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the original is much better than this. Like really another mystery i though u will improve story but its not its lame.

typical mistake with this traslation people. why bother translate it properly to english when u make the biggest mistake of all the names and etc. like did u even read the OG work cause if u read the OG u will directly know the names like cmon man do some research first before translating. i appreciate ur work for translating it to english but do some justise on it

fuck this guy. can't believe will upload shit without proofreading. such a fucking rookie mistake. cmon every chapter there's always a mistake and the problem is it's not the grammar it's the names wtf so fucking dumb. Ur translating but u can translate the grammar properly but the names cmon bruh.

Man a fanfic trying so hard lol really a chapter for this?? Like really? Wasted stuff its fanfiction u dont need to waste to explain everything. We already know it in the iriginal. Lol

Is it me or what that like im reading the original style of writing too slow too many explantions like this is a fanfic u dobt need to give ur all by explaning every detail what ur doing like im bored im not here to read a original work thou. Its weird for me lol.

Harem alert slow pace type atoryline cmon ita already copy pasted atory of luffy u dont need to milk it so much like its like 1 manga 1 chapter its so boring already we understand the training arc but cmon even in this part u gonna prolong it.

So basically its a new person with the memory of hisao and indra? Right? Not hisao himself who reincarnated?

Man too much talk no jutsu. Like cmon its so xianxia type already always late then talk no jutsu then not using all the powers when fighting like i hate chinese writers man like even a fanfic can they make it normal lol. I know u just translated this one but cant help to react to the ff lol.

Man i lost interest i thought it will have a high quality stuff exploitation but where given with childish pranks and thoughts like the story start with a bang but when the madara moment came the humour become so unbearable like im thinking is this a work of a 5 yr old. Maybe it just me it things they are doing is so basic plus they have aizen loki its just the humour is so childish. Maybe my expectation is so high on this one that it did not deliver want i want lol. Sorry author its just my honest opinion.

Boring u dont need to prolong this arc. U already know whats gonna happen in the story but milking it by not finishing the fights and hiding its strengths whats the point in making him OP were just basically reading the fillers from the original story. "if u dont like OP mc this is not for u" in the descrip but on the other hand kage powers cant finish fight easily for cliche equals boring no excitement better put a OP mc than 1 jutsu per chapter just to prolong the fight like cmon ur just copying narutos plot u dont need to try hard so much by milking arcs like this.