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I will remember this novel as the first one that made me like The Sentry.

ch 0 7 UA Entrance Exam

ErozothDraeor

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I'm going to drop it here, having a "female lead" so soon, ie romance killed it for me, mostly her looks, he has the ability to change her (which might change her personality), yet she will remain looking like an animal because the MC doesn't want to change her? I think of things in realistic terms to decide if I like something: If the MC does something, is it for plot or would a real person do it? Looking like that, in a real world, will make life overall far worse than looking normal or not that extreme, and if the MC didn't have the ability to change her AND it took time for the MC to say "She is the one!" I could convince myself to read further, but this? This is the author deciding because he likes the character or furry or both. If the MC met her, got to know her, etc. I could understand, If you want to tell me that a human could meet her and fall in love? Sure, but it will be the kind that takes time, that you need to get to know the person first to accept\overcome the initial strangeness of their appearance. Seeing furry with anime esthetics is one thing, seeing something like that in a real-life situation, full realism would look WAY different and would explain the reaction of other people, fur all over the body, a face the reminds you of your pet dog... BUT the MC can change her, that's a point I won't get over with, a literal raise of his hand and its done. Goodbye.

ch 0 7 UA Entrance Exam

ErozothDraeor

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I'd rather he learns to do it himself than rely on others all the time, beside he already said the same thing so I assume he will learn eventually. I guess they don't have issues learning new things when older.

Despite not being the most technologically adept, Peter had learned much from Aayla over the past three years. His confidence, although not the best when it comes to these sorts of things, felt unwavering today.

I’m Star-Lord (SW Xover)

Movies · AlienWarlord

ErozothDraeor

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lol, if anything she is grooming him to be nicer, caring, etc.

**Second, to the people who are commenting that Peter is grooming/manipulating Aayla, he is not, full stop. They have a sibling relationship. There has been zero romance. The reason that I've even begun to focus on Aayla in the story is to build up her character, as she will later join the Guardians of the Galaxy. Anyway, enjoy the chapters :)

I’m Star-Lord (SW Xover)

Movies · AlienWarlord

ErozothDraeor

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This MC is pavloving himself into being a moron.

ch 0 6 Chapter 6 Gold-Class Tour Guide

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Urban · Tianluo Lightning Flash

ErozothDraeor

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One paragraph made me feel like we just wasted time reading 11 chapters. If all he did came to so little, it is useless, it seems to me like it was more for the effect, a small temporary nerf so action happens, then back as usual. Might as well just get a wand.

He didn't have time to ponder the question as the beast lunged at him again, its claws outstretched, its maw gaping wide. Lucas thrust out his hand, his mind reaching out to seize the creature with his telekinesis. But to his surprise, the beast shrugged off the invisible grip, its body shimmering with a faint, golden aura.

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Book&Literature · Evoxius

ErozothDraeor

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Couldn't he just... do all this stuff again, why does it keep going back to previous life memories, it feels a bit like a limiting cheat, eventually there has to be something magic teaches he won't be able to match to an emotion. It is, so far, not explained well, it never mentioned the fact that once he spends the time to match a memory to an action that is it, he doesn't need to do it again, it talked at first about practicing until its automatic but never since.

And then, he found it. A memory from his past life, a moment of profound nihilism as he contemplated the vastness of the universe, the insignificance of his own existence. It was a cold thought, a chilling realization that had left him feeling small and alone.

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Book&Literature · Evoxius

ErozothDraeor

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I like the fact that he acts more mature than his age, some people find it weird, maybe unsetteling, but in the end convince themselves he just different or unique, what I imagine most people would do in such situation rather than the usual MC M.O. of: Hide, pretend., if someone finds out the very fabric of reality will implode.

ch 0 8 Toddler Prodigy

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Book&Literature · Evoxius

ErozothDraeor

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Good chapter.

ch 0 6 Two smiles for the same person

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Anime & Comics · Satus_Null

ErozothDraeor

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This is why I don't like the "sealing" his power, its bs, its pointless. I have no idea if he has his power sealed right now, it comes down to the author. He might be sealed or not, the author decides what he can or cannot do, whenever.

I became intangible and began to descend, passing through the structures of the upper part until I reached the underground. I paused when I found Overhaul and two of his henchmen. They were all frozen after I shut down their consciousness.

MHA: The Sentry

Anime & Comics · Satus_Null

ErozothDraeor

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Is this paid already for forces use of map... pass, this borderline not brain dead stupid, but still is.

ch 18 Chapter 18 Youth Swordsman·Bai Tianhong!

Simulation Towards Immortality In A Group Chat

Eastern · Ethereal Like A Dream

ErozothDraeor

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wth, this is a duplicate realm.

[Daya Calendar, year 486, April 8th, you successfully broke through to the late-stage Skin Refining Realm and were very happy. This time, you didn't choose to get married; you planned to lay low until death.]

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Eastern · Ethereal Like A Dream

ErozothDraeor

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Didn't they say its not possible to trade or send things?

ch 15 Chapter 15: New Group Members! The Same World!

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Eastern · Ethereal Like A Dream

ErozothDraeor

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The fact he does not get rewards and its daily basically means the entire novel will be 80% simulation, ie. what could have been and basically pointless to read.

ch 13 Chapter 13: Do Not Show Off Wealth

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Eastern · Ethereal Like A Dream

ErozothDraeor

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missed the villain tag .has magic and wastes it on harming people, anti hero is fine but villain is bring, pass

ch 0 7 Mind Games

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Book&Literature · Evoxius

ErozothDraeor

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I feel this story will get old really fast, unlike the mc, if there isn't a time skip.

ch 0 6 Magical Addiction

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Book&Literature · Evoxius

ErozothDraeor

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Is he a reincarnator as well? Because... being two years old speak this way is, unusual.

Sarah grinned, bouncing in place. "I love Yoga! It's so much fun. Do you like Yoga, Harry?"

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Book&Literature · Evoxius

ErozothDraeor

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Err... yea, if he turns into emotional power only I wouldn't bother reading, we have enough of those, they are predictable and boring.

Sentiment, Lucas chided himself, his jaw tightening. It has no place in the pursuit of knowledge and power.

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Book&Literature · Evoxius

ErozothDraeor

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More like water around a rock, knife through butter implies cutting and that might be noticed.

As he sat on his thin mattress, the snake coiled around his arm, Lucas focused his mind, reaching out with his thoughts to brush against the creature's consciousness. He no longer needed the snake to actively open its mind to him; even when it tried to resist, to close itself off from his probing, it made no difference. His Legilimency slipped past its defenses as easily as a knife through butter.

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Book&Literature · Evoxius

ErozothDraeor

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I like this too now, as a reader I know he will succeed, but in reality there is no guarantee, it's the ambition that matters, to at least try. Hopefully he has a different personality than that MC in Dimensional Wizard.

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