CloakedWillow

24d

Commented

LOW KEY IS BEST KEY

"Whatever, even if it's a dark chat group, as long as I can lay low, reduce my desires a little, it will be fine."

Simulation Towards Immortality In A Group Chat

Eastern · Ethereal Like A Dream

CloakedWillow

1mth

Commented

The paragraph is backwards a tier three human defeating a tier 1 beast

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"I don't watch that freaking one century old show. The cartoon was temporary, but memes are eternal." Jay pointed to the side. "By the way, since we're done here, I will leave and prepare myself for tomorrow. You both can do the shopping yourself, right?"

Another World Mall

Sci-fi · Fixten

CloakedWillow

2mth

Commented

but I thought he wanted to add Hans to his contract that was the perfect opportunity

ch 71 Thirteen’s Three Requests

System's POV

Fantasy · Elyon

CloakedWillow

2mth

Commented

author-Kun do you have a discord for the book? and or a personal one over the year so I've dropped so much money into this book and I really don't have much to begin with I know I can be a critic sometimes but still a fan of Wyatt's journey

ch 1840 Trouble

Card Apprentice Daily Log

Games · IGotStones

CloakedWillow

2mth

Replied to Tobby_Shaw

any idea what the original novel was i feel llike ive read it

The Boss of Token Exchanging

· Manga Hero of Times

CloakedWillow

2mth

Commented

The Lightning Beast raised its head in disbelief. This human actually understood its artistic expression?

Beast Taming: I Can Extract Pleasure Points

Eastern · Speechless wwyy

CloakedWillow

2mth

Commented

if it's one of the most wanted pets why couldn't he find anything on raising it at first

A Moonlight Elf was one of the most well-known beasts. In the past, it was on the top ten "Beastmaster's Most Desired Beast" list. In fact, it ranked first for a very long time.

Beast Taming: I Can Extract Pleasure Points

Eastern · Speechless wwyy

CloakedWillow

2mth

Commented

yes suddenly

His original body had suddenly died and his soul had transmigrated to this body in a parallel world.

Beast Taming: I Can Extract Pleasure Points

Eastern · Speechless wwyy

CloakedWillow

2mth

Commented

sounds like a true pokémon Master

"It's called the Fire Dog," Riley replied.

Beast Tamer : Start With Fire Dog

Fantasy · Snorlax777

CloakedWillow

2mth

Commented

I always get irritated when main characters don't invent the bicycle because it has fairly simple mechanics overall but it took years for us to create and would significantly improve the life of commoners and hypothetically exponentially increase the rate of development for a plane over time

William joined the Cultivators that were going to the Guild Hall since he didn't know the way. He admired the luxurious buildings on each side of the paved road that seemed to be out of another age. There were no vehicles or bicycles, so William assumed the road was purely aesthetic.

Infinite Potential System

Eastern · NecW

CloakedWillow

2mth

Commented

Lokey is best key

"How can a non-Cultivator be so strong?"

Infinite Potential System

Eastern · NecW

CloakedWillow

2mth

Commented

better use of the word dismay here

"No exceptions. Win the challenge if you want a discount." the Potion Master was unrelenting, much to William's dismay. He was forced to let the Alchemy Hall scam him for the potions at 4 Gold, 8 Silver.

Infinite Potential System

Eastern · NecW

CloakedWillow

2mth

Replied to NecW

yeah but dismay isn't usually used for strictly alarmed it's used for concerned alarmed (it's connotation usually has like ideas of discussed or doom so because Freya doesn't have the foreknowledge of what he's reading) as in like it would make more sense in this case if the text was changed to he cried out in dismay fria would not be the one in dismay in this scenario despite also being alarmed. again it would make more sense if after he yelled this out everyone looked at him in confusion instead of much to their dismay

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Infinite Potential System

Eastern · NecW

CloakedWillow

2mth

Replied to NecW

"What does much to your dismay mean? experiencing or showing feelings of alarmed concern or dismay : upset, worried, or agitated because of some unwelcome situation or occurrence. " although it might be accurate to say that the other people would be shocked would be closer to say something that would just synonym of confusion, in this context fria is more likely to be confused by his outburst because she has no idea what's going on

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Infinite Potential System

Eastern · NecW

CloakedWillow

2mth

Commented

dismay is not the word

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Infinite Potential System

Eastern · NecW

CloakedWillow

2mth

Posted

I always love a good merchant book but if I'm going to be honest this was kind of meh I will preface I only got through about 37 chapters but it started off with a really interesting concept but as it went on it just felt like your standard apocalypse story now I'm sure later on they'll probably reintroduce those earlier topics but it was kind of boring and the way he used his merchant system would have been fine if the system was some other moniker but there really did not feel like a merchant-based story felt more like a weaker version of one of those everyone gets transported to a new place to play some game and the main character has a superpower and then sells a bunch of stuff in the global channel like the novel shelter in the Apocalypse except for because it's not one of those type of novels it's significantly less fleshed out

Astral Merchant

Fantasy · PsionicMind

CloakedWillow

2mth

Commented

*especially after

'Doesn't she have cute grandbabies or great grandbabies to play with?' Wyatt wondered. However, what Wyatt did not know was that this side of the Field Marshal was a rare sight in the Lorn or the Heatsend Royal Family. The royal kids would be scared shitless just hearing her name. Only a few of them had the opportunity of seeing this side of their ancestor. Especially as Luna's betrayal.