Webnovel Author: Erelbrinx - Fanfic&Novel Collection

Erelbrinx

6mth

Commented

You would think you need a light for a shadow to exist, right?

However, Sunny's soul was dark and lightless.

Erelbrinx

6mth

Commented

I hate mind control. I think it kills the story if used to obtain loyalty, manipulation, and such. It just leads to an uninteresting plot.

[Not only could you use mind power to control objects without touching them, but you can even modify the mind and will of others as long as their willpower is weaker than yours.]

World Travel Simulator System In Modern Society

Fantasy · ShadowKatake

Erelbrinx

6mth

Commented

So it was the color of his eyes that she found a problem with. I thought she meant the perverted look in Mc's eyes lol. I was like how degenerate the Mc has to be to look that way even in a newborn baby.

The Maester rushed over to inspect me and looked into both of my little slitted Red eyes, he moved a finger in front of my face and my little eyes followed it.

Degenerate Reborn In House Of The Dragon

Book&Literature · SERBMADHAUS

Erelbrinx

6mth

Commented

Love the chapter. It is much better than Oberyn simply going along with Mc's wishes one way or another. Oberyn was simply looking for adventure, not to submit to a rather intelligent 5-year-old. I'm waiting to see what kind of butterfly effect this will have in the future.

ch 27 A Rift between Viper and Fox

Game of Thrones: Victor Di Natale

TV · marcoo

Erelbrinx

6mth

Replied to Warrior_Blade

Just keep writing, that is the most difficult part. You have good grammer too. Although I pointed out something I felt is a plot hole, don't be pressured to rewrite chapters or restart your book to fix things up. I believe that is a trap most new authors face. Most rewrites don't surpass the chapter number of the old one before quitting.

As the trainees came within shooting range, Ethan signaled General Magnus to command the fifty archers to release their arrows. The projectiles whizzed through the air, and though a few trainees managed to dodge them, they soon found themselves surrounded by flames. The Verdant Vale soldiers had prepared a trap, igniting the fields and creating chaos amidst the enemy ranks.

Rise of Power: Journey of Kingdoms

Fantasy · Warrior_Blade

Erelbrinx

6mth

Replied to marcoo

From what I remember although Oberyn had a laid-back character, he also had a hot temper and overconfidence that resulted in his death. I would love to see Oberyn forming a grudge against MC with this and breaking their relationship. I think Mc was really wrong in his approach. I don't see Oberyn letting Mc force his rules on him.

ch 26 A fateful Choice

Game of Thrones: Victor Di Natale

TV · marcoo

Erelbrinx

6mth

Replied to Erelbrinx

Let's say the 2 armies of these kingdoms fought until noon when Mc's father died. After defeat Mc's kingdom falls back to castle to defend. The enemy launches an attack without any delay because of the arrogance of the previous victory. Mc defends the walls until nighttime. Launches a night raid and uses fire to create chaos in enemy camp.

As the trainees came within shooting range, Ethan signaled General Magnus to command the fifty archers to release their arrows. The projectiles whizzed through the air, and though a few trainees managed to dodge them, they soon found themselves surrounded by flames. The Verdant Vale soldiers had prepared a trap, igniting the fields and creating chaos amidst the enemy ranks.

Rise of Power: Journey of Kingdoms

Fantasy · Warrior_Blade

Erelbrinx

6mth

Replied to Warrior_Blade

I can't think of anything that a medieval setting equivalent of petrol or something that can catch fire really quickly for a surprise effect. Even if there were I don't think there was any time to implement it since i believe it was after a disastrous defeat that ended with a fallen king. Simply relying on castle walls and taking advantage of an arrogant enemy would have been better in my opinion. If the castle walls weren't effective against trainees and apprentice knights they wouldn't bother building them.

As the trainees came within shooting range, Ethan signaled General Magnus to command the fifty archers to release their arrows. The projectiles whizzed through the air, and though a few trainees managed to dodge them, they soon found themselves surrounded by flames. The Verdant Vale soldiers had prepared a trap, igniting the fields and creating chaos amidst the enemy ranks.

Rise of Power: Journey of Kingdoms

Fantasy · Warrior_Blade

Erelbrinx

6mth

Commented

How is Oberyn gonna be in his family? How does that work? At first I thought Mc was suggesting a marriage between families. Maybe I'm too tired to understand, will probably re-read it tomorrow.

ch 26 A fateful Choice

Game of Thrones: Victor Di Natale

TV · marcoo

Erelbrinx

6mth

Commented

No matter how dry, I can't see wheat catching fire fast enough to scare an army. It would take way more than that to cause an immediate fire like that.

As the trainees came within shooting range, Ethan signaled General Magnus to command the fifty archers to release their arrows. The projectiles whizzed through the air, and though a few trainees managed to dodge them, they soon found themselves surrounded by flames. The Verdant Vale soldiers had prepared a trap, igniting the fields and creating chaos amidst the enemy ranks.

Rise of Power: Journey of Kingdoms

Fantasy · Warrior_Blade

Erelbrinx

6mth

Replied to marcoo

Author, you really scared me with all the info dump at the beginning. At least it was an interesting enough concept to keep me going. I'm glad I was patient enough.

ch 25 A Plan for the Future

Game of Thrones: Victor Di Natale

TV · marcoo

Erelbrinx

6mth

Replied to Hyraken

He is 5, born in 269 AC.

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Game of Thrones: Victor Di Natale

TV · marcoo

Erelbrinx

8mth

Commented

Mc's reaction is lackluster... I thought he was prideful. He could not save his mother with the powers he personally chose and used to heal her. What we got was a weird stare between Tywin and the Mc while his mother just died.

ch 10 Part 10 - 273 AC (III)

Lannister's Sin of Pride

TV · Cedric_7512

Erelbrinx

9mth

Replied to Cpt_Dark

He will not die but it will probably lead to a plot armor power-up, since they even bully him away from the kaiju he beat. It's just disappointing.

Gamera looked at the scene of the accident, not knowing what to do. He was shocked by the courage of the pilot and his accident. "Alright! I don't know why you want to take the Kaiju so hard, but I'm not going to kill you for lunch." He did not know if the pilot survived, but he did not want to repeat this situation. He had no intention of staying here any longer, so he went back to the ocean, the same way he had come.

Guardian of the Pacific: The Incredible Adventures of the Giant Turtle

Movies · MyQuietPlace

Erelbrinx

9mth

Commented

Now he can't put anything in the system space or enter it, right ? The flame is there.

This book has been deleted.

Erelbrinx

9mth

Replied to Soda_T

What is considered common knowledge changes with time. You need someone with a brilliant mind first to realize why the apple from the tree falls to the ground to be aware of the thing called gravity and base further knowledge on this.

"If the planet was round, a person on the other side would fall off" She replied with an 'obviously' look.

Harem in a Labyrinth

Anime & Comics · Avi2112

Erelbrinx

10mth

Commented

In the video, a middle-aged man holding a slingshot in front of the screen explained the correct use of the slingshot.

I Stack Attributes in the Apocalypse

Sci-fi · Cig, Coffee, And Tea

Erelbrinx

10mth

Replied to AznKitty

It's more like 7 to 9 hours.

"Exercise, 30% training, 70% diet, and 10% sleep. There shouldn't be a problem with the exercise. After exercising, the values in brackets immediately increased, proving that exercise was effective in promoting one's attributes. My sleep was also fine; I slept from 10 pm to 7 am last night, which was healthy. So the only issue must be with my diet."

I Stack Attributes in the Apocalypse

Sci-fi · Cig, Coffee, And Tea

Erelbrinx

10mth

Replied to Truck_Samaa

That is his "ultimate retreat". What you are suggesting would not only put his power needs outside of this "ultimate retreat", it also depends on there being relatively consistent sunlight.

A diesel generator, a lot of fuel, more compressed biscuits, canned food, and drinking water were enough to ensure that Lu Ming had food and water for more than three years! The independent sewer system, the independent water circulation system, the independent electricity system, and the ventilation system—this basement had cost Lu Ming 70% of his money.

I Stack Attributes in the Apocalypse

Sci-fi · Cig, Coffee, And Tea

Erelbrinx

10mth

Replied to WIERD

It's much better than Mc being dumb the whole novel while intelligence stat is increasing... Most authors can't show the increase of intelligence in their writing.

Note: The three-dimensional average value for adult males is 5.

I Stack Attributes in the Apocalypse

Sci-fi · Cig, Coffee, And Tea

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