ReviewBrah

1yr

Commented

he have up > he gave up

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ReviewBrah

1yr

Replied to ManSpider11

cold shoulder for a couple day is nothing lmao. if she got the patient to be alone for 20m, what another day of silent? plus, she know mc need her the most to gain more advantage. lucky this is not irl or mc gonna get play like a doll.

Asna, who was expecting Felix to give her the cold shoulder again, rejoiced.

ReviewBrah

1yr

Replied to Aquasouls

she is not wrong tho. why should god not mocking ant? Its the meta like forever. In fact only idiot keep holding grudge instead of currying favor to gain advantage.

Ever since then, Felix has ignored her completely. He did not respond to her apologies, neither did he bother addressing what happened in the bathroom.

ReviewBrah

1yr

Replied to Supreme_Leader

Author literally have xianxia syndrome. Bruh, author remind people he still a kid even with 40 year old experience but then sometimes insert wisdom word(cringe) to make him look mature(nope). sure this style of writing might be good in early 2000, but now its just cringe. talk no jutsu is not author strongest trait.

Ever since then, Felix has ignored her completely. He did not respond to her apologies, neither did he bother addressing what happened in the bathroom.

ReviewBrah

1yr

Commented

meh, talk no jutsu is not the strongest trait for mc lol.

ch 0 6 The Pride of Being a Human

ReviewBrah

1yr

Commented

this feel too xianxia for me lol. The sentence remind me of cringe xianxia mc.

He then replied to her while grinding his teeth, and nails penetrating his palm flesh, with a hoarse voice. "Shut your filthy mouth! You have no right to look down on us like this. Your mind can not fathom the amount of bloodshed we humans had to go through!"

Supremacy Games

Sci-fi · MidGard

ReviewBrah

2yr

Commented

FBI !! open up!!!

"BABIDÍ!!!! OPEN THE DOOR!!!!"

Dragon Ball - The True Legendary Super Saiyan

Anime & Comics · Meralman

ReviewBrah

2yr

Commented

Ara ara Vegeta kun, are u shy?

Pervert…" Vegeta Jr replied, before leaving the stadium to go eat his sandwich

Dragon Ball - The True Legendary Super Saiyan

Anime & Comics · Meralman

ReviewBrah

2yr

Commented

call an Ambulance, *Grab a gun" But not for ME!

WE HAVE TO CALL A HAMBULANCE!

Dragon Ball - The True Legendary Super Saiyan

Anime & Comics · Meralman

ReviewBrah

2yr

Commented

what the third eyes power again??

ch 217 Tenka'ichi Budōkai Part 1

Dragon Ball - The True Legendary Super Saiyan

Anime & Comics · Meralman

ReviewBrah

2yr

Commented

wait, what the power of third eyes again?? been so long since i remember it

She doesn't have a third eye, it's obvious, but… you know, she has a tail… and his genes" Piccolo whispered worriedly to Gohan as he saw Roshi and Ginger's worrying reaction.

Dragon Ball - The True Legendary Super Saiyan

Anime & Comics · Meralman

ReviewBrah

3yr

Replied to OverkillBills

i think it was 460 total chapter.

Marvel's Superman [Completed]

Anime & Comics · BingeFics

ReviewBrah

3yr

Posted

Detail review below I am sorry, but this is not the greatest DxD like other proclaim, in fact, this is only above average for this site and average if we count fanfic.net, QQ, and spacebattle. The mc being nekomata/nekoshou is already exist somewhere in fanfic, and iirc, create by fairy tail dragon slayer. So why this rating? First off, author have done the worst taboo he can do in reincarantion fic, in fact, he does it in world breaking record at chapter 3. He expose his secret to his mother. So why this is a taboo? Because this break the immersion of a reader, breaking metaknowledge, and make author look like lazy. Moreover, by breaking the taboo, it gonna make ur mother relationship seem fake in the future no matter how good u write it. There many way to expose the secret without breaking the story, but definitely not as early as chapter 3. Other may find it nothing big, that just mean u have not read good fanfic, with good story development. In my experience of reading fanfic, those who expose it suffer in story development for the backlash. Its a lose lose situation for rookie writer. Those who expose it early need a strong writing skill to not degrade the story which new writer not has the level of skill, and those that act like nothing happen after exposing it suffer from story development and annoy the reader because he ignore the consequences of exposing secret. (The cause and effect)

Highschool DxD: A new opportunity

Anime & Comics · Nyarlathotep00

ReviewBrah

3yr

Replied to Nyarlathotep00

He just say that u are lazy. No building up to the point where he can expose the secret. Instead, u just rushing to say it. Have u seen good isekai/ reincarnated fanfic? They never expose the secret as early as chapter 3. Heck, even anime did not do that. Its all about story building and immersion of the story, then u just kill it in front of reader. That why we piss. What is your intention of exposing it this early except for being lazy to build story development? Are u expecting by telling the secret, they gonna train u hard? Or hooking with the milf? There many way to do it, but u just go to easy route with cheat on. I hope u learn from this and not rush thing. Do a proper story development. I have good expectation on your story but this twist make u lost a star in my review. Its your story and all but as a reader, we have the right to give valid criticism.

ch 0 3 And thus, He tried training but...

Highschool DxD: A new opportunity

Anime & Comics · Nyarlathotep00

ReviewBrah

3yr

Commented

going to previous world as vacation is good. But hope its not staying there permanently. Its like being a rich kids from USA suddenly want to live in venuezela for lifetime lmao.