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  • The Silver Knight

    The Silver Knight

    Fantasy

    It came without any warning. Yes, this sight... When I opened my eyes, I wasn't on Earth anymore, but inside a novel I knew all too well. This is the story of a ruthless youth, striving to become stronger everyday, relentlessly striving for better techniques, more wealth, and maybe...love

  • Blood Lotus

    Blood Lotus

    Fantasy BioChip

    It came without warning. Transmigration, that is. “Fate is but a dying belief…of a world that will soon be home to chaos. Like a single lotus flower, the future blossoms; Upon its petals, I shall embrace chaos.” With the help of his biochip, Drodosis will rise from a baby to a full-fledged adult, always striving to accomplish his dreams, by any means necessary.

Moments

TheGentlemenWorld: Ah yes... a 94 year old with a anime profile picture...

Assassination System · C1
1 month ago

Democratis: When One Piece ends, it will be because Earth exploded and everyone died XD

Assassination System · C1
1 month ago

TheAdventurer: Hahahaha, really, it won't end

Assassination System · C1
1 month ago

Freelance_r: One piece will be passed to the next generation like a family heirloom

Assassination System · C1
1 month ago

Daoist_Dan: Impossible, One piece will never end. It's fine if you want to make up stuff about his past but try to make it a little believable.

Assassination System · C1
1 month ago

Komekonsad: Need MOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEeEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

The Water Body Refinement Adept
3 months ago

Pavan1234: Good biochip fantasy novels are rare.

Hope author completes this novel.

Thanks for writing this novel.

Hope this gets more popular.

Still not reached 140 characters.

The Water Body Refinement Adept
3 months ago

Ehbon: I am happy to see a story appear on this site with a setting similar to Age of Adepts and WMW, so I’ve decided to do my best to review it and maybe help the author steer clear of some of the pitfalls Age of Adepts fell to. The main character being a Water Body Refining Adept is a new and novel idea, please stick to it. In later chapters we can already see the main character going down the same path as the Mc in age of adepts, in that he is trying his hand at making golems. Please, pleeeeaaaassse, don’t make this a story about the main character stomping his way through all obstacles in his path with an army of golems that he didn’t even really have to work for. That undermines the entire point of this story being about a Water Body Refining Adept. Using and making golems is fine, but I would recommend some hefty limitations or time investments to make it so he has to primarily rely on his own efforts. For example, you could make it so using golems at an adept level of combat requires all of your focus to control the golem. This would allow golem centered adepts to still exist, while preventing Drodosis from cheating his way through every battle by using an army of golems to win. I’d also recommend making it ridiculously difficult and expensive to make even a single golem at the adept level, that way he’ll have to be careful using them and not just throw them at his problems. If this were a story about a golem adept, I wouldn’t be nearly as concerned, but lately almost all of the focus has been devoted to Knight training and golem making. He has made pitiful progress on his path as a Water Body Refining Adept in comparison to all the results he’s seen along the other paths, mainly because he hasn’t been devoting his time to his original goal and keeps getting distracted by all these side projects. He hasn’t even asked for Blackwater as a reward yet, despite it being required for the only water body refining spell he knows of.

Writing quality is mostly good, though I would recommend checking your usage of the word “expensive”. You keep writing it as “expansive” instead, and they are two different words with two entirely different meanings. Besides that, just be on the look out for spelling and grammar errors and improve as you go along. I have already noticed some improvement along this front in later chapters.

As far as character development for Drodosis goes... I’m happy with it, ultimately it could be better but it’s more than I was expecting. He isn’t just a murder-happy cold Adept with no moral principle, instead we see that he values friendship and loyalty and has a few vices (such as his desire to be praised). I hope we see him try and work towards his family gaining a set of morals too, and maybe see him getting some personal attachments of his own to a few of the side characters to humanize him a bit.

Anyways, good start to the novel and I hope to see much more in the future!

The Water Body Refinement Adept
3 months ago

basileuse13: Hi!
I hope you're enjoying my novel, and if you aren't, please let me know why in the comment section! I will read everything, trust me!
Well, well, well...Since I can rate my own work, I might as well rate the story with 5 stars haha!

The Water Body Refinement Adept
3 months ago

DarKing93: Need MOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
Need MOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
Need MOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
Need MOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
Need MOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
PLEASE

The Water Body Refinement Adept
3 months ago

Kurosis: An amazing story much better quality then some of the crap here. The horror of finding out you reached the last chapter sucks. Plz keep going and dont drop for the love of god too many have been droped recently

The Water Body Refinement Adept
3 months ago

Reapout: It might be a bit quick to judge but this story is quite enjoyable for now.
I am native english speaker but i didn’t spot any mistakes
Thank you and please don’t drop this

Blood Lotus
6 months ago
Thanks for the reply! I'll definitely work on the world background ;) View More

nemery11: great novel with bio-chip tag (which like a lot). i like how you did not the MC op.
Writing Quality: well English is not my first language, but i am not having trouble reading and i find it above average.
Character Design: i find it good so far.
World Background: here is my problem, i think the world (MC surrounding) need more description.

however, so far so good i like it very much and would like to see more chapters. keep the good work author 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

Blood Lotus
6 months ago

nemery11: great novel with bio-chip tag (which like a lot). i like how you did not the MC op.
Writing Quality: well English is not my first language, but i am not having trouble reading and i find it above average.
Character Design: i find it good so far.
World Background: here is my problem, i think the world (MC surrounding) need more description.

however, so far so good i like it very much and would like to see more chapters. keep the good work author 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

Blood Lotus
6 months ago
I didn't drop it, but I didn't have a lot of time to write. Sorry for the inconvenience haha View More

232323232322323232: Authors can rate their own stories, lol.
I will give myself a 4-stars rating, since I don't believe in perfection.
Have a good read, and please write some critiques. I am open to suggestions.

Blood Lotus
6 months ago

nemery11: did you drop the novel.
it's was a good one 💔

Blood Lotus
6 months ago

nemery11: morrrrrrrrrrrrrrre please

Blood Lotus · C9
6 months ago

nemery11: good so far, but i hoped you could describe the surrounding

Blood Lotus · C2
6 months ago
Corrected! View More
Blood Lotus · C1
6 months ago

nemery11: although I don't what the effects are.
should be : although I don't know what the effects are.

Blood Lotus · C1
6 months ago

FallingBlossom: I am really enjoying this story and hope that it continues without the author dropping it. :) WOrds...t wgt3gt3gg wgg gtwg wg erewg ewg ewe weg

Blood Lotus
6 months ago

ThrustThunder: If you'd like some suggestions of my favorite Novels:
~The New World by Monsoon117 (Teen's World is engulfed by a System. Alone and trapped, he must suffer and endure to survive. VERY WELL WRITTEN!) 5/17/2017
~The Legend of Randidly Ghosthound by puddles4263 (Spiritual inspiration to New World. Guy defends Neewbie Village against Monster waves to survive System World) 3/31/2017
~The Games We Play by Ryuugi (Kid gains power of Videogame Protagonist, Min/max's his skills. Must pretend to be Badass Mafia Boss to outsmart Godly enemies. The most Cunning/Crafty MC I've read in a long time.) 2015
~A Monster Who Levels Up (Guy transforms into Monsters as his trait, Uses their unique skills to become Op/Rich) 2017
~The Novel's Extra (Same Author as MWLU about Author who is trapped in his own Novel by a Ghost Writer, must make himself Plot Relevant to gain Exp) 2018
~The World Turned into a Game After I Woke up (Guy's World gains Gaming System, Gets killed so much he returns to the past, Shameless looting ensues! Fast food) 2017
~Worth the Candle by Cthulhuraejepsen (Kid appears in a Battle Royal based of the D&D World he created, gets skillsheet, ruminates on tropes) 2017
~Dragonborn Saga by Don_Dokhmesy (Guy reborn into a overly Modded VR Skyrim World, Becomes Lord of Immersion!) 2018
~The Tutorial is Too Hard (Guy mistakenly chooses Hell mode Yutorial when World gains system, must become OP to survive) 2015
~Seoul Station’s Necromancer (Guy returns from conquering a System World to find it has bleed into his own World, becomes OP) 2016
~The Arcane Emperor (Guy accidently transports himself to Game System World, Gets OP Learning class) 2013
~Shadow Hack (Guy gets Shadow Clones to XP grind for him, becomes more OP every chapter) 2017
~Leveling Up And Becoming Undefeatable (NEET Reincarnated with a System that gives the Skills of Other Wuxia Protagonists, junk food writing at it's most shameless) 2013
~Invincible Level Up (Begins exactly as LUaBU, but takes a more serious World building approach) 2012
~Godly Model Creator (Kid in Superpower World uses ability to copy others skills to become OP, Kills his enemies!) 2013
~The Strongest Gene (Guy reincarnates to World of genetic modification with cheat skill of Luck. Creative face slapping abounds) 2017
~Rebirth of the Thief Who Roamed the World (Guy regresses and uses VRMMO to get revenge on enemies by creating an Empire of Brothers-in-Arms funded by Shameless looting. OG of it's Genre) 2010
~Reincarnation Of The Strongest Sword God (Rips off Rebirth heavily, but the release rate is exemplary and I've commented on almost every chapter) 2015
~Night Ranger (Transferred into a D&D VRMMORPG, Guy must gain Power before the Apocalypse happens) 2015
~Advent of the Archmage (Same as Night Ranger but more Magic Driven) 2016
~Warlock of the Magus World (Genius with a Biochip reincarnates into the wizard world, Devours his enemies. The best example of a *Ruthless* MC I've ever read) 2015
~The Wizard World (Chip story that has very detailed set pieces, like reading a vivid Lucid dream) 2012
~Age of Adepts (Another Wizard chip story about a truly guileful MC) 2016
~When A Mage Revolts (Guy reincarnates with a system that trolls him, eventually becomes the Hero of all persecuted Mages) 2016
~The Book Eating Magician (Guy's hand turns into a Grimoire that can eat books to learn magic) 2017
~Tales of Demons and Gods (Mad Snail's Novel, turned Manga, turned Anime about a regressor who uses his Advanced knowledge to become rich and slap faces) 2015
~Upgrade Specialist in Another World (Increase your cultivation by making your accessories OP? Yes please!) 2011
~Strongest Abandoned Son (A Cultivator reincarnates into our World, uses powers to slap faces and get rich) 2012
~The Desolate Era (Kid reincarnates into Wuxia World with OP cultivation technique, eventually kills Gods with his sword. First Novel I read here.) 2014

The City of Terror · C1
7 months ago

N0xiety: Doesn't make sense at all... Why would he pay 50 stones to people with mc's power level? He can probably hire several grand knights with such an ammount if it's turned into gold! Mc isn't a wizard yet and can't use spells so what's the point of hiring him? Just hire 50 archers instead of mc with the same ammount of money... There is no logic in this novel.......

The Wizard World · C56
8 months ago

232323232322323232: Authors can rate their own stories, lol.
I will give myself a 4-stars rating, since I don't believe in perfection.
Have a good read, and please write some critiques. I am open to suggestions.

Blood Lotus
8 months ago
Reading Status: C0
Authors can rate their own stories, lol.
I will give myself a 4-stars rating, since I don't believe in perfection.
Have a good read, and please write some critiques. I am open to suggestions. View More
Blood Lotus
8 months ago

Dvaita: "I've reached the strength of 6 men", Micheal thought, "Now I can give a girl a gangbang all by myself!"

Reborn: Apocalypse - Volume 3 · C0
8 months ago
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The Silver Knight
8 months ago

232323232322323232: Shameless Author Review here!
As far as I love dungeon and dragons and other novels that I have read, the one who really picked my interest were Age of Adepts and WMW. Hence, I decided to inspire myself to write this story, although I will take an entirely different point of view.
Good luck reading this!

The Silver Knight
8 months ago
Reading Status: C0
Shameless Author Review here!
As far as I love dungeon and dragons and other novels that I have read, the one who really picked my interest were Age of Adepts and WMW. Hence, I decided to inspire myself to write this story, although I will take an entirely different point of view.
Good luck reading this! View More
The Silver Knight
8 months ago

ThomasDarkrose: Writing Quality: 5/5 - While there are occasional typos, ****y tiny grammatical errors or punctuation errors, they do not detract from the story in any way. The writing is excellent and just draws you in.
Stability of Updates: 5/5 - The author pumps out chapters like a madman all in order to feed the addicted souls he has created. 'Nuff said.
Story Development: 5/5 - The story starts with a nieve and broken main character, Vahn, and through interactions with the world and the characters in it, he grows. Vahn still has a lot of growing to do and I, personally, look forward to seeing the man that Vahn will grow into.
Character Design: 4/5 - I would love to give the author 5/5 stars just for the design of Vahn, but I prefer to be honest and forthright. Because this is a fan-fiction many of the main characters were already designed by the original author of DanMachi. That said, Einlion takes those pre-existing characters and completely makes them his own without violating the source material. While reading this story you will be hard pressed to find any reason to complain about the use of the pre-existing characters, their reactions, or their believability.
World Background: 4/5 - Again, I would love to make this 5/5 stars, but the story takes place in a pre-existing world. Just like the characters though, the world is not violated or discarded it is embraced and honored.

Fan-fictions are a tough genre to write in, you have to take a world and characters that already exist, and are loved, then make them your own while writing your own story. Einlion does this exceptionally well and is crafting an amazing story that follows a unique and amazing character. The only thing I could possibly complain about is that I found this novel now instead of a year from now, I can't binge read it nearly enough.
On a final note, if you are a fan of DanMachi, or anime in general, and looking for a story with a unique and entertaining main character than I strongly recommend reading this story.

Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos
9 months ago
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