Webnovel Author: Kyruu - Novel Collection

Kyruu

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Replied to Kyruu

in case you do extend the story much more this are some points i think that matter: overlord story beauty is the combination of schemes, enemies being unknown to the reader and the enemies themselves not knowing much about the tomb's horror in addition to that, it would be nice to see if characters make progress (such as their flaws being noticeable and slowly but surely working on them overtime) or researching a way to break past their current cap and maybe the possibility of introducing the other players in the guild?

Yo! I have run out of ideas and am feeling a bit lost when it comes to where I want to take the story, I would really appreciate it if you gave me any ideas you have so I can get inspired by them!

I became an NPC in The Great Tomb of Nazarick

Anime & Comics · MarAuthor

Kyruu

10d

Commented

i mean once you are done with nazarick conquering new world there isnt much left to do aside from explore details (a sort of prologue arc) , make up new threats (could feel too forced) the threat could be a civil war or whatnot, otherwise you could have nazarick connect over to other universes since demiurge believed that ainz "planned" to conquer the stars too

Yo! I have run out of ideas and am feeling a bit lost when it comes to where I want to take the story, I would really appreciate it if you gave me any ideas you have so I can get inspired by them!

I became an NPC in The Great Tomb of Nazarick

Anime & Comics · MarAuthor

Kyruu

1mth

Replied to QuincyEcht

yeah i forgot about vayne lore, though indeed spirit creatures are likely able to manifest on multiple places but choose specific areas to be active in, on tahm kench case iirc he showed some interest in shurima / a canal leading there at the end of his story

"Did you forget about Evelynn?" I reminded him, referring to one of the demons of Runeterra, known for her seductive and deadly nature.

The Journey of Elrath's Chosen(Warcraft/M&M/Runeterra)

Anime & Comics · QuincyEcht

Kyruu

2mth

Replied to Kyruu

nvm this could just be a different point in time

"Did you forget about Evelynn?" I reminded him, referring to one of the demons of Runeterra, known for her seductive and deadly nature.

The Journey of Elrath's Chosen(Warcraft/M&M/Runeterra)

Anime & Comics · QuincyEcht

Kyruu

2mth

Commented

fiddle sticks and nocturne were active in demacia iirc, not sure about evelynn but in LoR wasnt she in bilgewater?

"Did you forget about Evelynn?" I reminded him, referring to one of the demons of Runeterra, known for her seductive and deadly nature.

The Journey of Elrath's Chosen(Warcraft/M&M/Runeterra)

Anime & Comics · QuincyEcht

Kyruu

4mth

Posted

i see a lot of people either giving 5 stars to this story because of author's other works or they give it the minimum because "UHHH MC WEAK NOT OP TRASH STORY"i didnt read the authors other works and here is my opinion about this storythe story focuses on being more on the realistic side than being a power fantasy trip, unlike other isekais where the main character goes " Damn yes i am in naruto world time to become op and get harem" the main character is an absolute cannon fodder, working his self to death to achieve anything and progress his career, as i said before, this story wants to portray the cruel life of a shinobi in the shinobi world through the eyes of a modern day human, although its not pure suffering, the main character is infact slowly but surely making growth, be it in his personality, discipline, strenght, day to day skills, so its not all grim and darknesstldr: if you want power trip fantasy, this isnt your cup of tea, if you want a slow paced story with a 'average' modern human as the main character, give this a try

Naruto: The Outsider's Resolve

Anime & Comics · FictionOnlyReader

Kyruu

5mth

Commented

i am curious about the path the main character will takeso far it looks like he is twisted from the torture, yet from said suffering it looks like he learned that no one deserves to suffer like thatso ig he will be smth like an anti hero? or villain with principles ?

ch 27 Chapter 27: Little Bird

One Piece: The Worst Reincarnation

Anime & Comics · ahiro

Kyruu

8mth

Replied to Amy_Yollin

he stands still for minutes being a nerd about the world state of afair in which you can just beat him to death, if you dont he spam spells from bosses you defeated on your journeyalso arguablly souls game / elden ring arent really hard, its more of inconvinient / annoying designpoison swamps, trapped chests/mimics that teleport you to a high level area with the most annoying to deal with enemies, bosses that read your input to shoot fireball at you the moment you start drinking a potion, etc etcand thats the charm of the games tbh (in addition to fun combat , that if you dont decide to go full armored mage to take 0 damage and oneshot anything in your way)

((But then again the second hardest boss had 25 million mp and the final boss of the third game had infinite mp so...it's not really THAT impressive))

Is It Okay For An Antagonist To Save The World?

Fantasy · cier_Tempest

Kyruu

1yr

Replied to PursueImmortality

i dont think you know what is a non functional shattered mind

"Can we learn jutsu now? I can do all twelve hand seals successfully now," Takuma asked, pleading— even though he still found forming some hand seals uncomfortable to create with his hands. The hand positioning was really strange with a few of them.

Naruto: The Outsider's Resolve

Anime & Comics · FictionOnlyReader

Kyruu

1yr

Commented

No harem

No Harem

THE DRACONIC PHOENIX(A Bleach fanfic)

Anime & Comics · Sphire1707

Kyruu

1yr

Replied to Shia_Akatsuki

pretty sure there was a novel called parasite system or something like that, about a transmigator parasite on a human in a spaceship (was genuinely interesting world build, i dropped it because slow update rate)

'Enemies lured them in a trap to deal with them in one go. Now the question is, had they prepared the trap to intentionally lure us, or is there a spy among us?'

Reborn in Naruto As Madara's Grandson

Anime & Comics · ForgottenLife

Kyruu

1yr

Posted

if you are looking for your usual wish satisfying power trip novel this isnt your cup of tea 1- the grammar and writing is engaging and good as heck, even when i considered dropping it ( read 2-) i didnt because of the writing style 2- the main character, although i hate his initial mental turmoils and indecisiveness, i can tell he is growing and his character became better after all the suffering 3- power wise i am satisfied for his current progress, he could be considered a genius slightly worse than itachi 4- spoiler ahead: main character changed canon but not by much due to his weak personality at the start, although i hated it , i liked how it played after that and how it was used to set the further plot overall the story focuses more about personality and character growth than anything else

The Fateful Uchiha

Anime & Comics · MilexKor

Kyruu

1yr

Replied to ParagonDaoOfBS

you used female pronouns here when refering to klein which i guess made him think it was the sword speaking

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Cosmos Divider - Lord of Mysteries

Book&Literature · ParagonDaoOfBS

Kyruu

1yr

Replied to TFH

think you mistook own and owe

How to tackle this situation? Easy. When the war occurs, it would be too easy to kill these civilians and the business would be affected either way. So, it was better to call them back for an indefinite vacation while sending genins of genin corps for the task with higher pay. Genin corps could choose a D-rank mission of their liking and the higher pay on their missions meant that these genins would work for them happily. It was a big expenditure, sure... but, Senjus kind of owned Konoha and had a shit ton of money that could support the clan even if they didn't do anything for almost 15 years!

Filthy Gamer in Narutoverse

Anime & Comics · FanHarem

Kyruu

1yr

Replied to The_Hollow

alright i guess

ch 117 These Eyes Can See Just Fine In The Darkness...

Genius of the leaf

Anime & Comics · The_Hollow

Kyruu

1yr

Replied to The_Hollow

2 mangekyou fusing = 1 emangekyou 4 mangekyou = only 2 emangekyou or am i missing something

ch 117 These Eyes Can See Just Fine In The Darkness...

Genius of the leaf

Anime & Comics · The_Hollow

Kyruu

1yr

Commented

i am confused, they implanted each other mangekyou on the others eye? so they both now only have 1 eye that has e mangekyou?

ch 117 These Eyes Can See Just Fine In The Darkness...

Genius of the leaf

Anime & Comics · The_Hollow

Kyruu

1yr

Commented

the professor

Then finally we have Hiruzen sarutobi the 3rd and current Hokage, also known as

Genius of the leaf

Anime & Comics · The_Hollow

Kyruu

1yr

Commented

males have XY chromosome pair while females have XX so the fusion probably took only the X from both sides

Well, all that aside, Kuroto is still unable to figure out just what could be the reason that the clone turned into a female instead of a male, after all, the chromosome pair that defines the gender of a person should obviously be that of a male, as both him and Shisui are males, but still the clone turned into a woman.