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2018-06-20 Joined Indonesia

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Thank you~
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haha forgot
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about what?
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Chapter 113

Perhaps this smooth advancement was greatly influenced by his high aptitude.

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Writing Quality: 4 Stars The Author personally thinks that the writing quality is decent. However, the grammar is a bit meh... English is not the Author's first language. He had never mingled with the English-speaking community before, and he had very little time to take English lessons since language was not his major. The Author could do this well thanks to his experience reading many English translation novels. The way the Author wrote the ICEE is a bit troublesome. First, he wrote it with own language and then translated it with Google Translation. Finally, he edited it using Grammarly. So, please understand if the writing quality is not very good. Stability of Update: 2 Stars Writing novels is Author's hobby and side job. Meanwhile, he still has his job. Therefore, the stability of the update is not guaranteed and satisfactory. However, he still strives to write whenever free to satisfy his dear readers' curiosity. Story Development: 5 Stars The pace of the story is relatively slow. However, it was steady. The development of the main character's strength is also a little slow due to his cautious nature. However, it would progress rapidly once he discovered a cultivation technique to conceal his cultivation base. Besides, the main character also still has many things that he must upgrade using his Cultivation Points besides his cultivation base. Although increasing the cultivation base is essential, improving other aspects is no less important. Character Design: 5 Stars The main character made by the Author is humble, cautious, and steady. However, he is definitely not a soft persimmon. The Author doesn't intend to make the main character low-key. He just wants to make the main character no different from other relatively talented sect's disciples. Still, he is a protagonist, after all. No matter how ordinary he was, he still had some aspect that made him stand up among the people. Apart from the main character, there are also some interesting side characters and some cheap enemies. For more information, you can read it yourself... World Background: 5 Stars The Author said, "It was good... I think."
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There's no Odorless Bean, Qin Yi just misremembered its name.

Grand Master Du sighed and explained, "This bean is indeed odorless, but it's not called Odorless Bean but Notorious Bean. This ingredient is called Notorious Bean because its odor characteristics can change after it is made into a product called Beast Avoiding Powder."

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I Can Extract Everything

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