AtticusChea

20d

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This is a plot issue…yes Iron Island have slave but people tend to ignore them because of the culture of the Iron Island. However Tarth is different, and nothing can cover up the MC bought slaves…you think people on the Island wouldn’t snitch on you just because you make their life better? But the religion of the Seven doesn’t allow slaves so some of the religious zealots WILL snitch. And the MC is not strong enough to fight the might of the 6 kingdoms. This is such a big plot issue that ruin the story. It’s might be better if you explain that you bought slave but you free them and paid them for their work instead of saying that nobody gonna know because this is an island.

Most people on Tarth were extremely afraid of those large amounts of bees, so Galladon had to buy slaves from Myr to carry out the honey and further process it.

Game of Thrones: House of Tarth

TV · marcoo

AtticusChea

20d

Posted

It’s not bad but there is a big plot issue with the slaves…Westeros doesn’t accept anything that have to do with slaves. No selling and no buying slaves. So the fact that somehow the MC “bought” slaves doesn’t make sense.

Game of Thrones: House of Tarth

TV · marcoo

AtticusChea

24d

Commented

But this is a plot hole….because the MC is just an enhanced human…his Xgene is not activated. Professor X can tell the difference between human enhanced and Mutant, same with Beast if he have the MC DNA.

1: The MC gives his reasoning for acting like a mutant

AtticusChea

26d

Replied to lazyass911

Same, I basically guess that this will happen since the MC practice chakra at 5…This IS Konoha…Danzo and Sarutobi have eyes everywhere. It’s like the MC never watch “Naruto” Sorry Author, I like your other novels but I’m dropping this one. I’m not saying it is bad, it’s just not for me.

AtticusChea

27d

Commented

Plz don’t let the MC work with SHIELD.

And so, the wheels were set in motion will SHIELD approach Alex Arasaka, Is a partnership possible, could it shape the future of technology and espionage in ways never before imagined. Only time would tell what role Alex would play in the world of superheroes and secret agents.

Marvel in Between Flesh and Steel.

Movies · shinydecapod

AtticusChea

1mth

Commented

+1

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Marvel: Tech System

Anime & Comics · Unknown_To_All

AtticusChea

3mth

Commented

No…

A/N: Should i choose Chino Chinoike as part of his wife?

I Am Uchiha With A Son System

Anime & Comics · ZoroTraineeWriter

AtticusChea

4mth

Commented

4 is not a harem? I thought it's gonna be just 2 lovers, but 4 is a harem. Sometimes stories that are good was ruined by harem, because the author doesn't know what to write anything interesting with all those lovers. At some points it becomes a "to catch em all"

(A/N: Yeah Haruko Hyuga is the one of his future wife. I plan to do a polygamy but the limit is below then 4. I don't want this story turn into harem)

I Am Uchiha With A Son System

Anime & Comics · ZoroTraineeWriter

AtticusChea

7mth

Commented

what is your patreon? I can't find it

ch 76 HWI 76

Hollywood What If

Movies · pujimaki

AtticusChea

8mth

Replied to Just_for_fun1997

this is a translation, and the original only has 79 chapters so far, so don't expect much.

Sailing: The Kingdom Of God I Created Has Been Exposed!

Anime & Comics · Alex081904

AtticusChea

8mth

Commented

really? i think it below 6/10 for me, but to each their own.

Falcon and the Winter Soldier - 9/10

Savage: The Night Wizard - (A Harry Potter Fanfic)

Book&Literature · Se7en

AtticusChea

10mth

Replied to AtticusChea

I take it back, since this time she was not raise by the septa...so maybe this Sansa is better.

3)Sansa Stark(Maybe)

In Game Of Thrones World with LOTR system

Movies · Just_for_fun1997

AtticusChea

10mth

Commented

Sansa is a terrible choice.

3)Sansa Stark(Maybe)

In Game Of Thrones World with LOTR system

Movies · Just_for_fun1997

AtticusChea

10mth

Commented

3 chapters in a week... I didn't know Christmas came early this year 🥳

ch 23 The Melee pt 1

House of The Dragon: Dovahkiin

TV · Caio_Bernardo

AtticusChea

1yr

Commented

thank you for the chapter 🙏 I like this fic more than the GOT one I have to say.

ch 17 Chapter 16

SHAZAM in the Multiverse

Action · Sykocyrus

AtticusChea

1yr

Posted

The story goes downhill after chapter 18... The MC is way too smart (not in a good way) as every research of his can be accomplished in less than a week or two at the most. He can just take a quick look at ANY technology and boom 💥 he can perfect it and improve on it. Also, many of the MC plans don't make sense.

Marvel : The Bloodline Emphasis

Anime & Comics · Void_06

AtticusChea

1yr

Replied to AtticusChea

Updated after Chapter 15: Seriously I was hoping that the MC will get better over time but to my disappointment, he does not. The only thing I like about the MC is when he calls out Captain America for being a hypocrite. He keeps saying he is a God but also keeps reminding people that he can be killed. I'm sorry author, I don't want to talk badly about the novel...the concept was good but the way you portrayed the MC ruin this story.

The Treasurer: An MCU Insert

Movies · dukeofvirtue

AtticusChea

1yr

Commented

you have to take into account that at this point in time Hades hasn't been betrayed by Zeus yet...Current Hades and future Hades are different, something change when you live for ten thousand years with bitterness.

Hades hated his weakness more than anything at that time. There may be misgivings and bitterness between him and his siblings, but at the end of the day, they are his family. If his mother taught him anything, it was that you can't give up on your family, no matter what.

Percy Jackson : The Odyssey of a Primordial.

Book&Literature · Eren_fraser

AtticusChea

1yr

Posted

Really I don't like the MC's personality, at least for now (chapter 10) he is so indecisive and doesn't know what he wants to do. I know he's young and still naive but I hope he can grow out of his naivete quickly.

The Treasurer: An MCU Insert

Movies · dukeofvirtue

AtticusChea

1yr

Commented

Mycella has to be at least 12 years older than Atlas.

Tywin didn't bother saying anything, knowing that only good things would happen as long as she was with Will. The man was proven right when a week into their voyage Will walked in on Atlas and Myrcella fucking like animals.

Game of Thrones: The Uncrowned King

TV · GrimsReaper

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