MooseMax

1yr

Replied to Eugene_Piotter

yeah, some sci fi movie where if you dident pay your debts the collectors came and took the organs that they had the debt on, even if they people died

Ren wasn't worried, though, since he could still open an account even if he didn't have the money –– yet. He would apply for an organ loan among the many loans they offered with a time frame of one year.

MMORPG: Rebirth as an Alchemist

Games · MiuNovels

MooseMax

1yr

Commented

that you put first blood in and use it instead of first kill for bosses or first clear for dungeons and quests will sooner or later annoy more people...

But there was nothing like a [Crystal Chest] in the forums and the information he gathered before. He was just aiming for the [Platinum Chest] that contained the [Phantom Cloak], the first blood reward from defeating the Midnight Phantom. But he ended up with much more than he expected.

MMORPG: Rebirth as an Alchemist

Games · MiuNovels

MooseMax

1yr

Commented

why did the "boss" fight seem like a turn based fight? he could have used the stick to hit it or cast heal on himself, and the burn that have 5% of target HP/min is really op, a lvl 1 spell potentially dealing millions of hp in damage to a high teir boss

ch 12 Midnight Phantom

MMORPG: Rebirth as an Alchemist

Games · MiuNovels

MooseMax

1yr

Replied to Lasyandra

the problem is that items can't stack, think how annoying/difficult minecraft would be if items could not stack...

Everyone's inventory had limits up to x999 items only regardless if it was a repetitive item. It was not stackable. Like for example, Ren's loot just now took a total of x12 space in his inventory.

MMORPG: Rebirth as an Alchemist

Games · MiuNovels

MooseMax

1yr

Commented

he could have taken the bodies...

After killing the two guards, the white haired man motioned for the group to move forward. John and the group stepped over the dead bodies and entered the mansion. Being late in the night, the mansion was dark inside, with only a few lanterns lit throughout the mansion.

Ascension of the Immortal Asura

Fantasy · rRandom

MooseMax

1yr

Commented

the world is incredibly detailed qt the start with all the small hits about it, I have high hopes for this novel since several others I have read just throws waay too much Information and details on you and it messes up the pacing

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Ascension of the Immortal Asura

Fantasy · rRandom

MooseMax

2yr

Replied to OrdinaryHuman

it's good but can you please edit the chapter so the capital letters that are everywhere are removed? it will be much easier to read it then, I'm guessing that many people stopped reading because of them

The World Serpent

Fantasy · OrdinaryHuman

MooseMax

2yr

Commented

Good so far, but place edit the overwhelming ammount of capital letters I almost every sentence and make is consistent ie Ancient Voice and in the next sentence it's Ancient voice... put only the important thing I capital letter like Fate or don't

ch 0 1 1-Choice

The World Serpent

Fantasy · OrdinaryHuman

MooseMax

2yr

Commented

about 10 points for one credit

- 29 credits.

The Tale of the Void Emperor

Fantasy · LivingVoid

MooseMax

2yr

Commented

the acceleration seems abit low for a "super duper scifi high tech" car

"…The Siebel Tuatara's exterior design takes its inspiration from a unique lizard. It comes equipped with a 7.0 litre, V8 supercharged turbo engine. It has a maximum horsepower of 1350 HP and a maximum speed of 443 kilometers per hour. It has a 0-100 acceleration capability of 2.78 seconds."

Reincarnation: Multi-skilled Goddess Is So Beautiful!

Urban · Prosperity Every Year

MooseMax

2yr

Commented

story 2 is better, but if you have time later on when the one you choose is completed then go for the other one, since both ate good ideas

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The Tale Of Kitsuna

Fantasy · TheRealSkollie

MooseMax

2yr

Commented

it good that he can't use them, he still Gör his memories, experience and understanding of cultivation and skills making it far easier to learn them and progress, but he won't have the really op skills that he remembered from his previous life

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Returning To The Cultivation World Through A Game

Eastern · Saubi1234

MooseMax

2yr

Commented

I had the computer downloading a game for almost 2 days.... and it failed once...

"It literally takes 30 minutes, I never downloaded that long." Said Qin Tian as he looked at the estimated download time.

Returning To The Cultivation World Through A Game

Eastern · Saubi1234

MooseMax

2yr

Commented

the event did seem really similar to that animes one... but nixe nonetheless

ch 95 The Monkey King

Chronicles of the Red Sovereign

Fantasy · Niche_Bezarius

MooseMax

2yr

Commented

you making a romance novel with kaito as the mc and the girl as the interest?

ch 285 A NORMAL GIRL

His Cute Wife is a Little Crazy

Urban · FrozenAngel

MooseMax

2yr

Commented

yes

Yes? No?

Rebirth of the Lady Sovereign

Fantasy · Dumpling_Aunt

MooseMax

2yr

Commented

I read the captains name as sparky or spooky, not spork...

Sitting to the side with a batch of soldiers in Spartan military uniform behind him, is Captain Spoky, the leader of this military base leisurely watching the cadets.