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parsaj

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2018-06-28 Joined Global

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Gale, who had been listening attentively without interjecting, cleared his throat before responding. "Afraid not, Lord Commander. I am as clueless about my situation as Ser Stark," he replied honestly. "All I know is that I possess a unique gift, one which I wish to use for my own good and the good of others," he added.

Winter's (GOT) Nothing on Me

Winter's (GOT) Nothing on Me

TV · Wicked132

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Was he ever truly selfish before?

It's about time I stopped being a selfish asshole. After all, I was powerful enough to act selflessly and help others without endangering my life or compromising my plans.

The Average DC Experience (COMPLETED)

The Average DC Experience (COMPLETED)

Anime & Comics · Wicked132

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This is one of the best works I have read on this site. There isn't much to complain about here, mostly subjective and personal preferences which have no bearing on the objective quality of the novel. Firstly, grammar, work structure, paragraph placing, and writing quality itself is one of the best on this site and as a whole there are a few typos scattered around a hundred chapters, which is basically nothing. I haven't followed this fanfic from the start, but from what I can see, there are 360 chapters in 8 months, which is a pretty solid update ratio, especially considering the chapters' quality. Story development is original and unexpected. There are some twists there that aren't predictable. The protagonist has interesting abilities, and although very powerful, it isn't to an unreasonable extent and he doesn't steamroll everything he comes across. The start of it however is a little slow, and it takes a while to get into the meat of the story, but pretty solid nonetheless. Every character has their unique personality traits and quirks. The main character is a cold and power hungry individual, my personal favorite. Although his very logical and benefit-oriented view on his relationships with every character is looking to make a very lonely existence out of him at the peak of power he is seeking. However, I think the author has something planned for this, as well. World background is extremely unique, which is unexpected, considering most of the story happens in previously established fiction. The author manages to give these fictions an original flavor. All in all, I would highly recommend this novel to anyone who is a fan of works such as Reverend Insanity, Warlock of the Magus world, and Ultimate Evolution. Writing Quality 5/5 Stability of Updates 5/5 Story Development 4.5/5 Character Design 5/5 World Background 5/5
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phantom clench!
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"AAAAAAAAAAAAARGH!" Still, Zi Yao's tail got to Hanxing's groin, and with tempered-steel sharpness, lopped off the great elder's cock. His blood gushed forth, and with loud shrieks, Hanxing clutched at his crotch, trying to hold on to the balls and shaft that had been severed from his groin.

Reverend Ecstasy

Reverend Ecstasy

Eastern · Evil_Dao

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"Grievances? Enmity? If I say that we have grievances, then we have grievances. If I say that we don't, and still want to fuck you up, then fuck you up I will. So Lord Hanxing, you just have to accept that today, I will bend you over like the bitch you're so hell-bent on being, and rob you...of all that you've ever desired.

Reverend Ecstasy

Reverend Ecstasy

Eastern · Evil_Dao

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Preach!
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"The key to this is: It's best for you to run when you're both at the same level. If your opponent is at a lower level, you should directly kill the other party with your ultimate technique. After killing the other party, you have to grind their bones and scatter their ashes. You have to be fast and leave no traces. If you can fight in a group, you shouldn't fight alone. If you can run, it's best not to fight."

I Am Such An Expert; Why Do I Have To Take In Disciples

I Am Such An Expert; Why Do I Have To Take In Disciples

Eastern · Wood Easily Starts Fires

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huh, some realism in a cultivation story.... pigs can fly!
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Previously, because Yin Ling's Blood Pills had been snatched, her Bloodthirsty Gu had almost sucked her dry. Thus, she ended up selling her body and seemed to follow a senior outer disciple.

I Cultivate Passively

I Cultivate Passively

Eastern · Bloodied White Shirt

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yesss...
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Even now, the Collector could see capacity to develop Eru Wun Thamir's Life Bringer Breath to higher heights, perhaps even being able to fully resurrect specimen or construct new ones in a manner akin to the Spawning Pools of the Collective's Hivemind. 

Alien Evolution System

Alien Evolution System

Fantasy · John_Doever

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I used to like his character at the beginning. he was benefit-oriented, decisive and cautious, a consummate cultivator seeking to elevate himself and his people. now it's one unreasonable thing after another moving a planet because he used to live there, saving the dragons and gaining the attention of a superpower while endangering the starfield and more. he's turning into a proper(generic) xianxia protagonist
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Wei Wuyin gave one last glance at the Myriad Yore Continent, an emotional surge flowed within his intense, draconic gaze. This continent contained his entire childhood memories, including the resting bodies of the most important people in his life. He couldn't abandon it. But his current actions might be considered reckless, even unreasonable. 

Paragon of Sin

Paragon of Sin

Eastern · KevinAscending

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then you're one of the few

She inadvertently giggled. There was something about him now that seemed so innocent. She never quite understood how a man who radiated such imposing aura over something as small as a pop quiz or a football game, could simultaneously be so green and pure.

Dimensional Descent

Dimensional Descent

Fantasy · Awespec

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Replied to Herzen
control+f is a wonderful thing

Because of the memories, it didn't seem like he only knew them for three weeks and it felt like he had known them for years!

My Idle Gaming System

My Idle Gaming System

Games · Adui

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!!!!
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Even though his mom was out with his dad and their team diving in Dimensional Rifts, she always kept a meal ready for her kids when they returned from their own adventures!

My Idle Gaming System

My Idle Gaming System

Games · Adui

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