Misty_Gin

24d

Commented

Mid stage foundation establishment with perfect foundation got cornered by bunch of FE beast and random inner sect disciple. The strongest beast is just late stage and she already mid stage with perfect foundation, she should be one of the strongest in there.

"Brother Zhou Yun, the reason why he accepted me as his disciple was because I had a perfect foundation!"

Fantasy: I Can Instantly Comprehend Everything

Eastern · Vermeil

Misty_Gin

1mth

Commented

What a waste of stat, he should rank up at lvl 10 or even 9 because at that lvl his stat already reach ex in blessing board. Because at rank 2, 1 stat is higher than 1 rank 1 stat and now he splurge to level 13.

Strength: SSS1450→EX1999

Danmachi: I'm Leveling Up In The Dungeon

Anime & Comics · Metarln

Misty_Gin

2mth

Replied to SusshiRoll

But the next paragraph he say "he had turned the tide", that mean he kill someone significant that can threaten his sect. From there I can infer it's combined aperture because in battle of combined aperture, no aperture tempering can interfere and have any significant.

Initially, Jian Jinsheng had acquired a hidden cave and the resources within it, leading to a meteoric rise in his cultivation and soaring confidence. Subsequently, he even eliminated the Combined Aperture Tempering realm disciples of the Immortal Cloud Sword Sect and supported the nearly collapsing Divine Flame Sect.

Cultivation: Start From Simplifying Martial Arts Techniques

Eastern · Eat More Fish

Misty_Gin

2mth

Replied to SusshiRoll

Do you remember Immortal Cloud have 2 combined aperture and one of them killed by him??

Initially, Jian Jinsheng had acquired a hidden cave and the resources within it, leading to a meteoric rise in his cultivation and soaring confidence. Subsequently, he even eliminated the Combined Aperture Tempering realm disciples of the Immortal Cloud Sword Sect and supported the nearly collapsing Divine Flame Sect.

Cultivation: Start From Simplifying Martial Arts Techniques

Eastern · Eat More Fish

Misty_Gin

4mth

Commented

Sad, one third is just repeated from previous chapter.

ch 96 Tyrion's Death

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Fantasy · RagingArtPunk

Misty_Gin

5mth

Commented

This is really confusing, in previous chap there's student that want to see him beaten but next chap it's just duel with no spectator.

ch 46 Alicia!

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Fantasy · RagingArtPunk

Misty_Gin

7mth

Replied to Uchiha_Laruto

If you make your MC a lingustic, he should be more creative in a world where language have power.

I Was Reincarnated as a Polyglot in Another World!

Fantasy · Uchiha_Laruto

Misty_Gin

7mth

Replied to Uchiha_Laruto

Good luck.

I Was Reincarnated as a Polyglot in Another World!

Fantasy · Uchiha_Laruto

Misty_Gin

7mth

Replied to Gamercat

I think first is stage and second is sub stage, so the space technique is higher grade than the fist.

This was the combination of the high-grade peak-level divine technique, Five Elements Space Splitting Fist, and the top-grade low-level divine technique, Void Annihilation Blade!

Contracted The Beautiful Triplets And I Gained The 10000x Rebate System

Action · Powerpuff Girl

Misty_Gin

7mth

Replied to Misty_Gin

How did my review become one paragraph when I made it around 5.

I Was Reincarnated as a Polyglot in Another World!

Fantasy · Uchiha_Laruto

Misty_Gin

7mth

Posted

Here i go for review.As long as I can read it's good enough for me.About the story, it's more like video game than novel because he feels like doing quest rather than showing his life and almost no interaction except the bare minimum.The plot is too smooth like when he need to infiltrate he conveniently get invisible spell, when he can't breach fortress there's people that help even thought they are not even close except the sword master, almost no guard around important people that become his target, never find a problem on the road, and many more.Need more detail in world building, fighting, item(I nearly though "morning star" is really morning star and not a sword, it's like naming a sword as "spear").You need to make character more realistic, MC is a PhD but he easily get manipulated without questioning anything, spineless top people with no authoritative presence.It's the most obvious for me.

I Was Reincarnated as a Polyglot in Another World!

Fantasy · Uchiha_Laruto

Misty_Gin

7mth

Replied to Ewan_Shin

You know he can only contract one at a time and still have cooldown for some time right???. That's why he can rebate the best choice and take the other if it's good enough.

[Information: The designated contract target will obtain the skeleton of the Level 5 Icewood Mystic Chicken in half an hour.]

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Action · Powerpuff Girl

Misty_Gin

7mth

Commented

Don't know if I should ask this?What part of description contain creation??? it's more about destruction.

"The Great Heaven Creation Palm, a Low Tian Dou Technique. It is created by this saint by using all of my strength to merge a hundred Dou Techniques. This palm technique emphasizes the concept of creation, breaking through the heavens and shattering all things with sheer force..."