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I liked it, I have no idea why someone gives it 1 star. Yes, this is not a masterpiece for the ages, but quite a good fanfic with humor and an interesting story. It's quite interesting to read about the smart Luffy who loves to train. I really like the fast pace of the story; by chapter 90 they are already in Alabasta. I would rate the fanfic an 8/10, but everything on this site is below 5 stars trash.

This review is to support the author, otherwise that good novel has so few reviews and a rating of only 4.6 that it is not enough for this site.[img=update][img=recommend]

Review after reading 58 chapters. In short, 7/10. Now more details. From +: it’s difficult to single out something. From -: 1) Annoying AI (his constant comments on obvious things). 2) A very long introduction (The story starts around chapter 50). 3) Too many details and unnecessary information (this wouldn't be bad if it was an original story). Based on the above, I give this fanfic a 7/10 or above average. But since on this site everything below 4 stars is complete garbage, I give it 4.5/5. In fact, this can be called a review of the introduction since the story has not yet really begun.

Great novel. Unlike many other fanfictions that don’t change anything or drop the novel without making any changes to the world, here the changes begin almost immediately and radically. The story is fast but I like it, I got bored with slow stories with zero changes. The only negative is that the story has not yet been released in full and you have to wait for the chapter :(. It’s sad that such a fanfic has so few reviews and readers.

I like the novel. But I came to read about Harry Potter and techno-magic, and what I got was a novel about family problems. It was interesting at the beginning but already chapter 13 and the plot is not moving forward. Just to be honest, I don’t care about Pitunya, she’s not an intern to me at all as a person. I hope that this psychology session will end soon and the story about techno-magic will begin.