vastheIIborn

4mth

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Option 2 - Continue as it is.

One Piece - I Am A Different Luffy!

Anime & Comics · RaccoonLeague

vastheIIborn

7mth

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good luck

ch 107 --No Chapter Announcement---

I, Superman's Younger Brother, got the Thanos Template

Anime & Comics · TheBoredWriter69

vastheIIborn

8mth

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just got off work so im tired but will someone help me understand how in a world of immortals,spirits,demons,gods,dragons, and wizards. that being a mermaid is important, like dose she have some great power, part of a royal family, have some terrible enemy. or is it just "oh she a human with fish tail marvelous." my brain not understand.

ch 81 Two in One Day

vastheIIborn

9mth

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deal breaker

Because of which, a few strands of her hair that had been tucked behind her veil fell out. Those few strands of hair were pink.

Inside An Ad**t Game As A Former Hero

Anime & Comics · Daoistmtl02

vastheIIborn

10mth

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I'll wait to see if it gets better but so far it feels like random wish fulfilment thoughts write down with no actual story or imagination. so if your here for horny then sure I guess but there's not much else.

vastheIIborn

10mth

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comics abomination that has a fish head from what i found says 6'8 MCU abomination with large spine is 8'3

And because Doflamingo was 4 feet taller than him, Doflamingo doesn't have to rise his leg that high as it only took Doflamingo to lift his leg a little before it kicked the Abomination to the chest.

MCU: The Heavenly Yaksha (A Non-Harem FanFic)

Movies · SlimeSage

vastheIIborn

1yr

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ok 1. why wasn't the kid evacuated 2. why wasn't this anywhere in the kids memory's 3. didn't you say that he doesn't really look like that kid anymore because of Wandas' magic

"How did I know that you ate that kid? Well … I know for a fact that my very own grandson was not a psychopathic shapeshifting motherfucking maniac."

vastheIIborn

1yr

Posted

done with volume 1 so far really enjoyed. the mc character building so far is really good haven't got much to say about the girls hope we see them grow a bit more in v2. haven't noticed many grammar errors but usually for me as long as you get the genders right I don't really notice. on one hand the timeskips feel like I'm missing a lot on the other hand they help it not feel like in a repeating grind, if you read a bit you'll understand what I mean. as it is right now it seems like something that I like to let build up and binge read

vastheIIborn

1yr

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yes

Do "yes" or "no" in the chapter comments if you want this novel to continue or stop.

vastheIIborn

1yr

Commented

good nugget

Tell me something, anything, comment.

Nibi shook her head as Yugito pressed her hands into the outlines of the scroll. As the singularity appeared behind her the two-tailed cat said just before disappearing, "It's Yoruichi." Nibi awoke to find herself laying on the large table of Kyuubi's dining room. "What a rush," she said as she sat up. Looking down at her hands she saw that they were white and directing her attention to a window could see the reflection of the assassin Kyuubi had described. Having grown attached to the form she created she began to make her body change to resemble it.

Eroninja

Fantasy · phoebebrown

vastheIIborn

1yr

Posted

exactly what i came here here for

Naruto : Fertility God

Anime & Comics · Immortal_crisis

vastheIIborn

1yr

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However, the moment he picked up the arm, he suddenly heard the familiar 'hissing' sound and he subconsciously lifted up the sleeve and found that there were several detonation charms stuck on the inner sleeve or the hand.