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3yr

Replied to 1st_Manga_KING

I'm still reading the story as of now( time of writing) I honestly feel this story is good and I understand what you are trying to tell in the story. it's just that it's written too straight forward.( it's bland sorry I don't know what words I should use) I mean like . he s op that's it. he is the master of the guardian of emblems and that's it. no character building whatsoever. but i honestly like your idea and the story u want to build. Well good luck I'll still read it until the latest chap. thanks! **. pls don't take my comment as a derogative way of criticism . i like the world and character you want to build in this story it's just that it's too straight forward.

ch 21 The Forgotten Master

Level Infinity Weakest King

Fantasy · 1st_Manga_KING

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3yr

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he have a servant who is the guardian of the emblems spirit yet he dont have one. and the stupid guardian didn't dare to atleast teach him how to use powers on that world. also stupid mc 89 plus 5 years old geezer but can't think rational. I mean yeah he was 89 yrs old from earth and live 5 yrs at his current world but leaned nothing about anything?I mean if the emblems felt that they were not worthy atleast mc could ask how to use his unlimited mp from the guardian. Well I'll read a bit more further see how it goes when he actually learned how to use his powers..

ch 21 The Forgotten Master

Level Infinity Weakest King

Fantasy · 1st_Manga_KING

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3yr

Replied to burn1109

wow thats great! I'm looking forward to it!

The Abandoned Hunter

Action · 1st_Manga_KING

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3yr

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my overall review on this novel is 3.0 might change in the future once I catch up with the latest chapter. I'm currently on ch 39 as of writing this review. World background is simple but i feel that as I read more it will be better characters are also simple hopefully will develop more.. story development im liking it overall I think this will be a good read novel and not gonna be a waste of time. aside from some mistakes on wordings/typos( that are really acceptable in my opinion) I just want to point out to the author that it's really annoying to read the last 2 paragraphs of the previous chapter t on the next chapter, I feel that you are doing that to extend your word count and that's reallllllyyyyyy aaaannnoooyyiinnnggg. as I've said I'm just currently on chapter 39 as of writing this review and have available 126 chapters. I just wished that the once Mr author reads this review he will stop doing that after ch 126 or so. keep it up author and thanks for a good read DISCLAIMER: I'M NOT A PRO READER SO MY REVIEW IS ONLY TOWARDS THE NOVEL AND THE AUTHOR. DO NOT TAKE MY REVIEW AS A REFERENCE. READ IT AND BE YOUR OWN JUDGE. well so far the novel is ok.

The Abandoned Hunter

Action · 1st_Manga_KING

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