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Lize: Why need start low?
Go directly s rank..
They have more freedom..
No need have being underetimate drama stuff..
Its not fun..One Psycho 100 · C8
After_Wing: DC has truly the most ridiculous way of punishing evil.
Batman is the biggest hypocrite amongst all the heroes.
From a young child, he seen the horror his parents died shot by a lone gunman. But instead taking account in his revenge for his parent's death. He take the mantle of a masked vigilante for the force of good.
Sht really he's still living of his childhood fantasy land of bad guys beaten, imprison and hope for change. What an idiot.
I really want this MC that punish evil like Ghost Rider to make Batman see the error of his ways. Not just beaten him but taken account of shaking his sense of morality. But I know very well this character is stubborn as a rock. Even in an alternate story where his sidekick Robin get killed by Joker. Instead killing the killer, he still put him into prison and when Robin revives he was furious to Batman why he hadn't killed the one that murdered him.
Damn you, you childish foolish hero.Demonic Hero / DC fanfic · C18
Kriuswer: I think the same. If MC visits prison at all. It's not to put someone in there.Demonic Hero / DC fanfic · C18
Kriuswer: maybe ;)Demonic Hero / DC fanfic · C2
This getting more and more interesting..
Keep it up..What!? I am the villain!? · C25
amaturewriter: just dont make the story dark like no rape.tragedy or angst...to many writers these day are addicted to rape and dark ****What!? I am the villain!? · C6
Virgo_Shaka: great now you made the lost weakest family i 72 pillar got a man made heir that can fu'ck bellamy team at least you could make the hard enemy someone from a strong family not an unknown weak one also why did you make vivi (vali gender bender) too weak she is too powerfull especially with juggernaut drive that she/he got from the first meeting with issei you make power ranking too unreasonable in a bad wayDXD Surgeon · C15
reseter18: This is stolen fan fiction god of heroes....jsjhdhsnalYshehshey3gshnwallalahdhhsnsjskaka1010101010101010q0pq0q010101010101010101010q010q0q0q00q0q0q0q0q0qPath of heroes
Seyrain: This novel has been stolen from fanfiction. Net
This author basically steal many fictions from this website. Be warry of him everyone.
Thank you all.Path of heroes
Beruit: I mean Sirzechs would take the thought of someone being in contact with the old maou faction more seriously. Especially if he is an heir like Balrog? He would be detained until proven innocent or probably excecuted/jail.DXD Surgeon · C13
Glitner: Okay he story is actully pretty Good.
its just how you write its so jumpy and its to much Comedy on the same parts of the story its not 1 joke its 2 or 3 on the row its to much sometimes
And to much capslocks " !!!!" These are enough capslocks is fine someTimes but they are in Every chapters it just make the characters aeem like kids shouting instead of making the sceen look Epic
Try to make it cleaner its messy
Byt the story is very enjoyble , just wish he use a sword like the original law its one of the best thing with law when he rest his sword on the shoulder while smoking like a badass haha he need to get some tattoo aswell mc seems girly like ****
Anyway its just my critisim , so dont take it as me hating on your story cup i dont
Will want för next ChapterDXD Surgeon · C13
FBI_B1TCH: Author what's going on? Why did the grammar just get like 10x worse in this chapter?DXD Surgeon · C10
Mr_even: along with aika kiryuu and ingvild leviathanDXD Surgeon · C9
Coal_Burns: Fem. Saji with mutant pawn peice (10) as a high class devil could rival the other dragons, especially with the other gears added.DXD Surgeon · C9
DXD Surgeon · C9
Cham: hey, are you going to incorporate a Future/Alternate Justice League Members as Servants? or is it a bad idea?Fate/Heroes · C56
FBI_B1TCH: Oh god that's going to be annoying lol, Batman wielding power of a Servant is just too dangerous . If we're lucky, his servant will be killed quickly enough.Fate/Heroes · C56
Prince_Ye: Being a half servant makes the mc unique and gives him a mysterious aura around him. Now if you give random Tom, Dick and Harry servants his uniqueness is gonna go down a few levels. Can't take back spilled milk so just make it so they only summon low tier servants. (I doubt author-kun would change plans since author-kun already have advance chapters ready)Fate/Heroes · C56
torrelsav1: Finally a twilight novel we’re the persons not a vampire and can you make it we’re he can strengthen he’s pack cuz they made the werewolves in twilight way to weak👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼A New Wolf in Twilight
JakeElliott: Watched a bit of Twilight ages ago, barely remember it, but I did watch most of The Originals and I liked that so. This story is good at explaining a few things and also portraying characters, I like it. Hopefully a good update schedule is there.A New Wolf in Twilight
DrakeGrimmhound: I'll tell you now that I'm not a big fan of Twilight but this makes me want to go and binge the movies.
The writing is excellent and the updates are very fast.
The character building is well done and you become invested in the story just to see how it will play out.A New Wolf in Twilight
FalseReality: It's a great work. Hope that it will not be dropped and that it have constant updates.
Thanks for writing a great novel
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Kazeid: The story is The god of heroes by AlfyreGree on fanafiction.net .
I don't know if you want to pick-up the story but if it is the case can you say it in the synopsis.Path of heroes
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