GSHURA - Profile

My rating of this book is passable at best.I am an avid reader of ff, because of that especially in this website only few fanfic stories impressed me.in every story what reader concentrate on is the mc, if the autbor develop him well, the story will go well, if not then the story will turn up to be a disappointment.from the summary, you stated that you mc is a reincarnator, doesn't have a memory if the world that he found himself in is irrelevent but as someone who has backround kbowldege, he should have a selfworth and show independance, something that I never see.he is being tortured for years and despite that he never shown any or even the barest thought of revenge in the 19 chapters that I read.what kind of main character is this?pathetic and desappointed to the highest degree.

well to tell the truth, the idea of the story, the plot and eapecially the mc ability are amazing. But what made me give low rating to the story is mc pathetic development and his uncreative way of using his power. we have seen the mc only blaming himslef for his weaknesses over and over. he never traied for searching for a new way of applying his ability, learning new things that can support his team. thr mc fpr example have the power to control others, why he didn't use for weak cursed spirits and used them for gathering information for example. why he didn't use his abilities to force a packts against cursed spirits to gain their energy when he defeat them for example? you give your mc a very powerful ability, but you nerfed to a degree that made it useless, by doing so you nerfed your mc. I believe that this story has potential but it need more work.