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Rin is best girl. Though she maybe arrogant and a little petty, she is still best girl hands down.
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This chapter was so confusing with you describing Ajuka as male and female at differeby times
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You still need to watch your pronouns, you’re consistently mixing up he/she and him/his/her/hers. You should look I to getting an editor or beta reader who has a good grasp of the English language to help
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As a note, with Scathach, you keep using make pronouns, despite being female.
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