Webnovel Author: DumplingJr - Fanfic Collection

I-I-I’m sorry did you just OwO me.

Dun worry bout it just do as much as you can.

It says caption rather than captain

I would stay away from there and not touch it with. 32 and a 1/2 foot pole as that place is a death trap when alexander comes by it due to the fact he has what was it 100k soldiers?

I honestly can’t see any of the insults attempted and failed otherwise, used in real life, I mean holy ****, I have never heard someone get insulted because of what kind of religion is around the area they come from. And really? “You better not bring a golden idol to class” really? I’m sure that you could’ve come up with a better insult then that also “Asian hicks” that... who actually used that as an insult, I know I know I am nit picking but, these guys are an insult to all bullies/classmates out there with those type of insults.

Its an unneeded comment

Ok, so I love the bookand all but I have one complaint, your using future knowledge where it really isn’t needed, theres no need to tell us irina will become a angel.

Wait, hol up, You were being sarcastic weren’t you. Internet sarcasm is hard.

Have you not been paying attention in your Geography class, no Italy IS A COUNTRY,

Good chapter but, its a little short. Btw, there really isn’t a need to explain who’s who at the bottom of the chapter, if people really want to know they’ll look it up on google.

“Lester”

Instead of phantasm species, wouldn’t it be Phantasmal Species? Unless I’m not englishing properly