stay-at-home Dad's Restaurant In An Alternate World · C21
3 months ago

Arenzure: The system is probably planning on how to migrate to Amy after hearing that!

A Stay-at-home Dad's Restaurant In An Alternate World · C21
3 months ago
So many mistakes that I would like to edit it for you, but I can't copy and paste on this website. View More
A Titleless Story · C1
3 months ago
Several mistakes on this chapter as well. I can't copy and paste from this website anymore, so I can't point them to you. I wonder why? I could do it a couple weeks ago. View More
Entering the World of HSDxD · C2
3 months ago
Need a review, too many mistakes and lack of ponctuation in the first part. View More
Entering the World of HSDxD · C1
3 months ago
Never read the novel, but I will give this one a go. View More
Absolute Strengthening Technique · C1
3 months ago
'Two people is seen...' Two people, plural, therefore it should be, 'Two people are seen. View More
[1]Overpowered Life in One Piece · C1
3 months ago
This novel is great. Don't abandon it. ++ View More
One Piece: World Traveler · C27
3 months ago

Aizen_Sosuke: everything is part of my plan! you coming here was also a part of my big plan.

One Piece: World Traveler · C1
3 months ago
I'm one of your readers, you are doing a good job with this one.
The flow of the novel is good and there are very few mistakes. View More
A new life in High School DXD · C59
4 months ago
There are too many grammatical errors for me to point out all of them. But I still like your story overall, would appreciate if you posted more chapters. :) View More
God Hacker of Lust · C14
4 months ago
Several mistakes with pronouns in the beggining, as God was speaking about the MC life he often mentioned it in the first person. View More
God Hacker of Lust · C1
4 months ago
Your grammar sucks, but for some reason I can't stop reading it.
Your story is really interesting, I hope you continue writting. View More
My Mom in Another World · C32
4 months ago
This is gold. Love it. View More
My Mom in Another World · C6
4 months ago
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Fun in Highschool DxD world
5 months ago
So many mistakes with grammar in this chapter, too many in fact to point out. Need a review. View More
Fun in Highschool DxD world · C55
5 months ago
This chapter and the last one, has so many grammar mistakes, you should review them. View More
Fun in Highschool DxD world · C41
5 months ago
Using the prefix 'tan' is really chunni. I understand why they used it as children, but is it really necessary to use it around other people? If I can remember correctly, even Issei did not used it around other people in the animation. View More
Fun in Highschool DxD world · C22
5 months ago
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