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  • Soul Between Lives

    Soul Between Lives

    Fantasy

    "Why can't I ever remember her when I'm awake?" Alex had been making love to this beautiful woman in his dreams for years now but always forgot her by the time he woke up. Tonight would prove a little bit different. He would start a journey beyond his mortal limits. ... This is a fantasy hybrid with parts that occasionally draw on and offer explanations for a few of the gaps or contradictions in some real-life mythology. This book does contain adult situations such as the occasional love scene and other mature thematic elements.

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Mystery Moon: I've got soul but I'm not a soldier~ View More
Release That Witch · C1212
8 months ago
See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon View More
It's Not Easy to Be a Man After Travelling to the Future · C192
8 months ago
See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon View More
Release That Witch · C1199
8 months ago
Thank you, I will do my best to improve my skills so I can better tell the story. As for the story's length, I don't want to reveal anything that could turn into a spoiler. Once again, thank you for your support. View More

fairywand: I have been reading your story from the beginning and you have been developing into a very creative story feller. With the material you have added regarding other characters, you have made the story more interesting. I am very interested in reading your story as it unfolds. I have noticed in some comments that people think the story is too long, well I disagree. This is a novel, actually, a trilogy in the making. I happen to like the length as I am someone who does not quake at ready trilogies or a book series with each book close to a thousand pages or more. Love the story so far.

Soul Between Lives · C0
9 months ago
Thank you. I suppose Alex's adventure is pretty rough so far. View More
Soul Between Lives · C39
9 months ago
I've been curious, do people get a bonus for being first or is it the distinction of beating everyone else lol? View More
Soul Between Lives · C40
9 months ago

KuralKing: I see.. the cube only works with microtransactions, probably made by EA.

Release That Witch · C1117
9 months ago
I like the part where she orders the Spartan men to put on the armor. I know your setting is a video game so you don't have to worry about being accurate in portraying their society which makes it nice to see when you are. It made me smile because Spartan women could get away with ordering Spartan males around because the women had a much higher social standing in Sparta than Athenian women had in Athens for example. Athenian women were hardly allowed outside of their home. Whereas Spartan women practically started running Spartan society according to the bit of research I've done. View More
Surviving in the Game · C3
9 months ago

neoarc: No one expect the Neverwinter inquisition. Even the church itself!!.

Release That Witch · C1092
9 months ago
I hope you continue the novel but you should prioritize your health. View More
Goddess of War (Dropped) · C0
9 months ago
I really like the amount of action in this chapter. It pulled me along and kept me reading. Now, feedback meant to be helpful, "while staring at her, with his dark brown eyes. He looked up at Ellen with his dark brown eyes and" It feels repetitive to mention his dark brown eyes twice. View More
Surviving in the Game · C1
9 months ago
I've started reading your story. I'll leave some feedback, excluding what you already know. I try to give both positive and negative feedback to balance out each of my comments when I can. View More

Forsaken123: Feel free to comment on my novel, but do not leave a review. 1 star or 5 stars. Just comment if you decide to do so.
Your grammar is godly compare to mine.
https://***.webnovel.com/book/12591697006035505/Surviving-in-the-Game

Soul Between Lives · C38
9 months ago
Thank you. The start of a story is very important to keep readers interested, so I seriously appreciate the feedback you've given me. I used to have Xinghai and the demoness' sections as a separate prologue but figured it would be ok to just make it all the same chapter. I'm going to make at least Xinghai's part back into a prologue and try to make the sequence of events more clear. View More

JoanB: First, Forsaken123 was the one who mentioned your story to me and shared the link straight to your Chapter 1. So, I really have no idea about what's written in the synopsis when I started reading. The sage part was really interesting but I got lost with the other two situations following it. I couldn't connect them to the sage's existence. Later, when I read the synopsis, there I realized your MC is not the sage. That's why I said make a prologue partly from your synopsis or part of your Chapter 1. It all depends on you. Just make a connection to the things happening. However, for me, the synopsis explained better on what to expect in the story.

Your first chapter is too long and a lot of things happening right away that has no connection to each other in my point of view as a reader. Cut the whole or add some connecting words like, "after 100 years, a result or part of the sage's plan, somewhere on earth blah blah blah." Just an example for I don't know about what happened next in the whole story. I hope this helps. Actually, your sentence structure and grammar are better than my works, but you just need to chunk things out properly.

Soul Between Lives · C38
9 months ago

JoanB: First, Forsaken123 was the one who mentioned your story to me and shared the link straight to your Chapter 1. So, I really have no idea about what's written in the synopsis when I started reading. The sage part was really interesting but I got lost with the other two situations following it. I couldn't connect them to the sage's existence. Later, when I read the synopsis, there I realized your MC is not the sage. That's why I said make a prologue partly from your synopsis or part of your Chapter 1. It all depends on you. Just make a connection to the things happening. However, for me, the synopsis explained better on what to expect in the story.

Your first chapter is too long and a lot of things happening right away that has no connection to each other in my point of view as a reader. Cut the whole or add some connecting words like, "after 100 years, a result or part of the sage's plan, somewhere on earth blah blah blah." Just an example for I don't know about what happened next in the whole story. I hope this helps. Actually, your sentence structure and grammar are better than my works, but you just need to chunk things out properly.

Soul Between Lives · C38
9 months ago
Oh yeah, no worries. The two biggest things I get from your feedback are that I need to work on my habit of using passive voice too much and to learn more about showing instead of telling. I'm going to go see if I can figure out how to download it for future reference. View More

Forsaken123: Enjoy? I think. I'm not really the nice person when I review stuff, but I made a real effort, so I hope you remain friendly.

Soul Between Lives · C38
9 months ago
Thanks in advance. *Grabs a bandaid before reading it* View More

Forsaken123: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ELXgluMTrfOWCGh-GzUWgqLgMQcnfZVhSi67MxT5P1E/edit?usp=sharing

This is a Dagger to the heart.

Soul Between Lives · C38
9 months ago
Please do. I only hope a thank you and any improvements in my writing are enough to return the favor. View More

Forsaken123: let me know if you want it xd, A like confused me it would take a decent amount of effort, so I wont do it unless you ask. =]

Soul Between Lives · C38
9 months ago
lol, evil has an important utility in society. At the very least it can teach us important lessons. So I will try to use and learn from what I can. Thank you for taking the time if you do. View More

Forsaken123: I will make a google document and leave you some comments if you are interested, but I warn you I am evil.

Soul Between Lives · C38
9 months ago

Forsaken123: I will make a google document and leave you some comments if you are interested, but I warn you I am evil.

Soul Between Lives · C38
9 months ago
Due to the general lack of comments before, I chose to be more specific. But I am open to any honest feedback. View More

Forsaken123: Are you looking for general input? I had thought you only wanted comments on continuity, so I did not give any input.

Soul Between Lives · C38
9 months ago
You're giving me good feedback and I am interested in improving my story. Do you mean I should expand upon the first bit of my synopsis in chapter 1 and move some of what's currently in the first chapter into a prologue within the auxiliary volume? Once again thank you for your feedback and for taking my story seriously. View More

JoanB: To the author: The story is interesting but too long for your first chapter. I think your synopsis should be in your auxiliary volume and in chapter 1. That will make things more interesting to read and follow through.

Soul Between Lives · C38
9 months ago
The pair of stones you left me spoke volumes lol. Thank you. View More

Forsaken123: I feel like leaving a comment, not sure what kind, so I did this.

Soul Between Lives · C38
9 months ago

Forsaken123: I feel like leaving a comment, not sure what kind, so I did this.

Soul Between Lives · C38
9 months ago

JoanB: To the author: The story is interesting but too long for your first chapter. I think your synopsis should be in your auxiliary volume and in chapter 1. That will make things more interesting to read and follow through.

Soul Between Lives · C38
9 months ago
Aww, he held back on teaching her the most important art, cooking. Thanks for the chapter. View More
Goddess of War (Dropped) · C0
9 months ago
That was a good chapter. Really helped me with my dry itchy eyes. *coughs* I look forward to more. View More
Goddess of War (Dropped) · C0
9 months ago

rioxx: He has the memories if the body's previous occupant but cant remember if he shot himself?

Lord of the Mysteries · C2
9 months ago

LoveMyself: Before he (orig owner) killed himself, the revolver will surely made a noise when it fired. Did't his sister or anyone heard the gunshot?

Lord of the Mysteries · C2
9 months ago
I'm wondering about some of the other things she'd do to train to become a ranger on her own. Such as, hunting and running through the forest as quickly and quietly as she could. I know this chapter was more about world building than character building but I'm still interested in her actions over the years since her adoption. Side note: This is good enough that I'll recommend it to someone I know. View More
Goddess of War (Dropped) · C0
9 months ago
I'm worried about the time frame of how much blood he'd have left from his severed hand to when he fought the last dark elf, but parents have been known to draw on hidden reserves of power to save their kids. Also, I like the balance of details and action you have in your fight scenes. View More
Goddess of War (Dropped) · C0
9 months ago
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