Benno

1yr

Commented

Did he go running around advertising that his skill has regressed???

"He's probably completely ruined. He owes several million for refining high-level Divine Weapons, and his strength has regressed to less than one star. I'm afraid he won't be able to produce any decent designs at all."

Blacksmith: You Are Making Mjolnir For The Forging Exam?

Fantasy · Absolute World's Best Sword

Benno

1yr

Replied to Sivartius

There is even more wrong with this. For exam why has his deciple not given him the Immortal Deamon Jade. Its not like he wants to use it and it would be far safer with his master. But no one even thinks about it…

"Indeed, I have to at least know how strong I am…" After thinking over it for a bit, Xuan Hao decided to enter the Burning Mountain Range once again, this time just to find a demon beast to practice with and find out how strong he currently was compared to the past him.

Cultivating Disciples to Breakthrough

Eastern · PurpleSpring

Benno

1yr

Posted

Sadly the synopsis is quite misleading. This is your standard master with a system for taking in deciples novel, only that this master has absolutely no interest in taking in deciples aside from becoming stronger himself.

I Am Such An Expert; Why Do I Have To Take In Disciples

Eastern · Wood Easily Starts Fires

Benno

2yr

Commented

Then give her mone…

How many times had he told her and she still would not change!

Zero To Hero In The Martial Arts Library

Eastern · Flammable Wood

Benno

2yr

Commented

How did they suddenly get level 10??

"Don't worry about that. You three are just getting a head start. I'll catch up in no time." Joshua said before giving each of the girls a hug. Even Laura didn't mind the hug and simply smiled after they finished. Before they could continue their conversation a large portal seemed to open up in front of the group that had been waiting. On the other side Joshua could see a plain filed with grass and a wide open area that was probably a simple starting ground for them to go to. "Well looks like your gate is here. I wish you all the best of luck and try to keep in touch."

Risen World

Urban · VivitheGreat

Benno

2yr

Commented

I’m actually disappointed. It seams the apocalypse is over. Otherwise Guilds would newer be able to form(they need stability and a monetary system to work). In an Apocalypse where the peoples first need is survival strongholds would be the natural thing. Also noone could just decide not to Level up because the standing in the world would entirely really on ones personal strength.

"Then I guess you will probably set up another gym? It would be good for all the people that plan to go out into the new world that don't have much actual experience with fighting. You can even use the fact that you trained the number one ranker for the first phase as a selling point if you want. I'm sure the system will have several roles for people that don't actually want to go out fighting, otherwise there wouldn't be any support classes." Joshua said getting a nod from his father in return. Soon their little conversation was interrupted by a hyper active ball of energy.

Risen World

Urban · VivitheGreat

Benno

2yr

Commented

Thats not protecting them in a world where strength is everything, but rather harming them!

"Hmm, honestly I would love to, but your mother would drag me back if I tried. She's already forcing Amy to wait until she's at least eighteen before she can go and I'm sure she's probably tried to talk you out of it as well." Joshua nodded at his father's words realizing that they were right on the mark. "Although I may have gotten my youth back I'm still an old man on the inside in her eyes. I'd have to agree, besides at this point I prefer teaching others how to fight more than anything. Teaching you and Amy all these years has been one of the highlights of my life."

Risen World

Urban · VivitheGreat

Benno

2yr

Commented

Here it is since again

They all got prepared as Natalie knocked an arrow and set it on fire waiting for the right time to shoot. It didn't take long for several of the orbs of gas to crash into the ground just outside of town. Luckily for them they didn't land ahead of the traps otherwise a lot of their work would have been wasted. When the haze dissipated a bit, several enraged creatures ran out towards them. Unlike the creatures from before that would only shamble forward and lunge at you when they got close enough these ones ran on all fours like animals with their mouths wide open preparing to bite at any moment. They were able to survive being outside the purple haze sense their bodies were still covered in a small shroud of mist from the balls of gas they came out of. Natalie, wasn't sure if they would be able to stay outside of the haze for long, but she didn't have the time to wait and find out.

Risen World

Urban · VivitheGreat

Benno

2yr

Commented

You nearly had me there I was about to coment since again but this time sense is actually correct xD

Soon after the feeling crept over the entire group they were able to watch as an enormous figure stood up and towered over the haze below. More of the mist seemed to shroud its body a bit as it raised up, but they could still clearly make out its figure. The only word that came to Natalie's mind to describe it was demonic. The sense of dread seemed to grow as the creature let out an infuriated roar before looking back down towards the people who tried to hurt it.

Risen World

Urban · VivitheGreat

Benno

2yr

Commented

Since

"Well it seems like they've done the first probing attack." Natalie said as she continued to watch the smoke. Just as she was about to ask how things looked through the mental link the air around them seemed to cause everyone to shudder and a feeling she hoped she wouldn't have to deal with again washed over her. It was similar to back at the factory, but not quite as bad sense they were so far away, but that wouldn't be the case for her friends who were now face to face with the monstrosity.

Risen World

Urban · VivitheGreat

Benno

2yr

Posted

Realy great story. Definitely worth a try. @Author There is a very consistent spelling mistake. It should be “since” not “sense” when you want to give a reason for something.

Risen World

Urban · VivitheGreat

Benno

2yr

Commented

Again since

"Sense we don't know its specific abilities I can't say for sure, but one thing I am certain of is that its blood lust will shock you to the core. Outside of Joshua all of us froze up back at the factory after its first roar. If he hadn't snapped us out of it while holding it off, I don't think we would be talking right now." Natalie replied as she tensed up a bit at the memory.

Risen World

Urban · VivitheGreat

Benno

2yr

Commented

since we don‘t know…

"For the most part whenever we're dealing with an unknown we usually proceed this way. We have to be careful sense we don't know what are target is capable of." Natalie responded. "Back at the factory things nearly went bad because we were surprised at how sturdy the creature was. Even after burning it for a while inside a locked building it didn't die the first time around. If Joshua hadn't kept its attention while we figured out another way to kill it then we might have all died."