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LakotaPhoenix

LakotaPhoenix

female LV 15

When you have “the world is on fire” moments every other day at your job, you tend to come to the very real conclusion that you HAVE to set up some private, personal time. I read to escape then.

2018-07-20 Joined United States

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*their limits

Although she kept this thought to herself the coincidences that happened in the test also concerned her. A mage from Roland academy would know there limits well when doing a test, she found it hard to believe that they would make a mistake and cause magic sickness. And with the bow, If a human tried to use pure strength to break a bow's string it would be near impossible.

My Dragon System

My Dragon System

Fantasy · JKSManga

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“It is time for us to journey towards Avion Academy. The journey will take…”

"To Future Avrion academy students, I am squire master Lancy. You must obey my commands at all times unless someone of higher rank intervenes. It is time for us to journey onwards towards Avrion Academy to journey will take about seven days."

My Dragon System

My Dragon System

Fantasy · JKSManga

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Honestly, this is the best written story I have seen on this site from a grammatical point of view. With that said, it has made the story a pleasure to read. I know a lot of people would complain about not having power levels, hierarchy and the world's background explained in advance, but.... I see this as a way to define an average author from a talented one. For he is writing from the MC's point of view and explains it as the MC finds out about it. Which helps break some of the predictable loops and traps seen in many other novels. Not to mention, it allows for further development of the story and creativity. The story itself starts off in what sounds like a Western-based fantasy world with magic and the common, run-of-the-mill "MC encounters trouble, then overcomes with their OPness" kind of strategy until they leave that country. Then you start seeing a more Eastern fantasy type of cultivation, but the Western-based magic is not completely forgotten and tags along the way. As the MC gets stronger, he is pulled into political intrigue, shadows of war, a hidden history of the world, and heavily guarded secrets... by this time, his general OPness is no longer as apparent as there is much, much more dangerous and powerful entities he is tip-toeing around. The character development of the MC really takes off later on in the novel as he matures and is not the typical arrogant, hot-blooded type that is prone to knee-jerk reactions and beating people at the drop of a hat. He is more of the patient, calculating type, which kind of leads him to feel a bit more like an anti-hero than a hero. The only complaint I have, is that there is quite a few days between chapters coming out. However, they are coming at a stable speed.
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