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  • My Story in the Otherworld

    My Story in the Otherworld

    Fantasy

    I was once a normal guy on Earth, but a Goddess summoned me to her Realm and told me that she was going to send me to a planet named Napreshan. I wonder how this is going to work out... *Author's Note: Let me just say that this is an experiment I'm doing. I never wrote something like this. I'll try my best to write the best I can, but I can't guarantee the best results. However, I'm going to make this my masterpiece and try my best to make it one. Please be patient with me and let's go through this journey together! Also instagram is jeffreydoln and discord is https://discord.gg/g9t5MJ5*

  • I Hacked Everything

    I Hacked Everything

    Fantasy System

    4.1

    Chris tried hacking his favorite game, but once he successfully hacked it, a frown appeared and then he passed out. When he came back to life, he realized he obtained a hacking system.

  • My cousin's novel...

    My cousin's novel...

    Fantasy

    This novel is by my cousin who passed away on December 20, 2018. He wrote this light novel when he was still alive, but as of right now, I cannot get all the files necessary to start this novel. I'm going to make this for now and fill it up later. The pic of the cover is the only 600x800 pic I could find of a random anime brother and sister (if you search up 600x800px pic of anime brother and sister, you'll know what I mean). I'll change it later.

  • Harry Potter and the Fourth Member

    Harry Potter and the Fourth Member

    Fantasy

    Harry, Ron, and Hermione were the ultimate trio. However, what if there was a fourth member. What if that fourth member was someone who fanatically read all the books and watched all the movies. Join Chris Kim now Argus Nidma as he goes through adventures with the trio and changing parts of the story.

  • Wizardry System

    Wizardry System

    Book&Literature System Romance HarryPotter HarryPotterContest HermioneGranger RonWeasley

    4.4

    Chris Kim was a Potterhead. While he was reading Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows for the 15th time, he felt the force sucking him inside the book. He realized he was in the Harry Potter World with the Wizardry System. How will he change the Harry Potter world with his knowledge? P_atreon: pat_reon.com/jeffreytown (without the _ of course). Ko-Fi: ko-fi.com/jeffdo

Moments

Yes, that will be done View More

epsentinel: First.
Does that mean you will take out all of the "update" chapters? Please?

Wizardry System · C0
1 month ago
Alright thank you for your criticism. I know my fanfic is very superficial at best. Like you said, my political writing needs work as I've never written it before. I'll address all 5 points.

1) I'll start using the OG characters more. I wanted to differentiate myself before going back to OG characters. I suppose this was not so good from what you expected which I apologize for.
2) I plan on using the secrets like the Ror, cos, MMAP, and etc. I just needed time lmao. I wanted to include them later.
3) Politics like you said are my weakpoints and I acknowledge that completely and like I have said, I planned on including them a bit later when I was done with adding the new plots since I wanted my fanfiction to have something new.
4) I'll incorporate the original into mine! Thank you for the tip.
5) Antagonist will show up. Like I said a bit more time is needed.

All-in-all, I apologize for making this not the greatest experience. I'm still learning and I guess I should've planned a lot more before coming into this. Maybe the "later" part is just complete excuses. Thank you for spending the time to address the flaws in my story and I'll try my best to solve it. View More

Kage36Aldarion: Typical good start and then ****ed up. The Author tried to add mystery and excitement to break up the usual story line (going to NY to find an artifact) and ruined the story after ca. 20 chapters. His original characters are to weak to cary the story, which does not matter that much if you work with cannon characters or events, but is critical to new scenes. I know writing is hard work, but this is cruel to the readers. I am simply disappointed. Maybe fewer chapters would have been a lot better.
Tip** for the Author:
1. Fanfiction by deffinition revolves around known characters. Use them to flesh out your story and cover your weaknesses.
2. Reincarnated/Transmigated MCs have an inherent knowledge advantage, use it(ROR, CoS, MMap, Kitchen, secret passages).
3. Rich powerfull MC makes for politics (MC's Dad buying broms without rich/powerfull rivals interfering? No aliances? Duel Club without MC's Dad or Lucius M. interference?) On of the best parts of the HP universe are the political undercurrents.
4. If writing about social situations is not your strong point, copy from the original, that is why it os fanfiction.
5. Strong MC needs his own antagonist/problems unique to him.

Thanks for reading, good luck to the author.

Wizardry System
1 month ago
Alright everyone does have their preference and I'm thankful for you to come this far. Boring I don't think so, but this is probably because I'm the author and I have an idea of how this story is going to go. However, yes, I don't think I executed it perfectly and I will try to keep your criticism in mind so that I can improve. Once again thank you for making it this far and reading. View More

d3mon1988: Thanks for the story but sorry man this not my cup of tea....... Boring MC u have crated and always goes according to the ladies and VERY POTTER FAN

Wizardry System · C38
1 month ago
I'm posting a chap today fosho View More

CANAAN: Don't put your hopes up. The job market sucks these days. Chances are you don't find a job regardless of your education or your boss is a verbally abusive asshole who screws you over...

Wizardry System · C0
1 month ago
Especially with the chance of recession hitting soon in the U.S. for various reasons. I'm trying to compare getting a scholarship at my school to getting a 6 figure job a year after graduation. Its probably not possible for me, but it is possible if I start a business which is unlikely since I dont have capital. View More

CANAAN: Don't put your hopes up. The job market sucks these days. Chances are you don't find a job regardless of your education or your boss is a verbally abusive asshole who screws you over...

Wizardry System · C0
1 month ago
Like I said getting a scholarship at my school is like getting 6 figure pay a year after grad. It's probably just not possible for me, but like you said it is very possible which is to start a business then sell it. View More

SystemCreator: You wont be able to get a 6 figure paycheck a year after graduation. Seniors would get that mich and that requires atleast 4 years of working. The only way others have done this is by innovative thinking and not getting a job at a corporation. Instead they develop something and sell it to big corporations. That or take over a large corporation. Its incredibly hard to get that much money a year after graduation. Especially for a bachelor if that is what you are going for.

Wizardry System · C0
1 month ago
Thank you for the support. It truly means a lot to me. I'll try to keep Hermione relatively the same, but with a little twist. Once again, thanks for staying. View More

epsentinel: As long as you keep it consistent and gradual, I won't complain. I was just confused as to why "nerdy/bookworm 90's kids" didn't bring at least one book with them on a flight they most likely knew would be a couple hours(or more, depending on delays or layovers due to weather/mechanical issues). If you want to change her, go for it! It's your story! ^_^ But you also might want to know that something that was becoming a thing during the 80's (but mostly the 90') were books on tape. All you needed was a "walkman"/cassette player with headphones and you could listen to the books without "looking" like a "nerd". You could always introduce a magic version of audiobooks or just have Hermione get/create her bottomless bag early (& she can keep her "personal library" in that). Or not. It's totally up to you and honestly, if readers don't like it then they can go read something else. Readers will come/stay/go as they please, on their own terms and in their own time. Just so you know, I plan on staying. ^_^

Wizardry System · C31
1 month ago
Yeah, due to me going off from the regular storyline, sometimes I forget that Hermione is not my character. LMAO. It's kind of sad to me knowing that I can't develop her too far from her original character. I mean I do like Hermione, but sometimes, I might deviate and that might create a lot of complaints which I worry about, but I'll try my best to remember. Well maybe in the future I can deviate a little since her childhood will be vastly different than with the books so there are some things I can change, but I'm not sure my readers will accept that. View More

epsentinel: Oh, believe me, the airplane seats looked awkward and weren't the most comfortable (think putting a thin foam pad and fabric over a rock to use as a pillow/back rest)!
It's okay. I actually understand. ^_^ Unless you grew up with (or are) an old school bookworm (who also tends to be the smartest person in their peer group & is/was constantly ridiculed for their intelligence), Hermione's character isn't the easiest to understand. I grew up in a household of people with her type of personality and mentality. A tip for her character: She will ~always~ have a book on her, always be curious about something new/exciting (to her), and will tenaciously seek out the answers to problems that might be hurting her friends, but she will occasionally become overwhelmed if she can't think her way out of a problem.
Paired with your OC, someone who seems to think outside the box, together they will make a seriously dangerous team. I'm looking forward to seeing where you take them! ^_^
LOL! Gameboys were definitely an American thing, however handheld gaming systems (like the DS) have been around since the 80's.

Wizardry System · C31
1 month ago
Decided to add it to next chapter since it works. For the scar, I mean a scar on the chest is not the worst thing in the world. I would want a sick scar on the chest tbh. It would be a cool story to tell friends too. Like someone would say hey the **** happened to you and I'd be like I literally was an anime character and saved my friends' and their parents' ass from a cult member. No need to waste money View More

EAA: Thx. What hapen to revard and with sysyem why would he not heal scar?

Wizardry System · C36
1 month ago
Oh no! I forgot to add that. Thank you so much for reminding. I'll change it tonight! Holy ****, how could this pass through my mind. View More

EAA: Thx. What hapen to revard and with sysyem why would he not heal scar?

Wizardry System · C36
1 month ago
It's on the chest though. It's not too bad. It ain't visible especially with how you have to cover every single part of your body with that Hogwarts uniform. View More

Blasphemer: Ah **** man i cant handle scars or deformity,see you around.

Wizardry System · C36
1 month ago
Lmao I'm sorry I try to research as much as I can about 1991 airplanes and the pictures and articles that I find do not have individual TVs so that is the reason. I was also thinking that since this was the day of those thick ass TVs they wouldn't be able to install one in the airplane. As for Hermione, I have failed to realize Hermione's temperament and that's my fault and I apologize for that. I will make sure to follow her style next time. As for gameboys, I thought they were only American things in the 1990s? I also kind of forgot about them since I was a gamer in the DS era. View More

epsentinel: First off, why don't all of the ~Ravenclaw~ kids have books with them!?! I ~know~ Hermione's temperament would have her reading all about local attractions and guide books (which they had) to prep for their trip(which is a huge deal to go overseas as a kid)!!
Second, Game boys were released in mid 1989, so they would have been available/everywhere by 1991! So other handheld video games would be within his ability to find and beg his parents to purchase.
Third, do realize that there were movies shown on airplanes (especially in first class) as far back as the 60's & 70's? By the 90's some planes even had individual TV's in the seat backs with headphone jacks so you could listen without disturbing the people around you. If the Evergreen family was flying in first class, the would not be bored.
The kids should not have been bored! Slept, sure, but not bored.

Wizardry System · C31
1 month ago
holy **** I'm glad that I can be of help. I really do hope that you can get through it all. School is not the end all be all. Just because you may not be the best student doesn't mean that you can't be successful. Find what's good for you and stick with that. It doesn't have to be studying. Well, in the end, things do get better and I thought that that statement was completely untrue, but it is. View More

KypTheTyrant: Dude, your note at the end made me cry. I feel the exact same way. Every day it feels like it's getting worse. I can't concentrate on classes, I'm getting in trouble at home and at school for not doing work and I picked up a bad habit of hitting things, whether it be a pole with my fist or a wall with my head. Thank you so much for writing this novel. The thing that has helped me the most through this is this website. I can absorb myself into the story and it helps me forget for a while. thank you so much.

I Hacked Everything · C25
1 month ago
Well it's fine if you disagree with me and I don't plan on trying 20,00,000 comments to try to change your mind because that is your interpretation (maybe not the correct word but you know what I mean) and most of them I agree with. I'm just trying to express what I think and how I saw the HP series. View More

kuokyo: the most useful cheat in the world of HP is a good memory (and something that can speed up the brain). If there is a library nearby, the MC, instead of studying books, spends time on flights on his ninbus and useless conversations with young girls.
Books on magic are what can make him strong. The mc ignores the books, preferring to wait for spells from the foolish system.
Why waste time raising spell levels? Is this a video game? what effect does the "level" have on the spell itself? It would be better for him to read a book, it would be more useful.
As long as the wizard’s body is capable of passing enough energy necessary for the spell through the body, it will work the same regardless of the age of the wizard.
In HP There is no such thing as "energy storage." The important thing is the body's capacity, will and strength of intention.
Waving a wand and pronouncing a spell is all nonsense.

Wizardry System · C35
1 month ago
Of course, being able to use spells non-verbally is something all sixth grade students can do, but Chris is only a first year with 5 months of experience so having that advantage on specific spells are great. And I also plan on introducing spell tiers and this will make things a lot better. Oh yes, about the waving the wand and pronouncing a spell is useless portion, I believe that as someone who is still at this point a beginner/closing in on intermediate level to magic, this is the core for their success. Weaving the wand and pronouncing it correctly is the only way the spell would actually come out correctly with precision. View More

kuokyo: nasty. The mc is so weak and useless that it’s even disgusting.
Magic in HP doesn't work that way! The system that should make the mc strong, instead makes him a weakling ?!
I can’t read it anymore.

Wizardry System · C35
1 month ago
The effects of increasing spell levels will come shortly. All that I can say right now is that after a certain level, it is possible to use that spell non-verbally and soon wandlessly. There will be more coming. Like I said, he's only been learning magic for 5 months. This is also only Chapter 36 and there is no way he can that strong right now. I have never stated "energy storage", but the numbers are just the amount of magic he can control at the moment which was clearly less than the Servant thus making him barely able to stand him. As for him not reading books, I just haven't put that in the novel. I'll put in a sentence or two in the future for that so I apologize for not doing so, but what else is a Ravenclaw student supposed to do? I thought it was just natural to think that other than practicing magic or having a slight break by hanging out with Hermione and Kristine, he would read books. I mean honestly as a first year there is nothing else to do. However, with at most just 5 months of experience in this world, there is no way for Chris to actually be able to fully be able to learn an effective spell like Stupefy or Expelliarmus. Well either way, I'm sorry that you are not satisfied with the novel as of right now. View More

kuokyo: the most useful cheat in the world of HP is a good memory (and something that can speed up the brain). If there is a library nearby, the MC, instead of studying books, spends time on flights on his ninbus and useless conversations with young girls.
Books on magic are what can make him strong. The mc ignores the books, preferring to wait for spells from the foolish system.
Why waste time raising spell levels? Is this a video game? what effect does the "level" have on the spell itself? It would be better for him to read a book, it would be more useful.
As long as the wizard’s body is capable of passing enough energy necessary for the spell through the body, it will work the same regardless of the age of the wizard.
In HP There is no such thing as "energy storage." The important thing is the body's capacity, will and strength of intention.
Waving a wand and pronouncing a spell is all nonsense.

Wizardry System · C35
1 month ago
I wanted to introduce the Servants right about now while they were in the US so having his manhandled was the only effective. The other way would've been like the Magical Congress say "Oh, yeah there's an attack you should go back" type. They wouldn't seem very important. View More

Blasphemer: Yeah i know the guy is a first year with little to no knowledge of magic its just idk maybe its cause normally mc with systems are op but he just seems so weak for someone that has a system.Probably just dont like the fact mc is getting manhandled so easily when he hasnt grown.Novels dont really let mc with system to get wreck so early on without having time to grow.Realistic atleast.

Wizardry System · C35
1 month ago
Read what I said to kuokyo. TLDR: He's been training for 5 months. No way in hell is he winning against someone that is 25 and has more magical power than him. Don't worry he's just weak for now... I mean if you look at those other Chinese light novels. the MC is always relatively weak like this for loike 50-100 chapters. View More

Blasphemer: Kind of pathetic he so weak actually,don't know why i feel that way.

Wizardry System · C35
1 month ago
I don't know.. Fuck Spectrum though View More

Weirdo: Wtf???!!! That's crazy expensive....

Wizardry System · C35
1 month ago
??? I mean you have to remember that Chris is 11 years old and has only been learning magic for at best 5 months. Even with a System and the practice room, it is impossible to defeat someone who has more magical power and more experience than him. Magic is mainly about experience. The System has not made him a weakling. Otherwise if this was Harry Potter and he was facing this guy, he would immediately die. Harry at this time had no Protego. He wasn't facing Voldemort therefore did not have his mother's ancient magic protection. He didn't have the Disarming Charm. He had nothing. OP in 10 chapters. View More

kuokyo: nasty. The mc is so weak and useless that it’s even disgusting.
Magic in HP doesn't work that way! The system that should make the mc strong, instead makes him a weakling ?!
I can’t read it anymore.

Wizardry System · C35
1 month ago
By the way if any of you guys work for Spectrum, just know that you're working for literal dogs. Unintelligent piece of shits that charge $100 for wifi, but wi-fi doesn't work for 6 hours a day. View More
Wizardry System · C35
2 months ago
Thank you for the suggestion. I might do that from now on. It makes things easier on me and it gives the patrons a bit more of what they have now. View More

Strud: Yea there was a bit of confusion and this is a good story. I'm sure alot of people were afraid they would t be able to read it anymore

As for things you could do for patrons... idk maybe write a chapter or 2 ahead of what we have here on webnovel.
That way your patrons would have acess to 1 or 2 chapters (or more your choice) ahead of what is posted here.
Then just need to stagger the release here. Chapter 32 is out now, so say you do this your patrons would have acess to chapter 33 or 34 while we only have acess to 32.
Then when you release a new chapter for your patrons (chp 35) you would also release 33 on webnovel.
It's not much. But it's an idea

Wizardry System · C30
2 months ago
I made a mistake recently where I was only trying to notify patrons that I have written a new chapter and posted it there. However, my wording was terrible and it has instead read something along the lines of I'm moving to patre_on and everyone has to pay to read my work. I have apologized and clarified that this is not the case, but this person here was too hasty in writing the review. View More

Tbradley_Imhere: What do you mean exactly?

Wizardry System
2 months ago
I know what this is about and I ask you to please read my latest chapter where I have included the apology for the misunderstanding that you have. I have worded my sentences poorly and merely wanted to notify my patrons that I have written a new chapter on patr_eon not trying to say that I have completely moved to patre_on. If you want to give me a 1 star I am completely fine with that, but I ask you to not give me a 1 star based on misunderstanding and my "personality" that you seemed to have fabricated due to misunderstanding. Once again I ask that you give my latest chapter a read as it has an apology about my terrible wording. However, if you still think that wanting to notify my patrons that I have posted a chapter there is shameless and shows that I have a lack of responsibility, please just comment it here. View More

agaxent: I strongly advice fellow reader to avoid all book written by this author, this shameless bastard is no sense of responsibilty.

You all been warned...

Wizardry System
2 months ago
It's hard writing 2 HP fanfics at once. For now, I'm not writing it. I'm going to get back to it a little later. View More

SYFL555: Did u drop your harry Potter fanfic??

I Hacked Everything · C61
2 months ago
Yes and I apologize. I won't do this garbage **** again. Thank you for understanding. View More

youzername: Look not hating on you because you wanted to promote your patr eon, perfectly normal just saying it's better to have it connected to an actual chapter for no backlash.

**: I just hope you don't turn in to that one author that uses every other chapter to promote his part eon.

Wizardry System · C0
2 months ago
Not for youzername i mean agaxent. View More

JeffreyDO: I know there was a misunderstanding yesterday. I'm still posting here. Goodness, I realized that my wording was just ****. Here's the thing. I just decided to be the notifier since if they got to that page from here, they would see this and go to P_atreon. I thought instead of an email, this would also be a way to notify them as well. I know you guys hated that part chapter since it wasted your time so I was sure that with the title and everything you wouldn't waste time by clicking and reading and my patrons could also have another way to be notified. I'm sorry that this has caused a massive misunderstanding. I would never make this about pure money. Sure I have done weird **** to try to earn money, but that was also me trying to experiment what was good with you guys. Like I said, my wording was not good and I apologize.

Wizardry System · C0
2 months ago
Please read what I said for youzername. I apologize for what I have done and my terrible wording. I just wanted to give my patrons a bit more because I can't give them a lot, but I guess this can't satisfy you as well. View More

Strud: So.. what, you are done writing here on webnovel?
Should we remove the story from our libraries or will it still be updated here in future?

Wizardry System · C0
2 months ago
Please read what I said for youzername. I apologize for what I have done and my terrible wording. I just wanted to give my patrons a bit more because I can't give them a lot, but I guess this can't satisfy you as well. View More

MzHr252: Please explain further?? Clarify? Elaborate please? I am not sure i understand this post/chapter at all....

Wizardry System · C0
2 months ago
Please read what I said for youzername. I apologize for what I have done and my terrible wording. I just wanted to give my patrons a bit more because I can't give them a lot, but I guess this can't satisfy you as well. View More

Weirdo: Will you still posting chapter here?..

Wizardry System · C0
2 months ago
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