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  • Your System Begs You to Stop Dying

    Your System Begs You to Stop Dying

    Eastern Fantasy Reincarnation System Cultivation Comedy Game Elements Academy Brotherhood Tragedy Xianxia

    As a System [in training], my one last practical exam before I could graduate with honours from System Academy was meant to be a stroll in the park. But what did you mean by blackbellied protagonist? What did you mean by reincarnated, time-travelling blackbellied protagonist??? My easy assignment suddenly became a tribulation to stop my protagonist from dying before he completed all of his plot points— —Because he kept courting death!!! We definitely must have had some sort of deep, dark and unresolved feud between our families. Nevertheless, I will keep fighting the good fight! For the sake of the plot, and more importantly, for my grades. Audience, please light some candles for me. I will livestream the death of my grades as I beg my protagonist to stop dying.

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Eikhyu: Hi there! Sorry about the confusion! My co-writer and I are currently in the midst of revamping this story, so we decided to take it down to avoid readers getting mixed up about things. The revamped version should be up once we've edited everything. Thank you for your interest!

Your System Begs You to Stop Dying
1 year ago

Eikhyu: Hi there! Sorry about the confusion! My co-writer and I are currently in the midst of revamping this story, so we decided to take it down to avoid readers getting mixed up about things. The revamped version should be up once we've edited everything. Thank you for your interest!

Your System Begs You to Stop Dying
1 year ago
Hi there! Sorry about the confusion! My co-writer and I are currently in the midst of revamping this story, so we decided to take it down to avoid readers getting mixed up about things. The revamped version should be up once we've edited everything. Thank you for your interest! View More

w7shQI: What happened to this novel? where are the chapters?

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Your System Begs You to Stop Dying
1 year ago
Hi there! This is Eik! Thank you for your warm welcome!

Sak was actually the one who came up with the System Academy idea and got me invested enough in it that I decided to cowrite it!
Systems in stories are often just computer programs with no personality behind them. So we thought it'd be an interesting idea to turn that on its head and write a human-like system.

We're so glad you're picking up on all the foreshadowing we're laying down! We're setting the arena up for some really big plot developments and background stories. Hopefully all of these sub-surface level hints will pay off in the future.

Because a system's role is very limited to mainly giving their host missions and information, we decided that we had to give our system a reactive personality otherwise it'd be a pretty dull read if they just watched and didn't make any commentary.

Haha your advice is noted! Don't worry, we've already got the overall plot set out and it won't turn into just a parody. View More

OldReader: First off, welcome Eik of Eikhyu.

This novel is refreshing and hilarious. The take on system's life instead is one of the most novel ideas of this genre, and hats off to whichever part of Eikhyu came up with that!

Regarding the actual story, I very much appreciate the idea of an Academy of Systems out there. It brings down the mysteriousness of a system to a level reader can relate to, which I believe that main character should be like. Not too mysterious for readers to not even understand what a person MC is. It's also delightful to find so many nuances which are common in real life academies.

For characters and the world all around, we have much to see yet. But Eikhyu has already introduced an underlying division of two opposing factions and then uses that to expand the horizons. It is much more smooth for the story as not only it helps in avoiding too much linearity, and also when these things actually happen later, it won't feel like a "rabbit out of the magic hat" situation.

The goldmine of this novel is the system's childlike personality, grumbling one second and gloating the very next. Feeling excited over random ideas, and then depressed over lack of professionalism from the academy. This liveliness of the system makes it more smooth for readers to perceive it as a character rather than a prop.

The only concern I have here is that Eikhyu, please keep in mind that the novel doesn't morph into a parody of system novels (unless you are aiming for it).


**: After having a short discussion with my latest friend System, I would like to call out to Hyu of Eikhyu. Come out author, let's chat about life. Don't worry, I won't bring up Rewound!

PPS: Rewound, Rewound! Rewound, Rewound!!

Your System Begs You to Stop Dying
1 year ago
Haha yes poor system definitely needs those candles! Many thanks for commenting like always, we really appreciate it!! View More

Darkdelusion: The poor system😔😔
Rip his social cyber life🕯🕯

Your System Begs You to Stop Dying · C0
1 year ago
We're so glad that the humour is hitting the point for you! Many thanks for commenting like always, we really appreciate it!! View More

Lkjfdsay1: *dizzy from laughter*
*falls over*
*laughs in unconscious*

Your System Begs You to Stop Dying · C0
1 year ago
Hahahaha yes, poor system. Thanks so much for commenting like always!! View More

Darkdelusion: The poor system😔😔
Rip his social cyber life🕯🕯

Your System Begs You to Stop Dying · C0
1 year ago
Glad you like it and thanks for commenting like always!! ^_^ View More

Lkjfdsay1: *dizzy from laughter*
*falls over*
*laughs in unconscious*

Your System Begs You to Stop Dying · C0
1 year ago

Eikhyu: That's true hahah, it is a widely used trope. Many thanks for commenting like always, we really appreciate it!!

Your System Begs You to Stop Dying · C0
1 year ago
That's true hahah, it is a widely used trope. Many thanks for commenting like always, we really appreciate it!! View More

Darkdelusion: To be fair, master of most xianxia become useless later on

Your System Begs You to Stop Dying · C0
1 year ago

Eikhyu: Hahaha, can't say much or I'll spoil things! Thanks so much for commenting, we really appreciate it!!

Your System Begs You to Stop Dying · C0
1 year ago

Eikhyu: ∠( ᐛ 」∠)_haha hopefully it's an interesting twist on the usual system novel plot!

Your System Begs You to Stop Dying · C0
1 year ago
Yup, a potential big sis type of character~ Anyway, thanks so much for commenting, we really appreciate it!! View More

azuron: Mmm a potential onee-san archetype love interest? Interesting...
Keep it up, author-sama

Your System Begs You to Stop Dying · C0
1 year ago
Hahaha, can't say much or I'll spoil things! Thanks so much for commenting, we really appreciate it!! View More

Darkdelusion: A black belly mc is bound to enjoy multiple flowers in his garden😏😏😏

People like senior brother are the types who are friendzoned as the 'nice guy' in RL. I bet that even the original fl only chose him after the black-belly lu xian was gone😕. But now, the senior brother is gonna be a wizard😈😈

Your System Begs You to Stop Dying · C0
1 year ago
Thank you so much for commenting, we really appreciate it!!! View More

mathiaseklund: Thanks for the chapter! :D

Your System Begs You to Stop Dying · C0
1 year ago
Yesss, hahaha~ I wanna visit that library! Thanks so much for commenting~ View More

Lkjfdsay1: Tourist destinations confirmed!

Your System Begs You to Stop Dying · C0
1 year ago
Ehehe, I wonder? Thanks for commenting!! <3 View More

Darkdelusion: Isn't a hidden boss character way more chuuni*cough* awesome😉

Your System Begs You to Stop Dying · C0
1 year ago
Ahahaha I'm glad you find our humour funny, we try our best!! /o/ Thanks so much for commenting!!~ View More

Lkjfdsay1: I have learned my lesson. Do not read this when I’m trying to read in secret. The suppressed laughter is not conducive to secrecy.

Your System Begs You to Stop Dying · C0
1 year ago
Hahaha glad you enjoyed it!! <3 Thanks so much for commenting and supporting us! /o/ View More

Darkdelusion: Maniacal laughter must have infected the area😔😔

Your System Begs You to Stop Dying · C0
1 year ago
So glad you find our humour enjoyable, thanks so much for the comment and for your support! View More

Lkjfdsay1: I can’t... this laughter... I just can’t.... make it stop....

Your System Begs You to Stop Dying · C0
1 year ago
Hahaha please stay tuned! Thanks for commenting and for your support, we really appreciate it! View More

Darkdelusion: If I did not know he was acting, I would have thought that the guy was into Npc senior brother in law😂😂😨😨

Your System Begs You to Stop Dying · C0
1 year ago
LOL bu yiyang ahaha. ((●≧艸≦) But haha, not gonna spoil anything but those are good guesses! Please keep reading to find out, though~ And thanks so much for commenting, we really appreciate it!! <3 View More

YuKosaka: Pu Yiyang , I thought it is Bu yiyang xD.
And Lu Xian way of thinking ~
1. He's gay
2. He love her but didn't want to love her anymore
3. He hate her.

Your System Begs You to Stop Dying · C0
1 year ago

Eikhyu: Haha, can't spoil anything about this female love interest, //wink wonk// Please continue reading to find out! <3 Thanks for commenting, we really appreciate it!

Your System Begs You to Stop Dying · C0
1 year ago
Glad you find our humour funny, we try our best!! Thanks so much for commenting, we really appreciate your support! View More

Lkjfdsay1: hehehehe
hahahahaha
AHAHAHAHAHAHA
AGAHAHAHAHAHA
*uncontrollable laughter intensifies*

Your System Begs You to Stop Dying · C0
1 year ago
Haha, can't spoil anything about this female love interest, //wink wonk// Please continue reading to find out! <3 Thanks for commenting, we really appreciate it! View More

Darkdelusion: Is this lu xian gay😂😂
How can one not be interested in beauties🙄😏. Unless she was in love with him and annoyed him crazily

Your System Begs You to Stop Dying · C0
1 year ago
Hahaha, doesn't it describe those kind of characters well? (●´艸`) Thanks for commenting, we really appreciate it!! View More

Elicius: Cold, distant flower on the summit of the highest mountain. I feel it.

Your System Begs You to Stop Dying · C0
1 year ago
😂😂😂 <3 View More

Lkjfdsay1: L.
M.
A.
O.

Your System Begs You to Stop Dying · C0
1 year ago
LOLOL yup, hahaha! Thanks for commenting, we really appreciate it! View More

YuKosaka: Hmph, I think I need to kill that sh*tty teacher again!
Acting all mysterious when he appeared, yet reading novel when he's gone! At least invite us disciple to read too! Stupid author!

Your System Begs You to Stop Dying · C0
1 year ago
Hurrhurrhurr, that's right! 。゚(TヮT)゚。 Thanks for commenting, we appreciate it!! View More

Darkdelusion: A mc material turned useless fodder
A master turned into useless fodder
All that is left is a super beauty who ended up being forgotten in original novel😂😂😂

Your System Begs You to Stop Dying · C0
1 year ago
Thanks so much for commenting and for the support!! <3 View More

Jeffery35: Thanks for the first chapter on to the second

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1 year ago
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