yokedjaguar - Profile

Apparently has the 15k he needs but throws it away for some profit, only a webnovel ff author. Well I guess your not a real author are you? This isn't your work is it, that would be Ethan Reiff.

This would be a solid story if the author didn't have (NOT A CHAPTER) every other chapter. Jesus. delete them or have 1 not a chapter that follows the story you lazy shite. 6 out of 20 aren't even chapter.

Honestly, he's the most useless mc I've ever read. He has soooo much power but can't do anything. He loves a wife that has no desire to be with him, unless theres another woman involved and then shes jealous. He has the ability to cut loose ends but doesn't. But complains about it throughout the entire story. The plot is even more atrocious as its been used 80 times in the past month. So to put it frankly; it's a sh*tty story.

Read the first sentence of the entire ff and you'll understand the 1 star or atleasr until he fixes it. .

Didn't even read it. Just read the synopsis. 2 of the most important parts of the story on a website is the synopsis and the first chapter. If the synopsis looks like that, then I know exactly what the rest is going to look like.

Biggest heaping pile of dog shit I've ever read. Didn't even make it past the first chapter. Read the first handful of chapters and decide if you agree with me or not. Or don't waste your time and read something else.

The plot is great. The golden finger is below average due to the strength being OP, the dialogue is terrible, and the grammar could be proofread. As soon as the dialogue and grammars fixed, this would definitely be the best DC FF.

5 useless chapters right of the bat. Could've been in a single chapter and then grammar sucks. Simple as that. .

Without a doubt, the best written story on this app. That encompasses all novels and fanfics. I've read far too many novels and ff's, so again from personal experience; this is the best writing I have seen in all my 5 years on this app. Not only that, the plot itself is quite nice, and it's different. The flow of the story is consistent, it's adventurous, it has a slice-of-life vibe to it, the character has an actual past, and there's been some decent (but not alot) of character development. Most of its recent development but development regardless.

Plot hole galore, trauma dumping every 2 seconds, and let's not forget every "good person" knows the difference between a sheathe and a Kunai. This is the most basic OP story. There is nothing different compared to the other 1000 out there.

So not only did the author word skip whilst he has 25 chapters for sale this is also a translation, so he's selling someone else's work. Bravo.

Plot holes. Everywhere. What grown man makes a 6 yo aware of all political doings, or growing fueds. How about the most basic trope of falling into a crypt and finding hidden knowledge from ancient times. This is less a story and more a fever dream.

4th wall break every 2 seconds. 2 different chapter skips, I'm good. also skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment

Nah, this is wild. Dodges twice. "Oh my heart, it's too much; i passed my limit." Mind you, this is a 14-15 yo that he's dodging, who has no gifts or powers. If he ever plays a sport, he's off the team. He's supposed to train martial arts, and he's out for the count over something so benign.