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RaijinInu: Really? Well, having to say that I really enjoyed that manga so far and got inspired not only by this one but by others too,
I got a rather unique idea which I want to keep working on, any overlapping things are purely coincidental as I inspire to go a different way with this.
I do hope to bring a rather unique story to the collection ad of course that enjoy to keep reading.What?! I Reincarnated As A Lizard?! · C8
gamer9: Basically Histories Number 1 Founder only. MC is someone with no battle ability, is rich, and has to appear like the typical death seeking arrogant young master. Im not saying its very similar because its not but if your into that niche of teacher system this is a novel that can give you your fix.Arrogant Young Master Template A Variation 4
BloodRiverDaoist: If this is really anti-hero mc you should change the title I came here for evil villain mc I absolutely loathe any hero kind of mc.🤬I'll become a villain in my next life · C1
DaoistZoid: Aye **** you short people can be protags if they want!Otherworld Adventure · C2
BloodRiverDaoist: What I don't like is short protagonists especially if they're male hope he takes after his father and reaches over 2mOtherworld Adventure · C2
Weirdo: I need to read a few time just to understand it... Will give it another chance.. If next chapter also sh1t, drop..Cultivation Taobao Store · C1
thotieslayer: I really hope he gets them Kryptonian cellsBecoming eternal, Vampire diaries. · C8
Primordial_Phoenix: I can't wait for more
You know how hard it is to find a good vampire diaries fanfiction it's always just a girl main character with a depressing backstory drooling over Klaus or DamonBecoming eternal, Vampire diaries. · C5
SnowofBlood: Il n'es pas le genre de personne à se relaxer, il est toujours à la recherche de quelque chose... 😈Becoming eternal, Vampire diaries. · C3
Rsroar: Love the concept you have going on for your story! Loving it so far and looking forward for the upcoming chapter! Please no harem because of I have to be honest it doesn't fit with his personality. Nevertheles, Keep up with the great work and work your imagination to the fullest! Hope you update once again sometime soon!Becoming eternal, Vampire diaries.
BloodRiverDaoist: It took me till this chapter to realize jian lin was themc and not jian lu...Demon Slaying System · C4
CalvinTheLeecher: "The gamer and systems" fics have a problem at some point, some have the so-called failure penalties that they use to force the MC into a decision that generally does not go with the premise of the personality of the MC, others decide to tell a person that you knew in a few days the secret of its power and practically being used as a rare candy, I invite you to read "Max Level Newbie" where the failure of "the gamer" is portrayed quite well.
The last chapters of the fic have decided to enter one of the previous problems, for lack of more material and the trajectory that seems to want to follow, I have decided to stop reading it.
One thing that never made sense to me is that it "lost" the stats that it had gained passively by changing its race, it was like starting over from scratch but with a better base, which is strange since it did not lose the experiences of its other skills and never saw problems adapting to his new body.
I can understand the reason for not wanting to use "Create: ID" but grinding has to do it somehow, it is even more ridiculous the fact that 2000 enemies invade a land where the proteges of two big bosses and known for being overprotective, even more so considering how unwilling all the factions are to make "causus belli" movements.
You underestimate the response of heaven to the appearance of a new angel, knowing that God is dead and angels are unable to increase their numbers, a new one, however weak it may be, will attract the attention of the archangels.
As a game player for Grand strategy (4X), RPG and Simulators I feel uncomfortable with certain decisions regarding the "build" of the MC, but those are my ways of how I usually play.DxD: God of Gamers
REDLAW: Sooo. In DxD no one ever tells their Power to those they trust? They all keep it to themselves? Man seems like we didn't read(or watch) the same. DxDDxD: God of Gamers
BloodRiverDaoist: The **** did I just read I understood jack **** out of all that nonsenseical writing...Lord of the Witches · C1
Weirdo: For the lot, I wouldn't commend of thousand armies versus two team of king wannabe... But come on man, Saji way of disrespecting, just plunge the enjoyment... Please handle him.. I wouldn't say that I would drop this, but I would definitely disappoint in you if you didn't at least cut his arm off or show them that you're not some lackey, but on par with their king and definitely would be higher... Someone who let their servant scold you, insult you, grab your collar, shouting at your face, want to punch you with their weapon.... If you let it go, man... You must be the g... Sigh, no more complaining.. I would just say thank you for the chapter..
Thank you for the chapter author. May you be bless and had a good health and pump out more chapter...DxD: God of Gamers · C16
Sevennamed: This is easily the worst chapter of this story, it does not make sense in any way. I can not even single out any specific things because it was all so bad. 😟😟😟😟😟😟😟😟😟😟😟😟😟😟😟😟😟😟😟😟😟DxD: God of Gamers · C16
oscar1234: Also no one respect the mc that sh@t with Saji is death with others but no one raise a finger because the mc is a angel. He should take Asia and leave them to their own 30 days of grinding and that army is not threat.DxD: God of Gamers · C16
FlowingRocks: Beelzebub's decision is stupid, potentially good for Mc thoDxD: God of Gamers · C16
ygrekks: Ok, wtf? A bunch of kids will fight hundrets of experienced and more powerful opponents? Sounds stupidDxD: God of Gamers · C16
dazii: Sounds stupid........4 and 6 wing angels, Rias and sona together would die plus their peerage
With thousands more to come and Mc is still weak and I don't know what to add anymore............I.d create, dungeon, experience, levelling up is what he needs....to battle and learnDxD: God of Gamers · C16
Von_Krieg: I still hope that asia stays human or at least the mc turns her to an angel :/
Thanks for the amazing workDxD: God of Gamers · C15
Gahara: It's not that he doesn't want to meet his girl but he doesn't know she is even here.. at list that's what I got from reading till now
You can't just go out in the world to meet a girl you don't know existAdventure of Tomorrow · C25
amaturewriter: SO far this is amazing and its unique [the 2 akamichi SI FF].....so far not much but interesting.......its cool MC dont have the SI knowledge......
suggestion: keep MC OP [he was a champion] dont neuter him....keep him OP .....give some BS powwa...ie: wood style?,....or sage mode [natural..not animal ****]....dont make him an idiot...keep him cool and smart..............also add some romance and fluff.....just build it.......if harem keep it small....just saying....maybe save karin and tatuya [tatuya,,, I think was sold as a slave by her parents when she was a kid....MC could save her?]............really want to see an akamichi FF where MC just fucks up all the other super powers.....screw teams and ****,,,,,,,,,,,,anyway....GLRe: Akimichi
Thelazybatman: The name fenrir has a weight to it
People like to use it
Its got a lot of cool mythology behind it
I can understand wanting to use it instead of coming up with something differentShinobi Fenrir · C4
BloodRiverDaoist: Really fenrir that doesn't sound japanese enough for naruto world why not just some random mythical Ookami bloodline or something doesn't need to be a real world mythological creature 🙄Shinobi Fenrir · C4
BloodRiverDaoist: So short...Douluo Dalu Fanfic - Mystic Eyes Douluo · C7
Monarch_: So let me break down why I gave this review:
The authors writing quality is decent. It’s not making me gag, but at the same time it’s not the best writing I have ever seen. As such it’s a decent three for writing.
Stability of Updats:
The only reason I gave this a four is because honestly I don’t know how fast he updates, all I know is that he does. For me that at least warrants a four star.
This is where the story really starts disappointing me, like most other fan-fictions do. First of all the MC is far too OP. He is a rank 57 when he is what 12 and his true combat ability is even better then that. The only advantage he has is his strong spirit and his previous memories yet he learnt the art of hidden weapons by HIMSELF WND better then the genius tang san. HOW DOES THAT EVEN MAKE SENSE. Not only that, I fee like Ryusei is almost the same as Tang SAN. Spirit Hall killed his parents, he treats tang hao as a father figure and he is in shriek academy. That’s not even the end of my complaints. I mean why is the author shipping with essentially every female in the Shrek academy. I don’t even get that!!! One of my favourites part of the original novel was Rong Rong and Oscars love story but now as a twelve year old she is already dreaming of making him her husband. And just a small portion of my complaints.
The character design is even worse than the story development. I mean one of the most fundamental responsibilities of an author is to make the reader relate to the MC but this author seems to be doing the opposite. At first Ryusei was too soft and ***** which I honestly did not mind as it was a good change of pace for me. BUT THEN THE SPIRIT HALL ATTACKED. Now the guy seems to be constantly going through puberty and is extremely unreasonable. He is the main reason that I can’t even bear to finish the story, though I did get pretty deep into it already.
Finally the world design:
What can I even give this??? This is a fan fiction and up-till now the author has not added anything new to the world that would push up the rating to a three or four star.
Overall the story really only deserves a two star.Lightning Dragon God Douluo: - A Douluo Dalu Fanfic
kelpshake: Since it’s a slow pace. I’m going to stack chapters and put it in my library for later. I like that you gave mc fire type as it’s very hard to find one with it.
Hope it’s a romance with EsdeathNoble Life in Akame Ga Kill · C0
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