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Jason Reynolds has always been different. Growing up in a society where the strong rule over the weak, he was taught from a young age to always be cautious of other people's actions and he, therefore, grew up with few to no friends. Even the few people some may consider his friends are actually just acquaintances who he can get rid of at any moment. Calm and collected, he weighs the pros and cons of every situation. Why then did he choose to have the core of an unknown creature when he had the option to choose kobolds, goblins, elementals and more? Perhaps he saw their potential. Perhaps he knows something others do not. An unknown core, a core nobody has seen before. What could make it special?
Coming from a poor family living in the suburbs, Seth never got to experience the finer things in life. Up until his death at the hands of an overeager scientist at 23, he lived a life not enviable by even the poorest of society, where he was homeless since his parents kicked him out at 16 and only managed to survive by offering himself to the government for genetic testing. How will he survive in a new world of magic, and what happened to the mysterious chip injected into his brain by the strange scientist before his death? Stay tuned to find out. Loosely based on Warlock of the Magus World, Age of Adepts, and The Wizard World. Image from Pexels.
kessu91: So he waited till they fed her drugs and stripped her while watching from the side? This entire novel is nothing but cliche after cliche... Also he was supposed to be some big shot demon who kills all who defy him and yet he hasnt actually killed anyone yet? He just spouts out some random shít about his superiority and how if he wanted someone to die they cant go on living... This trash rape blot Im sure his cousin had nothing to do with it... And I bet hes going to yet again let him go since his the supreme demon who kills all but lets all live since they are just beneath him and he can kill them whenever he wants but wont since their just trash and if they come after him again he can just kill them but wont since hes supreme demon who kills all who defy him but wont since author cant write worth a shít....The Man from Hell · C24
Mannymangos: Tbh not rude, just American. I've never heard of anyone taking gifts to visit people. Unless it was a special circumstance.Demons Beside You · C39
HanRyang5: Sometimes I question if Police is of any use in stories other than plot.Demons Beside You · C26
BiscuitSandwich: Only at chapter 9 and im already bored of itThe Sword Deity in Tokyo · C9
PandaKing69: waste of chapter 2 chapters all information about things that not might even get used in the long runThe Sword Deity in Tokyo · C9
Keshav13: Umm...I just wanted to ask why are you inspired with negative reviews but don't take positive reviews seriously?You are getting 90 percent positive reviews but still crying over negative 10 percent reviews. Seriously dude u need to grow up a part to discard negativitySummoner Sovereign
smugscholar: A woman indeed. Shi Yutong started the beef with him and gets pissed when he's going against her.Carefree Path of Dreams · C111
Loldassjs: Lol i think he should take away some martial arts manuals from guo family as "compensation"Carefree Path of Dreams · C45
Archena: Why did he attack Guo family??? The came spy on zhou family. He said he won't helped him. Now he is helping. Novel name should be Mental case of a split personality.Carefree Path of Dreams · C45
Daoisthere: Wtf? The author never said the feces created the spiritual land... Mc thought the fertilizer was soil from the spiritual land and later realized it was the feces from the birds. About the spiritual land the author first said that the spiritual land was a gift from nature or the heavens, then after mc finished reading the books from the sect library he said there was another possibility that was a spiritual land forming from the body of an expert.Carefree Path of Dreams · C42
Shazz11: This is going to get really annoying if he makes an enemy out of every little thing that he doesCarefree Path of Dreams · C35
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Chouxu: Don’t know if this says anything about me but I would have killed them for the cores.Is that a Wisp? · C9
Gobbo_: I don’t even know what’s going on, the writing is so bad. It at least has an Interesting premise though. The book has an obvious non native english speaking author. No world background (that I could tell) and if there was any character development in the dialogue then I couldn’t tell.
I think the titan character race could do with being a bit more unique besides just “imagine a man... but big..” but that’s just a nitpick.
If the author gets better at English or gets an editor that doesn’t mind all the work it would entail to edit this then this honestly would be a good story I think. We need more crafting stories overall.The Online Craftsmaster
Stonex159: Why does no one point out the syntax errors and the times where it switches tense for no reason?Fate Online: Shadow · C1
Konkey_Dong: Should've learned deception. It's a handy skill in its own right... tho I think our MC has good deception skills too 😂The First Order · C14
lataviamorris: I heard a lot of good things about this book and I can’t wait to crack it open and start a new adventure hope for no spoilers but I haven’t really read this book I just want some spirt stones so I can finish reading my comic it’s a real page turner and very colorful she jus accidentally poisoned the guy who kidnapped her and that’s all ya going to know cuz that’s all I know. The comic is called beauty and the beast ￼The Man from Hell
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Monkeybro: you've been saying the same thing in all the reviews you have made. IDK I'm starting to doubt your picky friend even exist.The Man from Hell
Daoist_Zheng: Meh, super cliché on the first chapter, with super poor editing and translation. Honestly, worse than MTL. At least the editing should be readable no matter how ****ty the story is.
The opening is so cliché, on the same bed as engaged famous CEO beauty with 'hidden illness that only Great Me can miraculously cure with BS medical knowledge'.
Ignoring the fact that he was transcendental being got ambushed and somehow reincarnate cliché, the outline of the story is quite bleak. What's next? Arrogant young master who despises peasants? Ex-GF who broke up with him for being good-for-nothing? Stupid clan head who knows nothing about stop and reconcile? Unbending police waman who tried to frame MC at everything? Troublesome High schooler? 'Chinese are trash' JP mob? 'We are better' Indian crowd? 'world hegemon' USA? Etc. Etc. Etc.
And treasure? 'Oh, I found it accidentally on the flea market' space ring? 'as many as weed' herbs? Notebook talismans?
From the techniques, it has to be either "my previous one is good, but...hidden technique that I accidentally found in ancient ruin which I cannot cultivate due to BS" or 'my previous technique is out of imagination cool'
Tell me, which one of these are not there?The Man from Hell
Ace20: I think you should plan how u want the story to go stop post and just rewrite everthing after having a solid foundation start posting againA Necromancer's Journey · C18
Wakiem: wait why are you still posting stuff hereThe Lord of All Dungeons · C5
Wakiem: You are forgiven them and question does shovel pay you authors for just found I need a pass it I want to read any my favorite novelsThe Lord of All Dungeons · C3
Wakiem: ReallyThe Lord of All Dungeons · C3
Wakiem: ReallyThe Lord of All Dungeons · C3
LockYourHeartTight: I don't recommend this novel to the people of the Science Fiction community. The main reason for that is that it is unrealistic. You might find that funny, but it is very important. A story, any story, must have some kind of base ground to stand on or the readers won't be able to understand and make comparisons to it. A story is only a comparison to the readers current life experience to the life experience of the characters in the story. What this means is that in order for a reader to understand a story, they have to have at least some similarities.
I truthfully wouldn't mind this novel if it had some semblance of seriousness in it's writing. If it was more realistic it'd probably be a very good read. The way it is now, not so much.
The writing itself is counterproductive to the story it's trying to tell. Last human in existence, last man alive, yet for some reason there's no suspense, no *******, no reality to the story. It has no depth, and that's because the author decided to add a C3PO to it for slapstick comedy purposes.
Some people might look at the A.I. in the story and it's character interactions with the main characters and say that the author wrote it to act such a way to give some kind of psychological relief to the characters themselves. That the characters are in such a serious situation that some outside help is required to prevent a mental breakdown. I would say that they're grasping at straws.
I would say that for one simple reason, the slapstick comedy isn't designated only to the robot AI. If that was the case then I'd kind of agree with that line of thinking, but it isn't. A prime example of this is the fact that the first thing the MC thinks about when he hears that the earth was destroyed is that he's still a virgin. This is in the context of the main characters first internal monologue. Our first "meeting" with the character we're going to be spending the rest of the novel with. It's what sets the tone for the entire story. It makes a very poor first impression.
I could go on, but stopped reading at chapter 7. I couldn't rationalize the story any longer. If the reader cannot insert themselves into the story, into the situation the main character is in and rationalize the decision making that the character is making then that constitutes a failure of writing in my honest opinion. This goes back to the first part of this review, there has to be some kind of middle ground between the reader and the story. A bridge that allows the reader to understand and "imagine" themselves into the situation the main character finds themself in.
All of this being said, for serious readers of science fiction, this novel is probably not for you, it's lacking in rational decision making. If you're just looking for something to pass the time, there are worse things to read, at least until it goes premium and everyone drops it.Dead on Mars
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