rogerven - Profile

that's wrong and honestly you shouldn't say something like that I was in the marine corps and have ptsd. and suicidal thoughts come up sometimes but I manage it, but it's not easy and you honestly never know what someone is going through and you saying that can literally be the last straw I've seen it happen and it's never a pretty site.

honestly if it was him ntr other people the story would be OK to read but I put myself in the Mc shoes when I read and it's hot but as soon as someone else touched her nope it's done it's a serious turn off and honestly what's the point in having a relationship if your going to allow some other guy have his way with her so instead you should honestly just write a story about tsunade being a slut cause then I can read it but this way just idk really pisses me off. like who wouldn't want someone like tsunade as a wife then you go and throw her around for everyone to have way with no can't do it

a little to fast paced and seems a little forced to be honest but overall great

it's a great start just really bad Grammer.

someone find out about there significant other and you can get free service lol