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my birthday is in 4 days, I hope I get a double chapter too 😏😏.

keep up the good work 👍👍. I noticed some grammar mistakes so I recommended you use grammarly, it will help you greatly in fixing these issues, furthermore it's free.

No problem, just keep up the good work, lol

Here take mine ( 3 daily power stones).

Keep up the good work 👍👍.

Yeah I feel like the event intensity curve took a sharp turn upwards 🤔.

Keep up the good work 👍👍.

Keep up the good work👍, as for the disturbance....... sorry too tired to guess 😔😔.

Cheers for you bro 🍺🍺, you hit the nail on it's head there 👍.

I thought I was reading a system novel, what the fu*k is the Dao of cliffhangers doing here 🤔🤔. Keep up the good work 👍👍.

Me too. It will also be an opportunity to get to know the younger brother since he should be the next antagonist 🤔🤔.

Caught up...... I need MOREEEEEE 😡😡. Anyways that was good as in very very good, keep up the good work👍👍.

From my understanding of the novel until now we only have a socially and physically bullied MC which explains his lack of character and cowardice. But as we can see he is making progress to change his character for the better which is a type of character development that most stories lack. The thing that will determine if the story is good or not will depend on how his character will grow from now, if for example he grows to be a hero-like character then this will be bad and unrealistic. The most appropriate progression from a social and psychological point of view will be an anti-hero MC or straight up villainous MC, that's my honest opinion. Anyways this is your story and you are doing a very good job with it till now, keep up the good work 👍.

A new reader here. Loved the thing about getting crushed by your crush 😂😂. Literally taking dropping the bomb to the next level 😜😜. Anyways keep up the good work 👍👍.

Good work there author, but can I ask what scythe are you basing the weapon on ?. Keep up the good work 👍.

Yup, we really needed a break.

Good to have you back, I hope you aced your exams. Anyways, we need you to start pumping out chapters since I really, reallllllllllllly don't like this cliffhanger.

Since you asked if it were me I would absorb as much as I can, sleep in the volcano for a couple of days to increase body strength, then go back for more then rinse and repeat 🤔🤔.

To tell the truth I like the way jake acted right now and support it 100%, cause let's analyse the situation and Sarah's character, first of all the Sarah is doing comes from either one of 2 emotions the first is simply being horny which is a side effect of the bloodline and second is just that she wants jake because well he is strong and she has already shown that she will attatch herself to strong people (kyle before the whole new planet thing) before. Now to my personal opinion if this was a general xianxia or apocalypse novel I honestly wouldn't give a fu*k what you make him do, but sadly it isn't and Jake deserves much better than Sarah, I don't know enough about Ruby to judge but she is a much better choice right now, and if someone says he should have a one night stand then I will say sorry but I hate reading about a man-whore and you're much better than writing someone like that Ark. Anyways that was the opinion of a reader who has been this novel since chapter 17 was posted, and I wish you all the best Ark. Sorry for the long rant I will return to the Darkness again .

I will just stop trying to take 1st place for this time period ( whole summer vacation) unless by some miracle I get more free time 😞😞.