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if u dont have any good book then read not bad book
if u dont have any good book then read not bad book View More
Farming For Gold
Devil_Paragon: "This is intolerable, give them another function."
Profane Prince of Domination · C158
Devil_Paragon: "I don't care. Let the clones bone the harem."
Profane Prince of Domination · C158
Reverend Insanity · C1025
The Legendary Mechanic · C366
dude if u want the good book u must read this :) best book ever amazing world building amazing mc :) View More
Reverend Insanity
this ****t how take 4.3 point :S i think idiot 4 years old child write this **** dont read waste of time :S View More
Legend of Ling Tian
just think why one asasin all time be idiot realy first 1-2 eppisode good not bad story but realy if wait and be strong family is good but mc brilliant
first think when story go paradox author say look this **** like this soul realm 12 layer :S mc is a invisible but no he cant take arrows but he take his clothes
if u r brainless shits read this book dont think View More
Otherworldly Evil Monarch
Requiem of Souls (Original) · C116
Requiem of Souls (Original) · C16
Sighingmadman: Mc really deserves a title of a loser! He needs more torture maybe he'll smarten up.
Requiem of Souls (Original) · C16
this novel is a all time girl center ? beatiful girl and oke come we r friends and any other guy wooww what a beatiful girl she must be myn :S View More
The Wizard World · C2
A Sorcerer's Journey
dude if you r search something for reading dont read this **** realy :S
dude if you r search something for reading dont read this **** realy :S View More
A Sorcerer's Journey
A Sorcerer's Journey · C39
A Sorcerer's Journey · C31
A Sorcerer's Journey · C12
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A Rattling Monster [Completed] (Editing in Progress)
hawlol: Really bad synopsis that doesn't really portraits anything in this novel which also has too many flaws.
Author wants us to believe that swords and bows exists but not spears. They have ATM cards but no land management, no things that even existed in middle ages and not even steel was discovered. In other words, the worldbuilding is really faulty. You'll facepalm a lot of times with the absurdity of it.
The System is called a dominator/engineering but it becomes some all knowing AI and engineering is forgotten. He designs a spear a crossbow and steel making devices, nothing more. The system had no reason to exist in the story(plot wise), but it's there to babysit the MC.
The Mc is a mary sue. Everything he does is successful and works very quickly. He goes from street rat into one of the richest merchants in a few chapters. Everyone accepts his ideas and they grant him tons of money in a few days. He also learns to fight by himself in days and now can kill veteran guards and such.
Adding insult to injury, he not only forgets the engineering part but goes full magus path with the system working as an AI to help him with it. Dropped when he was going towards a school to be a full magus.
Overall this feels like the author wanted to make something(which I coudn't fully guess what) but gave up midway and decided to clone Warlock of the Magus World.Ruler Of The Underworld
Once Human, Now a Parasite
Once Human, Now a Parasite · C35
DawnSky: Not worth reading. The MC is the most inconsistent, and quite literally retarded MC that I have seen in a long time.
Nothing he says or does fits in with his backstory or supposed mindset, and even then it wildly changes every few paragraphs .
It's also incredibly frustrating how retarded he is. He gets the ability to possess any living or dead being and fully, permanently, gain their stats and skills. So what does he do with that? Nothing. Instead of bouncing between anything he possibly can to gain the maximum possible benefit of his ability he does nothing with it at all.Once Human, Now a Parasite
Once Human, Now a Parasite · C33
Once Human, Now a Parasite · C26
Vonte: The protagonist supposedly got tortured for months by a woman and is described as someone who became cold-hearted and ruthless yet not 2 weeks(?) have passed upon his reincarnation, he starts falling for someone else who basically did nothing much but look good.
Seriously?
Proofread your chapters please. There are also contradicting details or rather, certain details were left out of the story and just skipped with no explanations whatsoever.Once Human, Now a Parasite
Once Human, Now a Parasite
dude i thing your novel realy good not idiot and not horny mc and realistic
dude i thing your novel realy good not idiot and not horny mc and realistic View More
Global Evolution
