ScorpiaEvergreen

1yr

Commented

As for Jiao Thirteen's mecha, numerous black holes appeared. Crazy Warrior could see the nozzles inside the black holes. His hair stood up in fear.

It's Not Easy to Be a Man After Travelling to the Future

Sci-fi · Madam Ru

ScorpiaEvergreen

1yr

Commented

PSA: do not call people disabled. People may have disabilities, but calling them disabled people is like labeling and name-calling. There is literature on the psychology and effects of this kind of wording. Someone with a disability, not someone disabled. Just something to keep in mind.

The expression of the captain on duty changed instantly. Lian Shaojing had actually gone berserk and used a restricted military physical skill, which increased the energy of the entire body by five-fold. Once that new recruit was hit by this attack, he would at least have all his bones and muscles shattered if he didn't die from it. Even if he underwent surgery, in the end, he would become a disabled person.

It's Not Easy to Be a Man After Travelling to the Future

Sci-fi · Madam Ru

ScorpiaEvergreen

1yr

Commented

Reinforcing stereotypes smh

Song Wanqiu suddenly felt gratified. This child is finally showing some different emotions. He usually remains so silent, just like an autistic child.

I Become A Burdensome Child After Transmigrating

General · Biting Peaches

ScorpiaEvergreen

1yr

Commented

Oh, yes, because that doesn't sound like a sale at all.

She pulled Sheng Tianci over and whispered, "The little brat really likes Little Jiu. Yesterday, I asked Su Shengjing if he's willing to let Little Jiu get engaged to Zhiyan, but he doesn't want to. Do you think if we offer him more benefits, he'll be willing to approve the engagement?"

I Become A Burdensome Child After Transmigrating

General · Biting Peaches

ScorpiaEvergreen

1yr

Commented

Why not, you ask? Because we're no longer in that era!

Old MIstress Sheng watched as the two children left, and an extremely loving expression appeared on her face. She casually said to Su Shengjing, "Shengjing, I like your daughter so much. She seems to be having a lot of fun with my grandson. Why don't we let them get engaged?"

I Become A Burdensome Child After Transmigrating

General · Biting Peaches

ScorpiaEvergreen

1yr

Commented

Students from the Central Scout Academy: "Since when have you cared about your opponents' dignity!?"

One had to admit that Ye Feiyang was very skilled at operating. Although he was in a somewhat difficult position, he still managed to dodge Ling Lan's consecutive beam shots. Ye Feiyang was unwilling to be passive like this, so he operated his mecha with great effort, using spontaneous, lightning fast footwork with the goal of closing the gap between the two mecha in order to seal the opponent's beam gun. But of course, Ling Lan wasn't an idiot. She knew what her opponent was trying to do, but to make sure she kept her prowess hidden and to also leave some dignity for her opponent, she dodged quickly instead.

It's Not Easy to Be a Man After Travelling to the Future

Sci-fi · Madam Ru

ScorpiaEvergreen

1yr

Commented

Woooo! They finally spelled "independent" correctly!

A cold-looking lieutenant general appeared on the screen of the three major generals. The person on the screen must be the supreme commander of the independent army.

It's Not Easy to Be a Man After Travelling to the Future

Sci-fi · Madam Ru

ScorpiaEvergreen

1yr

Commented

Wow... they used the word "it" to refer to God. Have a field day with that.

In other words, Lingtian was an existence that was being taken care of by God itself. In the past, these other ace mecha clans perhaps could still compare to Lingtian, but now they no longer even dare to have the thought.

It's Not Easy to Be a Man After Travelling to the Future

Sci-fi · Madam Ru

ScorpiaEvergreen

1yr

Commented

This is why you shouldn't be swayed by the addictive tobacco, kids. Don't let it lure you into situations like this, all for another smoke.

Liu Furong had seen Ling Lan using her Ice Blockade before, but he had never seen such a beautiful and frightening killing technique before. Liu Furong had killed many people before, but he still shivered when he saw Elder Ying turning into a pile of meat in front of him.

It's Not Easy to Be a Man After Travelling to the Future

Sci-fi · Madam Ru

ScorpiaEvergreen

1yr

Commented

Is this a criticism of com*unism?

"You can't blame me for this. The regiment commander wanted to swallow everything. I was unwilling to accept this. We all risk our lives to get that item so we all should get a part of it," Yi Hao refuted.

It's Not Easy to Be a Man After Travelling to the Future

Sci-fi · Madam Ru

ScorpiaEvergreen

2yr

Commented

If she said 好, then this should probably be "okay" and not "good." Tbh "good" makes it sound like she's his mother approving of his obedience to her.

She gently responds, "Good." She swears that as long as it permitted her, she would always be by his side.

I'm an All Stars System

General · AvaTheMage

ScorpiaEvergreen

2yr

Commented

*her own flat chest. (Sorry, I couldn’t help it)

"The reason you can't beat him, is that you are not as simple as Qi Long here," Ling Lan pointed to her own chest.

It's Not Easy to Be a Man After Travelling to the Future

Sci-fi · Madam Ru

ScorpiaEvergreen

3yr

Replied to ScorpiaEvergreen

Not sure why that got censored, but I wrote t e e n, as in teenage.

The Rosewood Prophecy

Fantasy · SkyEmpress

ScorpiaEvergreen

3yr

Posted

The writing, with the word choices and all its tasteful descriptions, reminds me of that of a **** fiction novel you can find in the library or at a bookstore—in other words, an actual, published book. The quality of the writing is also leaps above a lot of the “edited” stories I’ve encountered on Webnovel. As for the story, I like its pacing and the world-building; it doesn’t linger too much on one particular event or just gloss over important parts, although I did occasionally feel that I would have liked some more time to get to know the characters better. I feel that some parts would have had a more emotional impact on the reader if there had been events to create a stronger attachment to them earlier on. Speaking of characters, they all have flaws that humanize them in some way, and I find that a positive point, but right now (at around chapter 90) I can only really say that I like one character and find the rest somewhat neutral on my likeability scale. After reading further for future developments, I shall see where they each land. Another thing I like is how the foreshadowing was done. There isn’t too much of it, and when something is obviously hinted at, the author still doesn’t give too much away. There’s room for little twists later on so that things don’t go exactly the way you expected them to go. Overall, I like this story, and I would encourage those who are attracted to romance/adventure/fantasy novels to try it out. Just be aware of some of the content (swearing is kept to a minimum, but there is an event related to suicide, for example).

The Rosewood Prophecy

Fantasy · SkyEmpress

ScorpiaEvergreen

3yr

Commented

Well, there goes their most valuable member...

ch 72 Hidden in Shadows

The Rosewood Prophecy

Fantasy · SkyEmpress

ScorpiaEvergreen

3yr

Posted

I honestly can’t make it past the first chapter. It’s r*pe, and the guy is abusive to her. He basically has no respect for her as a human being and tortures her on their “wedding” night. I don’t care if it “gets better” later on. I can’t tolerate this. Just a warning if you don’t like this kind of stuff, either.

She Becomes Glamorous After The Engagement Annulment Ⅱ

Urban · Mr. Yan

ScorpiaEvergreen

3yr

Commented

She’s holy sh**!

"She's a pile of shit that dropped from heaven!"

She Became a Heartbreaker After Entering the Novel

Urban · Mr. Yan

ScorpiaEvergreen

3yr

Commented

got *hurt

Of course, Ning Meng would not show any sympathy for her. If the hot soup had landed on her face earlier, she would have been disfigured. And right now, Huo Beichen was the one that got her anyway.