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  • Versatile Gamer[Paused]

    Versatile Gamer[Paused]

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    A story about a man who lost someone important to him. A story where happiness and laughter exist and where darkness lay dormant, waiting to come out. Welcome to the adventures of Ray. - By no means do I own the Naruto, Dbz, and [Unknown for now]. -The first story so please have helpful mean comments rather than something that will make me feel offended enough to regret being Human. Thank You. Also, I don't own 90% of the quotes so don't hunt me. I can't give credit to the people saying it cause usually, the names are not there and I honestly don't want to look for it.

  • Gamer Naruto

    Gamer Naruto

    Anime & Comics System Action Naruto Good Fillers Smart Main Character

    4.7

    Naruto and the Gamer combined. I have seen other works and I want to try my own. Read reviews below for what you can expect. They are very accurate. Even the negative ones. (Honesty. That's what counts.) *VERY IMPORTANT* -I don't own GAMER OR NARUTO OR ANY OTHER ITEMS I USE FROM OTHER WORLDS !! I am only using this to create fun fanfics. I love each novel respectively and I still watch or read them all the time. Don't kill me.

  • A Destination[Paused]

    A Destination[Paused]

    Eastern Fantasy

    The journey of a modern young man in a cultivator world. -The cover art or any other art I will use in the future are not mine so if you find them, give them credit. They are the awesome ones.

  • New Timeline

    New Timeline

    Anime & Comics Action

    4.4

    This fanfiction is about a man from Earth being reborn as Goku. Typical? Yes it is. Unique? I hope to make it so. Fun? I will make sure of it. *I Do NOT OWN Any of the DB series whatsoever. All of this was created by the legend Akira Toriyama. I am merely putting a spin on the original DB series.*

  • A Strange Ordinary Person

    A Strange Ordinary Person

    Eastern Fantasy System Cultivation

    This story is about a man who lived the ordinary life that has been reborn. The only problem, he can't understand emotions much nor is he social and yet he was born in a world of cultivators. See his journey as he explores everything with his growing powers.

Moments

At least she isn't about to murder the other actresses. View More
Top Star: Journey to Become a Global Star · C77
1 week ago
Chinese Friends...you gotta appease them all the time by money or food right? They must be poor if every novel always has friends that ask for something. Now, where were your friends when you were in your past life huh? Why did they feel like making contact with you after you became famous? View More
Top Star: Journey to Become a Global Star · C73
2 weeks ago
Yup. Is it better and more clean? View More

AdrianVeidt: Bro did you reboot?

New Timeline · C1
3 weeks ago

AdrianVeidt: Bro did you reboot?

New Timeline · C1
3 weeks ago
Gone View More

Daijena: Wait, what happend to the old chapters :o

New Timeline · C1
3 weeks ago
Yes and I'm also adding extra chapters to fill in some stuff. To me, these chapters were pretty low quality so I tried to level it up a bit. Hopefully you like it. View More

WolfLord: So you just expanding some of the chapters and adding more content

New Timeline · C1
3 weeks ago
In this one yes. In another Dbz novel, it will be exclusively Chi-Chi or any other girl. View More

DragonkingKyo: is he still going to get with Bulma too?(while keeping Chichi)

New Timeline · C1
3 weeks ago
Yes, it is a rewrite. Hopefully, you like it. View More

DragonkingKyo: rewrite of what????

New Timeline · C1
3 weeks ago
No. I felt that this novel was going too fast and I missed a lot of quality moments. View More

WolfLord: What with the rewrite did you make to character OP so you start again by making him less powerful

New Timeline · C1
3 weeks ago
Lol. This dude is fickle as hell but that's okay; he's awesome! FAT BROTHERS UNITE WITH US!! View More
My Extraordinary Achievements · C80
1 month ago
Smart Fatty View More
My Extraordinary Achievements · C79
1 month ago

Daijena: In DragonBall Super, before the tournament that decides the fate of their universe, Gohan trained with Goku and mentioned how he'll get stronger without relying on Transformations like his father does. But he still uses his potential unlocked form, therefor I don't think it counts as transformation, it also doesn't cost stamina, ki or gives stress to his body. Unlike SSJ that is stressing and stamina consuming. So it should stack

New Timeline · C0
1 month ago
Cool. Have a good day View More

Im_U_Daddy: just DROPPED it, too much OP abilities makes your story BLAND

New Timeline · C0
1 month ago

Naruto_123: I guess it can be as Gohan is half human and sayain the potential form or mystic form is limit of human form .

Although there isn't many cons of having human and sayain genes together there are some that . Hybrids gain strength easily but it has limitations. If you compare the lvl 3 as between Vegeta and goku and trunks and Goten.

From what I understood that elder Kai unlocked Gohan's human potential as sayain potential is infinite . This hybrid cells goes into exited state in mystic form and can't handle the SS transformation. But if goku tries it it might open his 10% powers .

New Timeline · C0
1 month ago

DragonGodSmith3000: Well no one stood a chance against the ancient sayian cunber it took what they call Xeno goku an Xeno vegeta in ss4 just to drive him off I truly do think Gohan has a mutation of his own but I disagree with most potential I’d say that has to go to goten a really forgotten person he was born during ss3 time an as a baby and kid could easily reach ss2 theoretically his potential is the greatest as his sayian super cells are greater then any before him

New Timeline · C0
1 month ago

Heezus: Akira Toriyama stated in a interview that the mystic state is a transformation and not a power up of his normal state. Personally it makes no sense why he can't go super saiyan of top of it. I think that the reason the author didn't want that to happen is because of the power imbalance that it would cause it the show. You have to remember to Mystic Gohan was as strong as super buu(Picciolo and gotanks absorbs) and if Gohan was able to go super saiyan the fight would have been super easy and probally wouldn't have even lasted an episode. The plot would have ruined if Toriyama would have let gohan go super saiyan. So even if he created a big plot hole he still banned it. I personally don't really mind it since it allowed us to witness the kid buu arc which was legendary to me. All in all what i'm tryna say is it should be possible and if you want to do it in your story you can. I just don't really know it needed. Your main character is already overpowered and his gohan growth rate is ridiculous.

New Timeline · C0
1 month ago

Husnain_Ahmed: I feel like since gohan has more potential then all saoyams besides the lssj like broly and kale or ancient saiyans he should have a unique transformation that is unlocked when he stacks super saiyan and potential unleashed like orange hair, or later he should get an unseen element he will be God with like creation or space, and both of the previous transformations will be locked since the new one will have the best parts of both.

New Timeline · C0
1 month ago

Ellimist: You don't have to care too much about canon. Since it's not defined choose which one you prefer and go with it. With fanfiction it's best to improve on the original rather than just copy everything that was already done.

New Timeline · C0
1 month ago

WolfLord: That's always pissed me off at least from what I understand about the English version there is no reason why he cannot stack up Super Saiyan on top of Ultimate potential when it was first revealed Gohan was apparently the same power level as Super Saiyan God Goku the first time the only reason why boo got him is because Gohan was so arrogant that he didn't instantly one shot him. Maybe the reason why he didn't go super saiyan because because he didn't think he needed to and then later on when super and GT were brought out he'd stopped training for so long that he wasn't even able to go super saiyan or Super Saiyan 2 and he completely lost ultimate potential and whoever was writing Dragon Ball super really didn't like Gohan because when he finally did make his appearance in The Tournament of power he only did a couple of things before getting wiped out himself so he should be able to stack Super Saiyan one and two on top of Ultimate potential and he should even be able to go God mode but the writers wanted to focus on Goku and Vegeta and if they allowed Gohan to get all his power he should be able to totally wipe the floor with everyone including Jiren because so far from what I've read ultimate potential is basically all of his potential Unleashed at once it's his base form it's not a transformation it doesn't give power multipliers it's just his own power so therefore he should be able to stack Super Saiyan 1 2 and 3 Super Saiyan red Super Saiyan blue on top of it but that would make him way to powerful anime Goku and Vegeta obsolete were meant to be the main character's of the show so he gets nerved so I reckon it's entirely up to you how you handle gohan's powers and abilities

New Timeline · C0
1 month ago

DragonGodSmith3000: I would definitely say it’s pride and that he wants to explore a new pathway to power and dosent wanna rely on transformations then over time he just becomes a minor side character other then beating buu his next best contribution is Pam his daughter. If we go by transformations of dbz it can definitely stack it’s just never been done before also realize Gohan has never trained seriously as he walks path of scholar I never understood the money issues as with their powers they could easily search and find hidden treasures in the world like in dragon ball am the chests of gold Gohan I believe was someone I believe a Chinese person could relate towards most as although he wanted to be strongest fighter and smartest person but due to his mother only ever focusing on one following path she layed out for him settling for mediocrity becoming a broken person with great sayiaman a outlet to make himself feel
good the one with strongest potential as they say had serious mental problems if you really look at it.

New Timeline · C0
1 month ago

Qwestar: This is fairly hard to answer, because the exact nature of Gohan’s “Ultimate” power is not very well defined, and different parts of the franchise tend to portray it in different ways.

Across the board, the “Ultimate” power-up is something that Gohan achieved after the Elder Kaioshin used his psychic powers to draw out Gohan’s latent power far beyond his limits, giving him even greater strength than his father or Majin Boo.

In the Dragon Ball manga and the Dragon Ball Z TV series, the way Gohan’s power seemed to work was that all of his latent power, including what went into his Super Saiyan forms, was brought to the surface and assimilated into his natural state. It was a permanent power-up and alteration of his base form, as Gohan never loses the physical alterations (taller, more filled out, close-drawn eyes, etc.) for the rest of the manga, even after the ten-year time skip. Gohan has no need to go Super Saiyan anymore, since all of his power is available in his normal form. So my answer would be that, yes it can be stacked but it wont actually be any yellow hair, his ultimate transformation/mystic is basically a full assimilation of his super saiyan abilities so...ssj2+ or what not would just merge with his mystic, basically take super saiyan god from the battle of the gods movie, goku looking like his normal self with god power? That's gohan without the color change through all his transformations, that's why it was an ultimate form, he was basically fully powered all the time, no ahhhhhhhhh, boom transformation. Hope that sorta helps.

New Timeline · C0
1 month ago
I wish I can do what Mc did. Unfortunately this world runs on words and laws and not power. View More
Paradise of Demonic Gods · C131
1 month ago
Fixed. View More

darkimortal: With a name like John why is he bowing when doing greetings that just seems weird

New Timeline · C1
1 month ago

CornboyRay: I definitely see the flaw in bring the Sayian race back and I'm not gonna lie, I'm a Bardock fanboy and my thoughts on that completely biased and I'm looking at that aspect of the story from a subjective stand point rather than an objective considering the ruthlessness of Goku's race. But besides that I was thinking, when you get to Beerus you should make him a replacement for Vegeta as a rival character. I find it quite ridiculous that people neglect the fact that his potential is beyond comprehension of a mortal and I see your rendition of Goku slowly creep up on that level. (on a genetic level not of the senses of power). Oftentimes in webnovels, authors make it seem as if he is either a pushover, completely overpowered and Indomitable, or just a plot device. However these novels never dive in to the fact there was a reason he was selected as a God of Destruction. There must be something unique about his race. Maybe he has a crazy healing factor and also maybe a zenkia bost in some from or other. What I'm basically trying to say is Goku has the mentality of a God of Destruction. Maybe you can actually build a genuine friendship with the two of them considering the fact that the Oracle Fish did state that Goku would be Beerus's greatest rival and Beerus had the vision of the Super Sayian God. Maybe they can grow together and raise the mortal level of universe 7... or 6.(I forget which one they're located in) Goku can blow up planets ridden with evil when Bererus ask him to because they are just pals like that and he had to do something real quick. Or maybe you add a plot point to where there is a reason Beerus needs to be gone for a while (Not insinuating you kill Beerus off by any means) and only his friend can get the job done. (Also not insinuating you make Goku a God of Destruction.) But until then; You should have the Demon race start to get involved with the story if you ever run out of villains.( Also keep the name Trunks because he is an iconic character for Goku's child) later on you can ad villains from dragon ball heroes if you ever get stumped with writer's block. You can also add time patrol events. You wont have a problem the Goku getting overpowered and boring because the characters that he will be fighting are not only planet busters or even universe breakers, but Dimension destroyers. Don't forget Zamasu was so powerful that he was in every single time line simultaneously which each contains 12 universes each effecting them all at once. That's how OP he was and that doesn't com close to characters like Towa and Mira or even Demigra.( also Fu)

New Timeline
1 month ago
I could do that but then it would go against what the new Goku stands for. His impression of the Saiyans is worse than the impression the original Goku had and original Goku already disliked them. Frieza even told Goku that Bardock was basically his lapdog and that he killed many to make his family better but Goku sees that as someone who destroys someone else's future for theirs instead. Besides, he doesn't care about his new parents. They aren't his. I could definitely make the Grandpa Gohan event happen but as for having his parents back, that's highly doubtful and I don't think it'll make sense with this timeline since Goku even respected Frieza for killing all the Saiyans. Also, Gohan would not make a wish even if he knew about his grandparents as he is being influenced by Goku since Raditz. Naturally, Goku's hate of innocents being hurt is being carried over and Gohan would probably never want any Saiyans back as every Saiyan besides his family happens to evil. His own uncle wanted to kidnap him and so did two others. Gohan is a child and kids are always in the moment. Gohan is highly intelligent in every timeline, and even if he is curious, I don't think he'll ever risk the safety of his home and family to see someone who is potentially evil. However, I could definitely do the side story of Gohan. Thanks for the ideas. It's just college frying my brain and taking my energy that my quality of writing has worsened. I'll definitely be better. View More

CornboyRay: Also, I love the way you do slice of life. Maybe you can switch prospective to gohan and make him deal with people like lord slug and the androids and have goku take cell. You can have a side story of how Gohan singlehandedly took out people like Bojack or even Broly. This might just be me, but I feel like goku, Gohan, and Chi-Chi are lonely. I know they has his kids and wife but he lacks heritage. In the original had Vegeta tell them who and what they where from a lineage stand point (excluding Chi-Chi of course) , maybe you can have a moment that Gohan gets told stories of his great grandfather Gohan and how Goku was adopted. Then that leads to Gohan asking about his real grandparents, then that leads to Goku or Gohan making a wish to bring them back to life (Most likely Gohan because he is a child and has a rainbow and sun shine filter on the world) And that can bring interesting side storys about Bardock's old life and how righteous he truly was. That would also give Chi-Chi a mother in law which would bring more interesting character building for Chi-Chi or even the new baby Sayians seeing as now they have a babysitter in the form of Goku's mom. Mabey Goku would be stand of ish at first but then grows to accept his parents giving him a stronger bond towards family (even though he has a strong bond already, why not make it harder than a diamond? )

New Timeline
1 month ago

CornboyRay: Don't show us all your chest pieces. Hide things in plain sight and add layers to the story.

New Timeline
1 month ago

CornboyRay: If you want more suggestions just ask.

New Timeline
1 month ago

CornboyRay: Also, I love the way you do slice of life. Maybe you can switch prospective to gohan and make him deal with people like lord slug and the androids and have goku take cell. You can have a side story of how Gohan singlehandedly took out people like Bojack or even Broly. This might just be me, but I feel like goku, Gohan, and Chi-Chi are lonely. I know they has his kids and wife but he lacks heritage. In the original had Vegeta tell them who and what they where from a lineage stand point (excluding Chi-Chi of course) , maybe you can have a moment that Gohan gets told stories of his great grandfather Gohan and how Goku was adopted. Then that leads to Gohan asking about his real grandparents, then that leads to Goku or Gohan making a wish to bring them back to life (Most likely Gohan because he is a child and has a rainbow and sun shine filter on the world) And that can bring interesting side storys about Bardock's old life and how righteous he truly was. That would also give Chi-Chi a mother in law which would bring more interesting character building for Chi-Chi or even the new baby Sayians seeing as now they have a babysitter in the form of Goku's mom. Mabey Goku would be stand of ish at first but then grows to accept his parents giving him a stronger bond towards family (even though he has a strong bond already, why not make it harder than a diamond? )

New Timeline
1 month ago

CornboyRay: I think you should make the cat act like a cat until it gets to a critical point in the story so it can be an intriguing and interesting reveal, meaning talking or anything. Maybe keep the abilities that it has like healing Goku but I personally don't think any dialogue needs to be shared. Then that would give the opportunity to let the readers not only gain an attachment to the "pet cat" but realize it's something more, A sentient being that is far more than what it let's on. Once that happen we will want to know more about the past of the cat, what exactly it is ,why did it follow Goku, and also what's his motive.

New Timeline
1 month ago

CornboyRay: It's one of the best dragon ball fanfictions on here. My only problem is the cat that he gets as a pet. I feel like it was sloppy the way he implemented the character.

New Timeline
1 month ago
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