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It’s average? There isn’t anything too bad about it but there also isn’t really much to write about as well. It is pretty much just your typical reincarnation story with a VR game. It would be better if there was a better gimick than there just a versatile class, maybe a more thought out game better back story and or more world building.

I don't know why but they censored "a d u l t."

Read up till chapter 15. It is so-so. It is your typical example of an isekai story, it doesn't have much that stands out all too much. The magic system rather uninspired and it seems like there is a misunderstanding in regards to how a 5 to 7 year old child should be, physically that is. A 7 year old shouldn't be capable of immediately performing complex maneuvers with a sword, practice or other wise, nor should they have the stamina and strength to match a grown ***** to such an extent, even with his clearly underdeveloped magic. In addition to this, there is a problem with the pacing of the story. It is far too fast to allow for any meaningful character development in anybody other than the main character. In 15 chapters I managed to get from point A to point D without knowing that I passed by B or C. I barely remember the parents of the MC, I barely remember the girl the MC saves, and I barely remember the family of the girl. Another thing to take note of is The Beginning After The End which this story was inspired from. From my skimming of the Beginning After The End through its webtoons, there are many similarities between the two, and it is to the point where you can call it a copy and paste. Lets run down a couple of the similarities. - Man with combat experience is killed for some inexplicable reason and reincarnated. - Reincarnated into a family that has a father that is overly enthusiastic to train their child. - Reincarnated into a family that has a mother that is over protective of their child, and has the proverbial pants in the relationship. - Child has an odd fascination with their parent's books. - Child ends up in a forest, saving a white or silver haired girl. - Child is taken back to the girl's family who is secretly royalty. - Child is trained by the girl's family.