ZiegHart - Profile

nice and great read actually...from the writing is good, the concept is great, the pace is natural, characters have their development well written..actually to help new reader, or to better imagining the world, you could make a glossary of the world building, what known planet or something...and the power level of the Lord, and summon, what make them different etc.

actually this one has a good future, but dont know why but the story is rushed and everything just fall in to Mc's lap out of ñowhere... dont if the raw like this as well or its just the tl on here got the story "cut" so miserably