Lord_Yggdrasil - Profile

It's a good story with an interesting plot and world building. Unfortunately, the grammar and spelling are horrible and confusing, which kills the vibe of reading. If the grammar was improved, it would be a nice read.

Good book with an entertaining view. However, the rushing in the last tenma arc war killed it for me. it would have been better to go for a more comedic arc or trolling instead of the half assed take that the author took, especially considering that alaster was already op af. All the ending of the arc did was break his and a couple of other people's characters and offset all the character development that the author had provided for them. Seriously, half of the book was how he hates people who attack him or his family/friends because of what he went through, and yet during the final tenma arc, he did nothing when they attacked or threatened people he is close to or even how he says that he owes Veldanava and yet did nothing to at least salvage/stop the completely unnecessary war which he could have done easily. All in all, the arc was just a huge disappointment and ruined the book for me.

very interesting and entertaining book.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻