Webnovel Author: ikoyou - Novel Collection

I am writing this for the author, the story is very good but please remember periods and commas are your best friend, the grammar would be good if it wasn't for the missing periods and commas causing my eyes to bleed and causing lose of breath. Other then that keep up the good work.

I think this is one of the best story on this site, while most stories on this site can have there main characters replace with a block of wood with a face drawn on it and still be the same due to the character being bland, for example most characters are cold and merciless, while killing people there never seems to be anything that can stop them so the character never develops and so for 1000+ chapters it the same old thing happening i.e young master mess with MC then gets there hold clan murdered by MC, and then we never hear about that event again like it never happened. now this novel takes a more realistic look at this kind of story where the MC who is just a normal person at first is throw into a unknown world and is force to adapt, his personality doesn't just instantly change without a reason and her reacts to everything like a normal person would i.e afraid, cautious and confused. if you think about it this reaction make more sense than suddenly becoming a godly killing machine and all of this actions have a cause and affect to the story. my only complain is on the systems I wish the Writer would make more sense on what the system can do and explain more on the system so I can feel better know before hand that the system has some kind of ability instead of pulling it out of thin air. over all I think this is a excellent novel and I hope that Writer keep up the good work.